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For the eye shadow, instead of using the outline color, I think that it would be better using the darkest skin shade. Also maybe make the darkest shade of the helmet...darker?
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Thanks for all the feedback everyone.
Ok, so here's a WIP of the new version (on the right, obviously).
Anything I should fix before moving on the the shading and stuff?
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Done!
Anything else that needs to be fixed? (And just wondering, was the previous color scheme better? Or is this one better?)
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His face is tiny, and his chin is sharper than a normal chin. I think that the hair is still a WIP, but anyways the hair on his right side looks...strange.
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Ah, okay. Well, it's just a placeholder. and so when I'm done it'll be right.
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I'm sorry, but could you explain why it looks 'wrong'?
Thanks
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New sprite, still a WIP (Wil's face is just a placeholder).
Anything that needs to be fixed?
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These aren't bad. In fact, I like some of them a lot.
For the last member of the Sylphs, his left shoulder is a bit too high (or his right one is too low, not sure). The generic soldier's neck is really long. Kratos' second hair shade is too dark in my opinion, and Boyd's face feels too long. Other than that, these mugs are quite good.
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Lana's portrait is amazing.
Umm...dragon helmet thing is kinda cool I guess (not too big a fan of dragons). Sorry if it isn't supposed to be a dragon helmet thing.
AND SUZUME HAS NINJA MASK
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I CAN'T SPRITE!
But really, I can't
Supposed to be Catria. It's an FC.
The biggest mistake to me right now is the head size...anything else? I know there are probably tons of other mistakes, but I'll need help finding and fixing them.
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Okay, so put in two arm movements during the attack instead of one, but now it looks...a bit weird. Help with fixing this a bit?
(P.S., decided to stick to my old animator)
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Okay, tried to do what you guys told me to (casting towards the target, adding a few more frames to make it a bit more interesting, and changing the black outline on the scarf).
Before I animate this, does anyone know a good free animator? The one I use currently requires a pretty slow process to align every single sprite, and I can't zoom in and out (don't know if this is common for other animators as well).
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Okay, tried animating the basic attack...
So, I know the shadow needs to change when the scarf is flying around, and there's a lot more to fix. Critique?
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Can't...stop...
So I made a whole sheet! Probably needs tons of work, but I think this is good for my first battle sprite in maybe a year...and even then I sucked at that time...
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It is a magic user. Its supposed to be looking left (our left)...
Fixed the leaning issue.
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Trying my hand at battle spriting...
Well, it probably sucks, but critique? Please?
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Also, adding on to what Mew's said, the left (our left) eye has a different shape than the other one...
(PS. I'm the 'someone' :D)
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Made some fixes to some of my sprites. Hopefully they look better...
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Oh, that's what you meant...well then, here it is.
And a fix on the girl's headband.
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Fixed the collar...and added a new sprite.
I know the headband thing needs to be worked on (a lot), but I don't really know how to fix it...anything else?
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Fixed.
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K, fixed all those things (hopefully).
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D-d-d-double post!
New sprite.
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Jealousy, I'm not exactly sure what you were trying to say, but I still tried to fix it..
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Mewyjev, I tried to fix the things you told me to. Better?
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Old version on the left, for comparison. Hopefully it's done now.
...anything else?