TLSothe Posted October 23, 2008 Share Posted October 23, 2008 Hanz is old and cranky.Matt has been mistaken for his own son. Weird. Yeah...General G is going ta hurt meh! I iz zcared! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Wright Posted October 23, 2008 Share Posted October 23, 2008 LOL, did you update TLS? I can't wait till next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted October 26, 2008 Share Posted October 26, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted October 26, 2008 Author Share Posted October 26, 2008 bump ill update this twice tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted October 26, 2008 Share Posted October 26, 2008 ill update this twice tomorrow SEXCOPTER *Terrorist fist jabs Gat* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted October 26, 2008 Author Share Posted October 26, 2008 oookay....*makes terrorist throw up his lungs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted October 26, 2008 Author Share Posted October 26, 2008 Chapter 4 --Binded by Destiny -- {The Drop Point | 12:00 Midnight | 20 years after present day} {Music} TLS: ok...now what was her name again? Blood Berry: Her name was...Abigail... TLS: *hides roses behind his back* THERE SHE IS!!! Abigail:...Toa Lord Sothe? TLS: that's me! Is there anything I can do for you? Abigail: I need you to join us. TLS: ...ill join anything with you... Blood Berry: with all due respect, milord...IF I HAD HANDS I WOULD FACE-PALM!!!! Abigail: ...er...yes...well...We are the Serenes Armed Forces…and when our time warp sensor went off...it told us you had arrived. TLS: you...you were waiting for me? *eyes glint* Abigail: *blushes* um...well you see...you are a key warrior in our strategic move against Bloody the Elf. TLS: Bloody...the Elf? Abigail:...I see that your completely clueless...here’s my car. Now get in. Were going to HQ. TLS: will my questions be answered there? Abigail: indeed, Toa Lord Sothe, indeed. {end Music} ----------------------- {General G’s Office | 1:05 pm | 30 years after present day} {Music} General G:...ahhh...Marcus...good of you to pay me a visit... Mathew: MY NAME IS FUCKING MATHEW!!!!!! General G: Marcus...stop it...im a tired man and I don't want to deal with this… Mathew: IM NOT LIEING!!! IM FROM THE PAST AND WAS SENT HERE AGAINST MY WILL BY DANDY THE ELF!!!! General G: *spins his chair around revealing a bald man with no facial hair whatsoever*....it cant be...NO!! *runs up to Mathew and looks at him closely* but...but you....how did...impossible!!! Mathew: BACK OFF YOU CREEP!! General G: it is you!!!!!! Its...its really you...*starts to cry* Mathew: *looks at the poor man*...your a sad, sad...rather big man....*looks at his belt and notices 2 golden revolvers...*...WAIT A TICK....GATRIE!!!!!! General Gatrie: Mathew... Mathew: can you tell me what the flying fuck is going on, brother? And what happened to your hair? General Gatrie: My hair....heh...well...you see....I...I-I... Mathew: today maybe? General Gatrie: .........im dieing Mathew....I was bitten by a Wolf Spaider...and the venom gave me the deadly Wolf Die virus....and losing one’s hair is the next to last symptom...I only have...a week left. Mathew: well...that sucks...now about this war-- Hanz: *busts in door* GENERAL!!! General Gatrie: WHAT?? Hanz: ITS MASU!! HE'S DOING IT!!! HE’S REALLY DOING IT!!!!!! General Gatrie: HOLY FUCKING GUACAMOLE!!! Mathew! Questions later! Come with me! *they run out the door* {music ends} ------------------------- {Top of Random Flaming Building at the base of Flame Spear | 8:30 pm | 40 years after present day} Cloaked man: I have been waiting Gatrie..... Gatrie: you have?....my...you look creepy..... Cloaked man: hahahaha....it has been a while since I last had a conversation....its nice..... Gatrie: who are you and why did you call me here? Cloaked man: who am I? ha....My name is...Rubicante {Music} ...and I am the overlord of all things burning...I have called you here so--- Gatrie: HOLD ON...you set everything on fire?? Rubicante: well....you see I was...yes...yes I did. Gatrie: you burned down Serenes.... Rubicante: I cannot deny it... Gatrie: *pulls out sword* then you will die for your sins... Rubicante: you know nothing of the sins ive committed!! HELL HOLDS NO SURPRISES FOR ME!!!!! *starts charging fire* I DO NOT WISH TO FIGHT...BUT IF A BLADE IS DRAWN ON ME THEN IT LEAVES ME NO CHOICE!!! Gatrie: you burned my home to the ground...RUBICANTE!! FOR THIS...FOR THIS YOU WILL PAY!!!!!!!!! *Gatrie learned Blitz and Flood* Rubicante: COME! I WILL HEAL YOUR WOUNDS....FACE ME AT FULL STRENGTH!!!!!!! {music ends} To be continued Chapter 5 --Means to an End-- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted October 26, 2008 Share Posted October 26, 2008 DYING?!!?!?!?!?!? NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted October 26, 2008 Author Share Posted October 26, 2008 Chapter 5 --Means to an End-- {Serenes Armed Forces HQ | 3:00 am | 20 years after present day} Abiagail: *ahem* We now bring this meeting to order… TLS: but…its just the two of us.... Abigail: blast!!! Where is he??? *woman rushes in the door, she looks familiar to TLS* Woman: ABIGAIL!! TERRIBLE NEWS!!!!!!!!! Abigail: don’t tell me... Woman: ...Lyle...he’s...he...he fell... Abigail: ....WHO? WHO DID IT? Woman: ...it was...Revelation, Paradox, and Hellfire...they struck him down. I saw it myself. Abigail: and CGV? CGV: right here! Damn it sis....you gotta wait for me...I cant run as fast as you. Fox: im sorry...we failed...the Deathly Trinity has wiped the floor with us… CGV: not true. I managed to kill Hika and Princess when I tried to block their path with an avalanche. Abigail:.....this is...impossible. We have no choice. Our only hope lies within...TLS. Fox: TLS???? TLS!!! I DIDN’T NOTICE YOU!!! CGV:...TLS...hmph...its about time. TLS: Whats going on here? Blood Berry: allow me sire...these folks have been fighting the ruler of Serenes City, Bloody the Elf. TLS: hold…Bloody the Elf? Blood Berry: Dandy the Elf’s true name. From what I have learned...Abigail here is the leader of The Arms of Serenes. A resistance group...the original members were.... Abigail: FEFL, Lyle Dayek, me, CGV, Fox,...and...Candy Pain. But now its just me, Fox, and CGV...everyone has already died in combat…against Bloody’s brainwashed minions...the people who used to be our brothers and sisters... TLS: ...that’s horrible. Wait...Candy and Feffle are dead? Blood Berry: ......ugh...... Abigail: *glances at blood berry with a concerned look on her face* yes. All dead. Its up to you now. TLS: but why me? Fox: were being watched whenever we are out and about. CGV: the enemy has yet to know that you have arrived. TLS:...whats the plan? Abigail: the enemy is currently looking for a special tome called the book of summons. Its underground lost in the endless labrynth. If you find it...we will all be saved. TLS: GOTCHA!! ILL BE BACK IN 2 HOURS!!! *grabs Blood Berry* *exits* Abigail: NO!! TLS!! STOP!!! {Music} ------------------- {Sons of the Lord HQ entrance | 1:10 pm | 30 years after present day} General Gatrie: NO!! MASU!! YOU MUST STOP!!! Mathew: wat in the name of... *sees a giant 6 story tall spider attacking multiple soldiers...then he notices MaSu standing there...on fire.* MaSu: SORRY GENERAL!! THIS TIME...I GO OUT IN STYLE!!! ...REXFLAME!!!! *Masu engulfs the Grandaddy Giga Legs in fire* Grandaddy Giga Legs: SCRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!! MaSu: ...almost...almost...DO YOU SEE THIS EVERYONE??? FIRE!! FIRE IS THEIR WEAK POINT!! FIRE...FIRE...FIREEEEEEEEE!!!! ...RRRRRREXFLAME!!!! General Gatrie: it cant be...he’s...he’s doing it. Hanz: WHOOOOO CMON MASU!!! Grandaddy Giga Legs: HRAAAAAAAAAAHAHHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAAA!! MaSu: THIS IS THE END!!! *his nose starts to bleed...* FOR BOTH OF US!!! Mathew: this is madness... MaSu: THIS. IS. SERENES!!!!! *suddenly both the Grandaddy Giga Legs and MaSu explode. *Mathew passes out from sheer epic ness...plus the overwhelming amount of blood didn’t help any* Hanz: what are we going to do with you? General Gatrie: ...take him to my office...when he comes to...ill tell him everything. Hanz: and...and MaSu? General Gatrie: *sigh* He was a good friend. One of my best. But...he gave us a way out of this war. Fire. Chiki!! Chiki: Yes general? General Gatrie: take out the flame throwers. We have a tome to recover... Chiki: yes sir. Right away sir. {end music} ---------------------- {Top of Random Flaming Building at the base of Flame Spear | 9:30 pm | 40 years after present day} Gatrie: your...your good. Where did you learn to fight like that? Rubicante: ...over the years you pick stuff up. You know? Will you at least hear me out? Gatrie: ok...but then you die. Rubicante: Ever heard of...the book