This is only a very slight update, but I want to know if I'm on the right track.
I adjusted the collar on the first guy, but not anything else. The eyes are kinda wonky, but I can't really reposition the eye without making major changes to the other parts of the face, and I'm a bit lazy.
The red guy's armour looks like crap, so I'm going to redraw it. Here is a rough sketch of the new one. I redrew the last guy's shoulder to make it fit too. Finally, I changed the eyes of the last two characters
slightly. The girl wasn't really finished when I posted the first sprites, but I'm still going to take your advice into account when I do finish it. That will have to wait though, since I'm currently a bit busy and her hair is
giving me lots of trouble.