Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 12, 2008 Author Share Posted September 12, 2008 Good . . .good!When am I going to arrive on scene? SPOILER Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 12, 2008 Author Share Posted September 12, 2008 (edited) Chapter 5 (Skyworld) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O0jvH-eYvKg Pit: Weird I don't see any Primid... *Suddenly the Halberd flies out of the Clouds* Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dClKAO6QU6Q Pit: Wow...They couldn't have timed that better. *3 Primid Spawn and start attacking Pit* Pit: YIYIYIYIYIYIYIYIYAH!!!!!!! *Pit uses his Side-B* *2 Primid are cut in half, the other one caught in the spinning blades* Pit: Ha! Your not ready yet. Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9PJfqsvrUug Pit: Hey what's that? *Two Overall clad legs are sticking out of the ground* Pit: What the? ???: HEY A VOICE! Pit: GAH!!! ???: COULD YOU-A HELP ME OUT OF HERE! Pit: Wha? ???: COME ON HELP A BROTHER OUT! Pit: Uhm...*Pulls the Legs out of the ground* ???: Alright Let's-a go! Pit: Wow...There was person attached to those... ???: OH MAMA MIA!!!! Pit: What? ???: Your an Angel! I'm dead aren't I? Pit: I don't know...I'm not sure... ???: Is there a way to-a find out-a? Pit: Well you could walk into that wall? ???: Oh and if I'm dead I walk-a through it. Pit: Yeah...Say what's your name? ???: Mario... Pit: Alright Mario just walk into the wall. Mario: Alright *Walks up to wall* Mario: Ugh... Pit: HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Mario: What's so funny? Pit: I knew you weren't dead I was just jerking your proverbial chain. Mario: How am I in heaven then? Pit: Your not...This isn't heaven. Mario: How did I even-a get here? Pit: That was my next question. Mario: I remember being hit-a by a canonball but... Mario: OH SNAP! Pit: What is it? Mario: I LEFT-A PEACH!!!! Pit: Who? Mario: The Princess! Pit: What? Mario: I didn't deactivate-a the bomb and now everone is-a dead! Pit: Sorry... Mario: Oh what do you know ypu haven't been in a game for 20 years... _________________________________________ (F-Zero GP) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yhUrWv3c63Y Announcer: ALRIGHT CAPTAIN FALCON ROUNDS THE TURN FOR HIS FINAL LAP! Announcer: BLOOD FALCON AND C.FALCON ARE NECK AND NECK AS THEY NEAR THE FINISH LINE!!!!! Announcer: AND IN A SWIFT KICK TO THE BALLS OF DISBELIEF BLOOD FALCON PULLS AHEAD!!! Crowd: BOO BOO BOO!!!! Announcer: BLOOD ROUNDS THE LAST TURN HE'S IN THE FINAL STRETCH AND BLOOD FALCON IS THE WINNER!!! Announcer: CAPTAIN FALCON IN SECOND, JODY SUMMER IN THIRD!!!! *Down in the Pit* Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nX9HNQfUCAg C.Falcon: Where is that Space Pirate I captured I need something to Falcon Punch. Pit-Robot: Yes sir I will go retrieve him. *F-Zero TV guy enters* Reporter: Mr. Falcon can I ask you some questions? C.Falcon: I always have Time for my fans. Reporter: Mr. Falcon Is it true that you haven't had a good bounty in over a month? C.Falcon: Well it is a little slow... Reporter: Is it also true that you haven't won ONE race in over a year? C.Falcon: Uh...Well... Reporter: Is it true that, your considering retirement? C.Falcon: NOW LISTEN HERE!!! Pit-Robot: Mr.Falcon the Galactic Federation just issued a bounty on Samus Aran C.Falcon: Samus? Pit-Robot: Yes. C.Falcon: Excuse me reporter man, I have a bounty to get. To be Continued... Edited September 12, 2008 by Toa Lord Sothe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noremaC Posted September 12, 2008 Share Posted September 12, 2008 YAY update!!!!!!!!!can't wait for me to die :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 12, 2008 Author Share Posted September 12, 2008 YAY update!!!!!!!!!can't wait for me to die :D Your weird. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noremaC Posted September 12, 2008 Share Posted September 12, 2008 Your weird. yes,yes i am weird. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Wright Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 Faclon just got dissed lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 13, 2008 Author Share Posted September 13, 2008 (edited) So... Anyway next chapter is done so that will be up tomorrow. (Masu falls in with some Space Pirates and Noremac makes his first apearence) Edited September 13, 2008 by Toa Lord Sothe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Wright Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 So...Anyway next chapter is done so that will be up tomorrow. (Masu falls in with some Space Pirates and Noremac makes his first apearence) Fixed!