Blue Knight Posted July 6, 2008 Share Posted July 6, 2008 Well im trying to debate on wether fox and bianchi meet lyle and masu the next chapter or later. I pulled 2 nights in a row staying up till 4 am and waking up for work 3 hours later and now its 1 am so im pretty beat. I dont work till 4:30 in the afternoon tomorrow and im off on monday so i can get a crap load of chapters up by then but as for tonight.....well im feeling a bit beat and i dont wanna rush a half assed chapter.....do you guys think i should have fox and bianchi confront lyle and masu this coming up chapter? (i was thinking of just doing a short chapter of Masu talking about what happened) yes throw it in but you need to have no battle or us lose badly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 6, 2008 Share Posted July 6, 2008 Well im trying to debate on wether fox and bianchi meet lyle and masu the next chapter or later. I pulled 2 nights in a row staying up till 4 am and waking up for work 3 hours later and now its 1 am so im pretty beat. I dont work till 4:30 in the afternoon tomorrow and im off on monday so i can get a crap load of chapters up by then but as for tonight.....well im feeling a bit beat and i dont wanna rush a half assed chapter.....do you guys think i should have fox and bianchi confront lyle and masu this coming up chapter? (i was thinking of just doing a short chapter of Masu talking about what happened) Well, I wouldn't want to run your story, but I'd have Masu, Songbird, and Lyle talk about the whole experience, and then at the end of the chapter introduce Fox and Bianchi. That way, with the three of them, you can still make the baddies seem strong cause they took on three people, but you can also show the bad-assness of one of your other characters like, oh I dunno, Lyle? What I would do, is have Lyle try to protect the two of them, but get pretty torn up by Fox and Bianchi, then when all hope seems lost, enter the griel mercenaries. Thus, Fox and Bianchi flee, as they cannot take such a large amount of foes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desdemona Posted July 6, 2008 Share Posted July 6, 2008 (edited) Another entertaining (and informative) chapter! Can't wait to read the next one! Edited July 6, 2008 by Desdemona Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted July 6, 2008 Share Posted July 6, 2008 Well, I wouldn't want to run your story, but I'd have Masu, Songbird, and Lyle talk about the whole experience, and then at the end of the chapter introduce Fox and Bianchi. That way, with the three of them, you can still make the baddies seem strong cause they took on three people, but you can also show the bad-assness of one of your other characters like, oh I dunno, Lyle? What I would do, is have Lyle try to protect the two of them, but get pretty torn up by Fox and Bianchi, then when all hope seems lost, enter the griel mercenaries. Thus, Fox and Bianchi flee, as they cannot take such a large amount of foes. You are phsycic. I was thinking of the same thing but without songbird since me and you are deep in the forest alone. But then they could see my magic and rush towards the scene. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hibari Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Nice work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Not how I would have done it, but hey, I'm not writing it. Good job Masu. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Not how I would have done it, but hey, I'm not writing it.Good job Masu. R U THE WRITER!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!! *burns lyle* Nah im kidding. But i was angry that the page refreshed itself after i typed a better version up to the point where songbird showed up. But it was first thing in the morning so I went "Eff it" and summed it up quickly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songbird Posted July 7, 2008 Author Share Posted July 7, 2008 telling sis to stop trying to ride the horse I lol'd. And yay, I'm stabbed again in this chapter! By Master Bianchi, too! Anyway, it was awesome to hear our side of things. And it seems like there's going to be an awesome battle next chapter, so I'm looking forward to it. =D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 I lol'd.And yay, I'm stabbed again in this chapter! By Master Bianchi, too! Anyway, it was awesome to hear our side of things. And it seems like there's going to be an awesome battle next chapter, so I'm looking forward to it. =D LOL MOAR LIKE "EPIC KICK THE SHIT OUT OF MASU IN 2 SECS BIANCHI ATTACK" Uhhh....WARNING SPOILERS!? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 That was great! Lol, Moldy Onions. XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 That was great! Lol, Moldy Onions. XD I went to your page before i started writing and i remembered your "MOLDY ONIONS!" taunt so i used it! XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 I went to your page before i started writing and i remembered your "MOLDY ONIONS!" taunt so i used it! XD Lol, I love that line. =P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Lol, I love that line. =P Its why i put it in since you havent shown up yet! XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cymbeline Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Wow and ouch is all I can say. I shall be awaiting the next chapter eagerly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desdemona Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Wow...it's getting very interesting... Next chapter! XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 I'll have at least one more (maybe 2) chapters up before i go to bed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desdemona Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 I'll have at least one more (maybe 2) chapters up before i go to bed. Yes! I can't wait! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Yes! I can't wait! But it wont be soon. Im going out with friends in an hour. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cymbeline Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 (edited) Ah. . . Come back soon. I have nothing to do today. *blames friends* Edited July 7, 2008 by Cymbeline Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desdemona Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 But it wont be soon. Im going out with friends in an hour. I guess I'll have to wait, huh? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Ah. . . Come back soon. I have nothing to do today. *blames friends* Same here. Cept I blame my cell phone cause the battery sucks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Damn. Always when it gets good..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Yay! Epic! =D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Damn. Always when it gets good..... Yay! Epic! =D Thanks to both of you! But i must leave now but I should be back at like 7-8. Then i'll write more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Thanks to both of you! But i must leave now but I should be back at like 7-8. Then i'll write more. Awesomness, I need to work on my fanfic....lol, neglect... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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