Kratos Aurion

I think the upper left one's neck looks the best. Although I prefer the dark blue shirt more than the dark grey because it blend more with the armor

The shoulderpads look better now. I think the neck is a bit to thin, maybe a couple pixels wider would look better. Also IMO it's too much shade (still talking af the neck), she has short hair so light should be able to reach her neck.

School's over = way too much free time when not working. Instead of only ''caoch potatoing'' I told myself ''Why don't you mug?''. I wanted to post on SoS (Garfield there) but realised it was .... sort of... dead? So I opened a thread here! Here's the stuff I've been working on this week: ----> (got help from Solum for this one) ----> (I bet you can't see the differences between before/after!) ----> (Wanted hairs to be more dishevelled. I like how it ended up, but I think they could look better)

If you read the sentence following it you see what I think could be improve about the hair :-P Ohhh, by rereading my post I realize why you might have been confused... I was talking about those hairs when I mentioned that the outline could be smoother

I think it's really impressive. Great job! The one thing that bugs me a bit is the hairs that defy gravity (both wisps of hair). I think the outline could be a bit smoother.

I think it looks good. I think you should shade a bit more the left part of the neck (OPV) just to clearly show that the neck is ''twist''. (maybe something like this: neck)

As for the hair, I think you should splice more than only one character's hair if you want more a Gatrie look. I think you should try to modify a bit the armor (the goldish part) :it would look more unique.

The face isn't in the same direction as Marcus' face, which make the head a bit odd. Maybe it's on purpose, but Gatrie should have blond hair. I don't have much more to say.. Hmm.. I see Marcus, Hector et Gilliam in the mug, am I missing some characters?

I like you mug. I particulary love the face: character with scar are generally cool! Although, I think ther's something wrong with the neck's shading. I don't know if pillowy or just overshade, but it doesn't look right. Also, his left (our right) shoulder seem to be twice the size of his one shoulder.

I really like your Neimi Echidna splice, I think it's your one that look the best. From what i see, I think you could start making some more complicated splice (mixing many character's hair, same for clothes). As for your new mugs, I'll critique in french, will be easier that way: - Therpsichore a le visage trop bas. Je te suggère d'essayer de le monter d'un pixel ou deux et il manque l'ombrage des cheveux sur la peau. - Salamander : J'aime bien le splice, mais il manque l'ombre des cheveux (tu peut quasiment copié celle de Nils, comme ca ce sera plus facile et donera probablement un meilleur résultat. Le cou est aussi croche alors qu'il devrait être droit. - Ayami : commentaire complètement personnel, le teint du visage est trop pale et les couleur ne s'agence pas très bien ensemble. Avis perso hein! - Damas a un trop long cou, je te suggère de baisser la tête de quelques pixel pour que ce soit plus harmonieux. - Godiva aurait juste besoin d'un petit nettoyage. Il y a quelques pixels ici et là (ex: la machoire, dans la zone du cou) que tu devrait arrangé pour que le mug soit plus clean. - Wazn : le cou est pillowshade (on ne peut pas déterminer la source de lumière) et semble un peu trop étroit - Rahna : j'ai rien a dire sur ce mug autre que les couleurs sont un peu flashy - Cnossos : On dirait qu'on lui a surligner les cheveux xD, sinon, il est bien. Finalement, verifie les contours, FE6 et FE7 n'ont pas la même couleur, j'ai l'impression de voir deux couleurs de contour différentes dans certains mugs.

hmm, maybe it's me, but the helmet doesn't seem to be in same direction as the face. Also, I think that the helmet is a bit too round, like there were some free space between each side of the head and the helmet : the head wouldn't have a good support. If we compare with alctual helmets from FE 6,7,8 that are more adjust to the head.

Maybe it's me, but isn't Rachel's jaw a bit too close from her neck? Also, there is a pixel on the top-left side (OPV) of the lips that seems odd. I have the feeling that the pixel is too dark compare to what it should be. I like Pablo's son. He looks like a friendly psycho. Althought, is his eyebrows a different colors than his hair on purpose?