SmoochLips Posted August 19, 2017 Share Posted August 19, 2017 So I recently made these sprites and I just wanted some feedback on them to see how good or not so good they are. Image 1 Spoiler Image 2 Spoiler Image 3 Spoiler Sorry no battle sprite done yet. Thanks all feedback is appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SatsumaFSoysoy Posted August 19, 2017 Share Posted August 19, 2017 I like the second one. The first one is alright, the last one's mouth seems to be somewhat pixelated or something. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enaluxeme Posted August 19, 2017 Share Posted August 19, 2017 I really like the first. The only problem with it is that the neck is just too long. The second is just Tirado, so I don't know what's there even to rate. The third one can definitely be improved: the mouth is weird and the palette for the hairs is all messed up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Florina's #1 Fan Posted September 9, 2017 Share Posted September 9, 2017 I like the first one a lot. The neck is a little long, though. The first one looks really edited. The beard looks too blurry, kind of looks like you dragged and dropped a beard on. The third one has a messy mouth and it looks like the hairbands are bleeding into the hair. I would outline the hairbands better and change the hair color so you can see the outline of the hairbands. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KKAfterbrun Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 The first one looks the cleanest, but I agree that the neck is too long. (Unless he's a teenaged Giraffe) The second one needs a touch of shading around and on the sideburns. The third needs the most work. The hair needs better shading, the mouth looks a little wonky and the shoulder guard is too big for the body. I would recommend to remove the belt like part and show more of the tunic underneath. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tosho Posted September 28, 2017 Share Posted September 28, 2017 First one looks like it had the most work done on it. Second and third are a tad too vibrant with the color palettes, more so in the portraits rather than the battle sprites. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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