Jecht Posted May 14, 2016 Share Posted May 14, 2016 (edited) Just an idea I had on FB, was curious on thoughts about it. :) Pokemon: Hazeon, the Immature Pokemon Type: Ghost Evolution of: Eevee Evolution type: Regularly Evolve Eevee into Jolteon, Vaporeon, Flareon, Leafeon, Glaceon, or Sylveon by also having a extra Pokeball in your bag, and a open space in your party. Dex Entry/Description: Hazeon, the evolved form of Eevee, is created when leftover DNA strands of Eevee is left behind during it's many evolutions, resulting in a haze-like evolution with a transparent body as its not a full evolution process. It has the unusual power to possess other living beings to show them their feelings and emotions in dream-like hallucinations. A cross between Flareon and Umbreon. It's hazy body is dark grey with a red aura full of DNA embedded in its chest. When it is loved, the aura will glow. But beware if it blackens, which is a sign of cruelty and mistreatment. Ability: Transparent - The first physical attack taken during battle will fail to do damage. (With the exception of Special Attacks that inflict damage based on Defense, A Pokemon with Mold Breaker can also disable this ability if it uses a physical attack.) Stats: HP - 75 Attack - 115 Defense - 60 Sp. Attack - 115 Sp. Defense - 60 Speed - 100 Overall- 525 Moves: (Leveling Up): - Helping Hand - Tackle - Tail Whip 5 Sand-Attack 9 Night Shade 13 Quick Attack 17 Hypnosis 20 Haze 25 Shadow Claw 29 Pain Split 33 Dream Eater 37 Shadow Ball 41 Last Resort 45 Ominous Wind Moves: (TM/HM) TM01 - Hone Claws TM05 - Roar TM10 - Hidden Power TM12 - Taunt TM13 - Ice Beam TM15 - Hyper Beam TM16 - Light Screen TM17 - Protect TM20 - Safeguard TM21 - Frustration TM21 - Return TM30 - Shadow Ball TM32 - Double Team TM41 - Torment TM42 - Facade TM44 - Rest TM45 - Attract TM46 - Theif TM49 - Echoed Voice TM54 - False Swipe TM59 - Incinerate TM60 - Quash TM61 - Will-O-Wisp TM63 - Embargo TM64 - Explosion TM65 - Shadow Claw TM67 - Retaliate TM68 - Giga-Impact TM69 - Rock Polish TM70 - Flash TM73 - Thunder Wave TM75 - Swords Dance TM77 - Psych Up TM79 - Frost Breath TM85 - Dream Eater TM87 - Swagger TM88 - Sleep Talk TM89 - U-Turn TM90 - Substitute TM92 - Trick Room TM97 - Dark Pulse TM99 - Dazzling Gleam TM100 - Confide HM01 - Cut Moves: (Egg) - Captivate - Charm - Covet - Curse - Detect - Endure - Fake Tears - Flail - Natural Gift - Stored Power - Synchronize - Tickle - Wish - Yawn Moves: (Battle Resort) - Snore - Covet - Low Kick - Signal Beam - Endeavor - Uproar - Hyper Voice - Skill Swap - Role Play - Pain Split - Spite - After You - Helping Hand - Trick - Recycle - Snatch - Magic Coat (lol) - Heal Bell - Magic Room - Wonder Room - Gravity - Icy Wind What do you guys think? :) Edited May 15, 2016 by Jecht Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sheikah Posted May 14, 2016 Share Posted May 14, 2016 Sounds awesome, love the dex entry :3. You also had a picture in mind?? Love to see how it looks xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jecht Posted May 14, 2016 Author Share Posted May 14, 2016 Sounds awesome, love the dex entry :3. You also had a picture in mind?? Love to see how it looks xD No, not really, but if anybody wanted to try their hand at making a picture of it they could, my artistic skills go only as far as South Park lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted May 14, 2016 Share Posted May 14, 2016 (edited) I would've given it a different evolution method for the sake of consistency, and I would've named it Polteon or Poltereon (as in poltergeist), but looks good to me. :) But might I suggest Ominous Wind to its moveset? And Nightshade? Maybe Will-o-Whisp too. Edited May 14, 2016 by Anacybele Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dai Posted May 14, 2016 Share Posted May 14, 2016 (edited) I would've suggested Eidoleon, honestly. XD1.an idealized person or thing. 2.a specter or phantom. Edited May 14, 2016 by Dai Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeryAngryBisharp Posted May 14, 2016 Share Posted May 14, 2016 Isn't that ability already broken as hell? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reality Posted May 15, 2016 Share Posted May 15, 2016 The ability is broken because it makes it better at tanking physical attacks than the likes of skarmory/mega aggron. Also why the 80 spdef if it never uses it's spdef? Is it just because of the way all eevee's have the same Base Stat Total when you add everything up? 70 HP/40 (effective) spdef is horrendous, even if power creep never happened and it was still gen 4. Also against mold breaker pokemon it's completely worthless. It's mixed attacking stats aren't that useful with it's bad coverage outside of ghost/ice. Support movepool is kinda the same as every other ghost type other than having baton pass from eevee. Probbably be used 252 speed, 252 special attack timid 3 special attacks+taunt or used as a near guaranteed substitute passer for a more deserving pokemon. (the set that would get it banned) A workup set could work if used on a team designed to stall out the opponet's fast special attackers. All three are completely unhealthy to the metagame. I like the pokedex entry and appearance though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jecht Posted May 15, 2016 Author Share Posted May 15, 2016 I would've given it a different evolution method for the sake of consistency, and I would've named it Polteon or Poltereon (as in poltergeist), but looks good to me. :) But might I suggest Ominous Wind to its moveset? And Nightshade? Maybe Will-o-Whisp too. I actually did have Night Shade (Level-Up) and Will-O-Wisp Ominous Wind though I completely forgot about, that would really fit here o.o (I'll figure out something) I would've given it a different evolution method for the sake of consistency, and I would've named it Polteon or Poltereon (as in poltergeist), but looks good to me. :) But might I suggest Ominous Wind to its moveset? And Nightshade? Maybe Will-o-Whisp too. I would've suggested Eidoleon, honestly. XD 1.an idealized person or thing. 