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Since I'm aiming for publication, let 'er rip.

As for the tense change, that is intentional. Just to let you know. It does sound a bit sloppy in the way I did it (I may even remove the entire first part and just elongate the second) but this is the first edit.

Edited by Pharoahe Monch
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