TCoZ Posted April 8, 2008 Share Posted April 8, 2008 A song I wrote for homework. I had slight help with a couple of the lines, but it was mainly my work. One day I met this girl I knew she was the one And ev'ry time I think of her I see the blazing sun She took me to her house We watched TV all day And when we were done she looked at me and I had lots to say [Chorus] One Day you'll die And the next day I'll cry And there'll be nothing I can do to take me to you So lets make the most of now No what, why, or how It's the most you can do because you know, that I, love you I asked her on a date We went to see a play It was so really awesome I hope it stays that way I love her to the moon And all eternity She looked into my eyes and then she said something to me [Chorus] One Day you'll die And the next day I'll cry And there'll be nothing I can do to take me to you So lets make the most of now No what, why, or how It's the most you can do because you know, that I, love you But life is cruel and mean It could not stay this way She met another guy and loved him and had fun all day I wish I could go back Her so harsh words undone The days when I promised her that she was the only one [Chorus] One Day you'll die And the next day I'll cry And there'll be nothing I can do to take me to you So lets make the most of now No what, why, or how It's the most you can do because you know, that I, love you One day I met this girl I knew she was the one And ev'ry time I think of her I see the blazing sun I wish I could go back Her so harsh words undone The days when I promised her that she was the only one [Chorus] One Day you'll die And the next day I'll cry And there'll be nothing I can do to take me to you So lets make the most of now No what, why, or how It's the most you can do because you know, that I, love you [Chorus] One Day you'll die And the next day I'll cry And there'll be nothing I can do to take me to you So lets make the most of now No what, why, or how It's the most you can do because you know, that I, because you know, that I, because you know, that I, love you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Florete Posted April 8, 2008 Share Posted April 8, 2008 When I had to write a song for homework I totally just wrote out the lyrics to "Mama" by My Chemical Romance and got 100% Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCoZ Posted April 8, 2008 Author Share Posted April 8, 2008 I like being creative, so it was actually quite fun. Kudos to you though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liz Posted April 8, 2008 Share Posted April 8, 2008 When I had to write a song for homework I totally just wrote out the lyrics to "Mama" by My Chemical Romance and got 100% that's cool!!! our english teacher doesn't believe in creativity, so we usually end up analyzing shakespeares plays Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liz Posted April 8, 2008 Share Posted April 8, 2008 I like being creative, so it was actually quite fun. Kudos to you though. your song was amazing!!!!! i really have trouble writing songs and such (my horrible english grades from last year show that) so im really envious of your talent!!!!!!! are you gonna add music? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCoZ Posted April 8, 2008 Author Share Posted April 8, 2008 are you gonna add music? Yeah. I can sing the song, but I'm not a good singer, so I'll probably record a keyboard part sometime and upload it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Rabbit Posted April 9, 2008 Share Posted April 9, 2008 If I had an assignment like this, I'd blow them away. But I liked this one. Good work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCoZ Posted April 9, 2008 Author Share Posted April 9, 2008 If I had an assignment like this, I'd blow them away. It was actually just to write a verse and a chorus... but after doing a verse and a chorus, I got hooked. Thanks for the positive comments, anyway. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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