Metal Rabbit Posted October 29, 2008 Share Posted October 29, 2008 Alright, I'm gonna post 3 new ones by saturday. I'm behind in that... This also means I want you commenting here and not the other topic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiba Posted October 29, 2008 Share Posted October 29, 2008 I knew this one was coming, how many chapters are there, I need to catch up, since I only read like 3 chapters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted October 30, 2008 Share Posted October 30, 2008 This story is great! I read the latest chapter, it's becoming better and better as you progress, Arc! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Rabbit Posted October 30, 2008 Author Share Posted October 30, 2008 I knew this one was coming, how many chapters are there, I need to catch up, since I only read like 3 chapters There are 4 complete chapters up. Chapter 5 still has a good way until it's done. This story is great!I read the latest chapter, it's becoming better and better as you progress, Arc! I'm suprised you're not suprised, considering what happens in that new part. :o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted November 2, 2008 Share Posted November 2, 2008 ...Shit. I forgot to do that review, and accidently posted in the topic thread... Damn. Anyway...This story is wonderful, and I'll do that review asap. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Rabbit Posted November 2, 2008 Author Share Posted November 2, 2008 It's not done yet :o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted November 2, 2008 Share Posted November 2, 2008 You wanted one for the first story arc, or something. Right? Or is the first arc not even done yet; in which case I'll have less to rush on for now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Rabbit Posted November 2, 2008 Author Share Posted November 2, 2008 I'm just saying there's two more parts to chapter 5 to be posted this week. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted November 2, 2008 Share Posted November 2, 2008 Oh! Lol, well somehow I doubt two parts are going to epically change the way I review it, but I'll wait. XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Rabbit Posted November 4, 2008 Author Share Posted November 4, 2008 Just to clarify: There is NOT a fight at the end of this new one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted November 4, 2008 Share Posted November 4, 2008 That was awesome, Arc. Tyrannosauruses are totally awesome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Rabbit Posted November 6, 2008 Author Share Posted November 6, 2008 Tommorow I'll post the last real part, ending the first arc. If you don't find it epic then I may as well stop writing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted November 6, 2008 Share Posted November 6, 2008 I find everything you write epic. I never said that to you, but...I do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Rabbit Posted November 6, 2008 Author Share Posted November 6, 2008 I'm so confident in it as the writer that I know it will be. Thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted November 6, 2008 Share Posted November 6, 2008 No problem! =D And, once you end the first arc, I'll (Hopefully) have the review up shortly after. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Rabbit Posted November 8, 2008 Author Share Posted November 8, 2008 (edited) I finished the filler... making the first 5 chapters totally done. Also, this is one instance where I expect feedback. I'll consider the review feedback Matt. Edited November 8, 2008 by Adam Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted November 9, 2008 Share Posted November 9, 2008 Characterization: 9.8 Aaron, Taitlin, Drill, and Louie were the units I felt weren't on enough. They have, however, been on alot more often. Increasing Characterization. All characters have good, differing personalities. Plot: 9.9 I think I may be addicted to this story! Every time you update, the first thing I do is read it. The plot-line is plain-out wonderful. Length: 9.6 Length isn't bad at all, actually. I like it! Parts aren't -that- long, but they're long enough to keep me happy! : D Readability: 9.7 Very easy to understand, but it doesn't lose any of its awesomesauce. Action: 9.3 The action is getting better too! More, and more action. The fight-scenes are extremely well written. Cast: 9.6 It has a nice full cast, with original characters, who are NOT SF members, which is a nice change, despite the fact that I like SF member filled stories too, a change is always good. An extra .3 or so given, mainly because the cast, though it has not changed too much, is now more active, I suppose. Genre: 9.9 I swear, this is one of the most enjoyable story types. I grow bored of the Swords and shit of medieval, a Sci-Fi type story is always good. Humor: 11.00 I know the normal is only to give AT MAX ten, but the humor here deserves bonus points! =D Tatsui is hilarious! Overall: 10.2 I told you you needed to work on a few areas, and you did! It's probably the best story here. Sorry if it seems more retarded than the last one. I'm a bit tired. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Rabbit Posted November 14, 2008 Author Share Posted November 14, 2008 Ack... I shouldn't have posted the next part yet. But I'm caught between re-writing the old and writing the new. I'm a bit mixed up right now. At the very least, chapter 6 is written. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Rabbit Posted November 28, 2008 Author Share Posted November 28, 2008 Use this topic to talk about it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Rabbit Posted January 11, 2009 Author Share Posted January 11, 2009 I'm going back to writing after my semester exams. I've just been on a long break, it has nothing to do with school but it just feels like a nice time to resume. Nothing will be posted until spring time, and it may actually be finished by then. :o Also, I'll have both script format (for newer ones) and standard story format which will take longer to transfer. At least this way both sides can be happy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted January 11, 2009 Share Posted January 11, 2009 Glad ye' be back to writin' soon, matey. *waits till spring* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Rabbit Posted January 11, 2009 Author Share Posted January 11, 2009 My loyal readers are an exception. If you request it, I can show you the next few chapters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted January 11, 2009 Share Posted January 11, 2009 My loyal readers are an exception.If you request it, I can show you the next few chapters. Ya want me ta' ask in a PM, Matey? *Is Matt* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Rabbit Posted January 11, 2009 Author Share Posted January 11, 2009 Ya want me ta' ask in a PM, Matey? *Is Matt* I'll PM it to you. And I can spot your ass in a police lineup. That didn't come out right. >_< Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted January 11, 2009 Share Posted January 11, 2009 I'll PM it to you.And I can spot your ass in a police lineup. That didn't come out right. >_< My ass can spot you in a police lineup too! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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