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 13, 2008 Author Share Posted September 13, 2008 Fixed!!!!! Nce save. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Wright Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 I got your back.... Now we have to get rid of the people who quote just to see it.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 13, 2008 Author Share Posted September 13, 2008 I got your back....Now we have to get rid of the people who quote just to see it.... I have no problem, they want to spoil that is FINE for them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 *Cough* Nice chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 13, 2008 Author Share Posted September 13, 2008 (edited) Chapter 6 (On the road to the former Stadium) Music: Masu: Hey Chris where are we headed? Chris: to the Stadium. Princess: Wait didn't that get NUKED! Chris: Kind of, It was drawn into Subspace. Branded: Subspace? Chris: Princess you wanna take this one? Music: Princess: Neasala told me about "The Subspace" they're a group of monsters who want nothing but to draw the world into an alternate zone called Subspace. Masu: WHAT!!! Branded: Why haven't anyone else heard of this? Princess: It was only revealed to the Goldoan King by the Godess, He then passed it to other Laguz Kings. Masu: What? Princess: The only way a none Laguz Royal could know of it is... Branded: If there involved in it. Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4yTEoDv7tY4 Masu: YOU SON OF A BITCH *Fires a Bolting at Chris* Chris: *Blocks with Wind Sword* Try it again Magey and your dead. Branded: WHAT THE HELL MS! Masu: He's no Laguz, how did he know of Subspace. Chris: The same way you know now. Masu: !!! Chris: Someone told me. Masu: Who? Chris: My brother. _______________________ (Castle Altea) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q098mtAZi2c *The Primid close in on the Castle* Marth: Jeigan, Kain, Abel! jeigan: Yes sir... Marth: Get my back, I'm going to fight them. Jeigan: Sir... Marth: No. I will fight them and I will win. Jeigan: Sir... Marth: I'm not running Jeigan. Abel: Your majesty, We're not giving you a choice. Marth: What? Jeigan: We will give our lives to make a diversion, for you to escape. Kain: Your majesty, your important, WE are not. Marth: Fine...If your so willing to throw your lives away, I won't stop you. *Marth rides away on a horse* Jeigan: We shall give our live for our King. ???: But you won't do it alone... Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_BsPSOQA6tY ???: My name is Roy I'm a Subspace Emissary and I'm here to help you save your king. Jeigan: And we will take your help. Kain: *Whispers* Jeigan, what the hell is a "Subspace Emissary"? ______________________________ (On the Road to the Former Stadium) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hx8t8ntHkk4 Masu: Your brother? Chris: He is a member of the Subspace Army, and my sworn enemy. Branded: Wow... Princess: That is. Chris: Shit...Som terrible ething is comeing. Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mpU7oSBJWCo *Twelve Reptallion Beasts leap out of the shadows and draw laser Pistols* Masu: Oh god not more freaks. Chris: There Space Pirates...nasty ones to. Pirate: Hand over any valuables and we'll leave you with your lives. Masu: Screw that we have more then enough skill to take out you dick weeds, CHRIS BRANDED!!! ATTACK!!!! Branded: Chris just ran away while you while you were monologuing. Masu: Great, that is just- *BANG* Masu: Shi... Princess: MASU!!! Pirates: GET THEM!!! *Starts Firing* Princess: *Transforms full Laguz* Princess: CAAAAAAHHH *Grabs Branded in her Talons* *Princess Flies away* Pirates: Let them go... ___________________ (Castle Altea) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DCSqOCVQJT0 Roy: Alright here's the plan, Marcus Abel and Kain distract the front lines and I bum rush the Commander. Jeigan: Why did you call me Marcus? Roy: Shut Up Marcus! Anyway we all clear on our plan. Kain: Yes Sir. Abel: Damn Straight. Jeigan: Yes...AND STOP CALLING ME MARCUS!!! Roy: Alright, Lance Allen Jeigan good luck. Abel: Did you just call me. Roy: Shut up. *The Palidens Ride off* Roy: Alright... Roy(On Phone): Marth is headed your way, I'm holding off the Primid till' you meat up with those Mercenaries. ???