Heir of Dragons and Beasts Posted February 14, 2020 Posted February 14, 2020 So tell me what you think so far And your ideas if you have any @Benice @Sir Wolfram of Vallora @Von Ithipathachai @Dragoncat @Goddess Serra
Benice Posted February 14, 2020 Posted February 14, 2020 I like the idea; you've certainly got the characters fleshed out well. Why does your main character leave the city? I assume you've got that figured out. Also, one last little side note, sacred Aether is supposed to be light/dark magic, but both sacred and aether are "light" terms or spells. Perhaps Dark Aether or Shadow Aether could work better. It's mostly up to you on that. It's a very interesting concept, and I can't wait to hear more about it! (To make things easier, could you please put in a link to the non-feedback thread?)
Dragoncat Posted February 14, 2020 Posted February 14, 2020 Oh, I thought this was gonna be story/narrative. I really can't say much here until you write more, but it's a good start.
Von Ithipathachai Posted February 15, 2020 Posted February 15, 2020 Weren't you doing another thing called Song of Oblivion? Has that already been abandoned?
Dragoncat Posted February 16, 2020 Posted February 16, 2020 On 2/14/2020 at 7:15 PM, Von Ithipathachai said: Weren't you doing another thing called Song of Oblivion? Has that already been abandoned? I think this is the same only retitled.
Heir of Dragons and Beasts Posted February 17, 2020 Author Posted February 17, 2020 No I'm still working on Song of Oblivion this is apart of the saga Part 1: Song of Oblivion Part 2: Goddess's Lament(takes place at the exact same time as SoO) Part 3: Priestess of Shadows(Children take over)
Dragoncat Posted February 17, 2020 Posted February 17, 2020 Right, for the poll. I can't decide! Can you tell me more about her to help me? What are her goals, her personality? What is her backstory, how has she interacted with mortals or has she? She can very well be both a goddess and a dragon.
Heir of Dragons and Beasts Posted February 18, 2020 Author Posted February 18, 2020 21 hours ago, Dragoncat said: Right, for the poll. I can't decide! Can you tell me more about her to help me? What are her goals, her personality? What is her backstory, how has she interacted with mortals or has she? She can very well be both a goddess and a dragon. Yeah, sure I'll pm you
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