2.a specter or phantom. Those are really good idea's, which is the better one though because I like both. The evolution though I thought fit perfectly with his description consider he's not a full evolution due to lost strands of DNA. Which perfectly fits the Shedinja idea. Shedinja was basically a husk and not fully evolved as well once you think about it. I agree the consistency is off though... The ability is broken because it makes it better at tanking physical attacks than the likes of skarmory/mega aggron. Also why the 80 spdef if it never uses it's spdef? Is it just because of the way all eevee's have the same Base Stat Total when you add everything up? 70 HP/40 (effective) spdef is horrendous, even if power creep never happened and it was still gen 4. Also against mold breaker pokemon it's completely worthless. It's mixed attacking stats aren't that useful with it's bad coverage outside of ghost/ice. Support movepool is kinda the same as every other ghost type other than having baton pass from eevee. Probbably be used 252 speed, 252 special attack timid 3 special attacks+taunt or used as a near guaranteed substitute passer for a more deserving pokemon. (the set that would get it banned) A workup set could work if used on a team designed to stall out the opponet's fast special attackers. All three are completely unhealthy to the metagame. I like the pokedex entry and appearance though. Honestly, he's meant to be a fast glass cannon with a unique usefullness as a Ghost-type. Most of the TM's were basically distributed to every Eeveeloution anyways. (But with added ideas of my own) Plus they all have the same Egg moves. I just copied and pasted them. Besides, when was there a time you could hit a shadow or phantom anyways if you ran into a ghost irl (not like they truly exist, but I've had certain experiences myself living in a haunted trailer home) He's has more SpD than Def because, well, his ability and being a glass cannon to begin with. That and i'm matching the overall with every other Eeveeloution (wouldn't be fair to the others ya know) Anything that could outspeed a 252 Spe with a base of 100 and either hit with Psyshock (which is used often, and there's other like it) or a SpA with a base of 100 (or more depending on the estimate) can still OHKO it. Even if it did hit Uber, Greninja and/or Darkrai could outspeed and KO it given the right moves. The ability isn't too broken. You said it yourself, counter an enemy Hazeon with Mold Breaker. I know it sounds like I broke the game by preventing physical attacks, but it isn't true that you can't hit it based on its DEF stat. (I could probably mention that in the OP to clarify) If i need to though, I could even out and balance the Def and SpD at the same base. That could make it a glass cannon more? Although, I do think you got some of the stats confused as well when you commented. SpD is not 40, its 80, while Def is 45. I could probably even it out and make it Def/60 and SpD/65? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted May 15, 2016 Share Posted May 15, 2016 I actually did have Night Shade (Level-Up) and Will-O-Wisp Ominous Wind though I completely forgot about, that would really fit here o.o (I'll figure out something) Oh, really? I looked for them and didn't see them. My bad. :P Phanteon is also a nice idea for a name, I just thought of it not too long ago. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeryAngryBisharp Posted May 15, 2016 Share Posted May 15, 2016 Balance out the defenses. The pokemon can basically be a physical wall, sweeper, and a win condition all with one set. It would make a lot of physical attackers less used only because they can't inflict any damage at all, force them to go mixed (if they can that is) or carry a status condition. Ghastly is literally made of gas yet my Arcanine can bite it. All that aside, it's a pretty cool idea. I've always wanted another evolution similar to Shedinja. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jecht Posted May 15, 2016 Author Share Posted May 15, 2016 (edited) Made some new changes Updated (possibly better) ability Updated Level Up moves (lost Screech, rearranged Pain Split and Haze, added Ominous Wind) Updated TMs (Added Swords Dance, U-Turn, & Trick Room) New Tutor Moves (Was thinking about adding these) So hopefully, I think I made a better movepool for both Physical and Special attackers, plus a ability that's less game-breaking :p Tell me what you guys think?! EDIT: Also edited Stats by the way^^ Edited May 15, 2016 by Jecht Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frederick Trash Posted July 22, 2016 Share Posted July 22, 2016 When I was a child I had a Pokemon annual - either '97 or '98. There was a page to design your own Pokemon, and I designed an enhanced Golbat with slimmer wings and named it "Crowbat". If only I'd known... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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