(On Phone): Good...between You Samus and Dedede the plan is comeing together... Roy(On Phone): Are you sure you want to go through with this. ???(On Phone): I have no doupt... Roy(On Phone): I'm with you till the end. *An earth column shoots out of the ground almost hitting Roy between the legs* Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w2G4PgHaVfs Roy: What the fu- *CHOP* Roy: Basterd... Hika: He he he, Oh master [Censored] will be pleased. ________________________________ (Space Pirate Vessal) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=--sRhAa45YI Masu: Ugh...Where am I? ???: Your on Ridley's ship mate. *A Blond Aussie walks into the room* Masu: Who are you? ???: Pat Vandusan, Ridley's first mate. Masu: Wha? *A girl in a purple Zero-Suit walks in* ???: Come on Pat just let him die... Pat: I seem to remember you saying that about me Rin. Rin: Eh...We all make mistakes. Masu: What the hell is happening? Rin: Your being press ganged into captain Ridley's service. Masu: What, I'll never be some Space Pirate! Pat: We play lot's of TOS. Masu: On second thought.... To Be Coninued... Edited September 13, 2008 by Toa Lord Sothe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 Uhm..get Mozilla FireFox. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 13, 2008 Author Share Posted September 13, 2008 Uhm..get Mozilla FireFox. What? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 What? Erh..the internet browser, MFF, get it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 13, 2008 Author Share Posted September 13, 2008 Erh..the internet browser, MFF, get it. What does this have to do with my fanfic? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 What does this have to do with my fanfic? It will automatically point out all small spelling errors. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Wright Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 GREAT and LONG chapter, I'm LOVING THIS....!!!111! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uguu Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA! I HAVE KILLED ROY! Good chapter way the by TLS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HowAreYaBud Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 This is awesome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 13, 2008 Author Share Posted September 13, 2008 Chapter 7 (Lower Skyworld) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dClKAO6QU6Q Princess: *Crying* Branded: Don't worry, we'll find a way to save MS. Princess: He's probably already dead... Branded: Don't talk like that. Princess: It's true. Branded: Listen Masu is...He can handle himself in a fight...no...he's smart enough to...no... Princess: YOUR NOT HELPING BRANDED!!! Branded: Sorry... Branded: Someone's coming... Princess: Oh no... ???: Hey what are you doing here? Branded: Who are you? ???: I'm Pit guardian of Angel Land. ???: And It's-a me Mario! Pit: My question still stands how did you get here? Princess: Me and Branded were escapeing Space Pirates, I used my Laguz powers to fly away but...I'm only a Genetic Lagauz so I can't stay transformed as long. Branded: It was dumb luck that we landed here. Pit: *Looks at Mario* Yeah we seem to be getting alot of that. ______________________________________ (Altea Outskirts) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0HobbRxCW1Q Marth: *Rideing away on his Horse* *A missile hits the horse and sends Marth flying* Marth: What? *30 Sword wielding Primid spawn* Marth: Oh my god... Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LPPwdlgv2cs ???: BEHOLD MY POWER!!!! *Slash* *Half the Primid are sliced* Marth: Who are you? ???: Meta-Knight...My name is Meta-Knight. Marth: Well thank you sir Knight. Meta: Don't get to comfy your magesty, there are more where they came from. *50 Primid spawn and start attacking* To be Continued... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 13, 2008 Author Share Posted September 13, 2008 That one isn't as long, I'm sorry I'm tired. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hibari Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 It seems fine to me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Wright Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 Chris is gone mysteriously....lol This entire chapter is a big cliff!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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