of summons? Gatrie: once or twice. It was said to be buried beneath Serenes. Rubicante: I am a creation of that book. I was brought upon this world...by a certain group of resistance fighters...I was meant to torch it. My purpose was to kill everything. So that the world may start fresh and new. Gatrie: so. Ok. You killed everyone. I know that. Rubicante: You don’t understand...10 years ago...this city was engulfed in war. A war between human and insect. When it was learned that fire was their weak point...I was called upon to kill anything and everything not flame resistant...unfortunately...that also meant the humans themselves. But they knew this. And summoned me anyway. Gatrie: so. The bad guys were the insects? Rubicante: yes. The insects were also a product of the book of summons. It was Bloody the Elf who was responsible for that. Gatrie: so why are you still here? Rubicante: Bloody still has the book and continues to summon more demonic insects. I almost had him yesterday...but he cast a time warp and went back in time; yelling: I WILL DESTROY YOU ALL!!! Im guessing that’s why you’re here. Because he escaped back in time and teleported you, Mathew, and TLS into separate times. Gatrie: but how do you know--- Rubicante: will you help me? Gatrie: what? Rubicante: will you help me destroy Bloody the Elf? Gatrie: I...of course. Im sorry I misunderstood your reasons. Rubicante: haha…its ok. You remind me of myself when I was younger...NOW ENOUGH IDLE CHATTER!! WE SEARCH FOR BLOODY THE ELF!!! {end music} To be continued Next time: Chapter 6 --A Lost Cause-- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted October 26, 2008 Share Posted October 26, 2008 ...I passed out. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted October 27, 2008 Share Posted October 27, 2008 Epicness, but...Princess, Feffle, Lyle, Candy, Masu and soon Old Gatrie are DEAD. That blows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted October 29, 2008 Author Share Posted October 29, 2008 Epicness, but...Princess, Feffle, Lyle, Candy, Masu and soon Old Gatrie are DEAD.That blows. spoiler: everyone dies...im not joking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted October 29, 2008 Share Posted October 29, 2008 spoiler: everyone dies...im not joking *Sadface* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted October 29, 2008 Author Share Posted October 29, 2008 *Sadface* *points at word paradox* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted October 29, 2008 Share Posted October 29, 2008 *points at word paradox* Ahhh...anyway, I'll PM you some moar ideas, but nao I must get meh Taco Rollz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted October 29, 2008 Share Posted October 29, 2008 *COUGH*UPDATEYOURSTORYNAODOITNOW*COUGH* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted October 30, 2008 Author Share Posted October 30, 2008 *COUGH*UPDATEYOURSTORYNAODOITNOW*COUGH* IM WORKING ON IT!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted October 30, 2008 Share Posted October 30, 2008 IM WORKING ON IT!!!!! Sorry, I was just venting meh Nerd Rage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted October 31, 2008 Author Share Posted October 31, 2008 Chapter 6 --A Lost Cause-- {Serenes Underground Labrynth | 12:00 midnight | 20 years after present day} TLS: Blood Berry...scan for baddies. Blood Berry: scanning.......nope nothing....wait....LOOK!! TLS: is that...light....? Blood Berry: its the book!! WE FOUND IT!! IT THE BOOK OF SUMMONS!!!! *tls runs over to the book* TLS: but....wait....*looks closer to see that its just a playboy* ITS A TRAP!!!!! {music ends} Blood Berry: ohh...crunch... *suddenly 3 men detatch themselves from the wall to reveal mechanized bodies* Revelation: TIS I!! REVELATION!!! Paradox: WHAT UP BRO?? ITS A ME!! PARADOX!! Hellfire: And I *skhee* Am called *skhee* Hellfire...*skhee* TLS: WHAT...WHAT THE HELL???? *turn's blood berry's lightsaber on* Hellfire: A BEAM KATANA *skhee* ahh....well then!!! *turns his cloaking camo off* TLS: what are you doing? i can see you now!!!! *lunges* Hellfire: I WANT YOU *skhee* TO SEE THE FACE *skhee* OF THE ONE WHO KILLS YOU!!! ????????????????????????????: HAHAH...OHOHO...EHEHEEEEHEHEE....now now now...lets not...blow this outta proportion here... Hellfire: ahhh...yes...milord, Bloody *skhee* Bloody the Elf: now then....where is the boy...oh there he is!!! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! IM SORRY...ITS JUST SO FUCKIN' FUNNY!! TLS: you need help, Dandy.... Bloody the Elf: oho! Do I now?.....hey,hey,hey....*pulls out knife* why so serious?....lets put a smile on that face...eh? Do you wanna know how I got these scars? TLS: YOU CREEP!!! *cuts Bloody's hand off with blood berry and runs* Bloody the Elf: haaahhhh...haaaaahhh....hahaAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!!!! WELL? WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR??? KILL HIM!!!!...once he is killed...oho...none will stand in my way....at least...now that the Book of Summons is mine.... Hellfire: CHASE HIM!!! Paradox: YES MAH BRO!! Revelation: At your command... {end music} -------------- {General Gatrie's Office | 3:00 pm | 30 years after present day} Matthew: so...you want me to smuggle some book out from under some fucker's nose? General Gatrie: yes. Only you can do it. Matthew: ok...just checking....when do I leave? General Gatrie: in 2 hours. I know you havn't rested much...but this needs to be done. Matthew: ill go get ready. General Gatrie: youll find a flamethrower, a flame lance, and some bug spray on your bunk. It will be helpfull...im sure... Matthew: what will my transportation be on? General Gatrie: the only reliable one, nowadays... Matthew: which will be... General Gatrie:....Chocobo. Matthew: RAWK!! ILL GO GET READY!!!!!!....oh and hey...where's Candy? General Gatrie: she...she is no more..... Matthew: ....oh...i...i see....ok Ill go get ready...i leave in 3 hours!!! *leaves* General Gatrie: GOOD LUCK AND GODSPEED!!.....oh Candy....will you ever forgive me......? {end music} -------------- {Valley of Sorrow | 11:30 pm | 40 years after present day} Gatrie: Rubicante...Is this place always so sad? Rubicante: Yes...it has been...for 40 years. Ever since the forest was leveled...and the city was erected. Gatrie: and how do you know this? Rubicante: Books....sometimes I read before I burn.... Gatrie: And how do you know that Matt, TLS, and I were sent across time? Rubicante: I was human once... Gatrie: What? Rubicante: I once had a family....a little girl...a wife... Gatrie: *remembers Candy* oh...yeah...what happened to them? Rubicante: I....I....I killed them....I wasn't myself....I didnt mean to do it...but...I killed them... Gatrie: thats...THATS HORRIBLE!!!! Rubicante: I...I had no choice in the matter...my mind was not my own. Gatrie: BUT YOU STILL HAVE A CHOICE!!! Rubicante: DONT PRETEND TO KNOW WHAT YOUR TALKING ABOUT!!! YOU DONT! Gatrie: but...*sigh* I guess...i dont understand... Rubicante: ...you'll understand someday...when your older... Gatrie: ...I believe you...I dont have a reason too...but I do. Rubicante: you'd be fucking insane if you didnt believe me... Gatrie: WHAT?----huh? Rubicante: hold...enemies are watching us.... Gatrie: I had the same feeling... Rubicante: ...haha...I guess great minds think alike...Here....ill set up camp for the night. Gatrie: ok....(Rubicante....who are you, really?) {end music} to be continued next time: Chapter 7 --The Book of Summons-- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted October 31, 2008 Share Posted October 31, 2008 JOKER REFERENCE AND EMO RUBICANTE!!!!!!!!!!11 WINWINWINWIN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted October 31, 2008 Author Share Posted October 31, 2008 JOKER REFERENCE AND EMO RUBICANTE!!!!!!!!!!11WINWINWINWIN lol.....i knew it would work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted October 31, 2008 Share Posted October 31, 2008 lol.....i knew it would work Also I liked the Custom Robo, judging by your Kilvas art I'd guess your a fan? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted October 31, 2008 Author Share Posted October 31, 2008 Also I liked the Custom Robo, judging by your Kilvas art I'd guess your a fan? thats not kilvas art... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted October 31, 2008 Share Posted October 31, 2008 thats not kilvas art... No, I remember a while back you had Kilvas Art that looked like the hero in custom robo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted October 31, 2008 Author Share Posted October 31, 2008 No, I remember a while back you had Kilvas Art that looked like the hero in custom robo. custom robo makes me orgasmic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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