Princess Peachar

Wow. I forgot how much I hate Zealot. There was no Miledy. Promise.

Original > Derp (Just a reference thing. Buckle is "broken" and arm is not shaded...but yeah. Not a fix. Just a reference kinda) I honestly did not know what to do with that neck. I was so confused. Lost, even. So I just plastered it with pixels. 8B I feel like the shoulder pad should be shaded a bit less cause it's actually kinda being hit by the light a lot in this full frontal angle unlike a 3/4 angle. The cloak is a little unnaturally shaded/folded on the "nearside" (nearside and farside are rather subjective, but I will refer to nearside as our right and far side as our left in relation to the face). The buckle also needs a little more full frontal, though I didn't touch the thing in my derp besides lowering the near shoulder. Umm...I derped the headband and the face a bit. I feel like you were clashing FE7 and 8 styles in the shading on the face...not TOO much, but it was still apparent. His chin was a little short, needed a bit far cheek, and that jaw was very round and needed to be fixed, and neck was like a tree trunk (unless that was all intentional). As for the shoulder raise and drop, I tried posing in front of the mirror like NuNayr is...and I found it a lot more comfortable to have the shoulder I was facing higher than the one away. Maybe it helps with the whole uncomfortable thing if only just a little? lolidk. Oh, and hair is a little flat. Just a LIIIIIIIIIITTLE. I think some more detail will help a bunch. The positive? This is a very good change of style. I'm liking it more than your previous style. If you REALLY wanna be able to fit him in a hackbox a lot more comfortably, you are going to have to change the angle to match Ross's A LOT more. BUT, that would change the sprites look pretty much. IMO, the angle can work. Just gotta WORK at it. lol. In regards to the warfare going on: Both sides have valid arguments, but both sides are in the wrong. At least Seph was complimenting the style change. That's a plus, no? And for uniqueness? Yes. It is awesome...but realism is also important. Can't have a person with an upside down head like an owl. Unique? Yes. But it would just be so awkward...in regards to the human anatomy. 8B

I was thinking if you wanna keep that downward frame, make that her compacting up about to spring into the backflip thing. She has gotta spring to be able to have enough force to flip like that...so might as well use that frame for a get ready frame, no?

oL O Skrimir...that hair...very nice. Morrigan is off, but man. That necklace is very nice and those feathers...You have to teach me feathers plz. It'd help me with three of my mugs. lol

OOOOOOOOOR The first tier fighting is derp and they finally master the true form of their fighting which is their promotion. Either way, wouldn't it be boring if all the classes had the same animation when promoting? Or the same stance just glitzed up? Hell yeah it would be. ON TOPIC Elliot's promotion outfit is very nice. I just wish it was a more dynamic stance rather than just stand there holding a spear like a bishop. idk. I think she is worthy of greater.

Lol. In that case. TL T SRSBSNS Nolan has a really flat head. His eyes are a pixel or two too high. Nose is rather bulbous instead of strong like in the OA and sprite alike. The ear is kinda wonky, too. Kinda looks like a mini doughnut instead of an ear. Leonardo has a pig nose. Getting rid of the brown pixel for the near nostril will help with that. It's also kinda...round? And just has the impression of being really thin as well. Michiah's bangs are like super sharp. Forget what the sprite conveys to you and follow the OA for hair reference. It flows fluidly with the rest of the hair rather than her clipping SOME of her bangs and the rest of them stick out like thorns because they are too short. Her nose is also around a pixel too far to the far side. Could be more...but I think one pixel outta do it maybe. These are just some problems I see without even tossing them into pnet.

Nolan 2Bhaving 2hed? wai no 4hed? Also hed shaped like To o T. I feel like I could eat off his head...table cloth provided. oh. And nose be liek o C O instead of o L O Leonardo has a piggie nose...influenced by the king of pop himself. Oink oink |O:3 hee hee, OH~ Michaiah bangs make mi a sad Pinto Bean. I feel liek RAWRAWRAWRSAWBLADEVROOOOOM and it scares me. ^^o^^^^o^^^ Her nose kinda liek dis too o/ O Hope this helps.

Haha. Thanks guys. I'm glad to finally have made an account here...and hopefully find out who you people are. lol

lol yeah bro. It'd help if they had crotches though. http://puu.sh/dA8t lolidk

Thanks for the feedback, guys. @Tana: I'm pretty happy with how she is. Glad y'all agree. eCut, those eyes were a pain. As long as they weren't the nasty bug eyes they were on Tana v1.0. lol As for the other stuff, yeah. The FE10 mugs are oooooold. Like...I almost wanna revamp them but I'm too lazy and preoccupied with other work lol. The FE8 ones...not too happy with Kyle. Maybe I'll get the urge to fix him later. I agree with eCut on the hair...but I don't have the balls to do curly hair yet. lol. L'Arachel...I'm happy with how she has turned out...but there is something that is wonky somewhere. She is much more Genki and closer to her OA, but yeah. Still something wonky going on there. I didn't wanna reply until I had something productive to post...but, alas, I have like random WIPs not even worthy of being posted. lol cause they are ugly

"Barry didn't wash his hands after wiping his ass, and Michael barely does it, so why should I?" IMO, not a good mentality/excuse. If you honestly believe that you should do the reigns thing, then go for it. If not, eff it and don't. Lol. and though they are shorts...it still looks like she is pulling an Eirika. Skirt? Fine. Skirt on a horse? Lolwtf you thinking you slutty soldier?

Wheeeeeeeee Thanks guys. 8]

RED- "I look like an eyeball instead of an eyelid!" Either blend out the sides of the area a bit more or shade the whole area more. I suggest the former. If it is an eyeball...well...okay. GREEN- "I have ten-year-old shoulders!" He has like no frame at all. His shoulders are that of a little kid..or even a female in FE standards (not including the bobbleheads). If he is supposed to be a little kid with a scar on his face from probably fighting someone on the playground for a piece of candy...well...okay. MAGENTA- "I had to move my pad cause it was uncomfortable on my lack of a shoulder!" The pad should prooooooobably be lower and closer to his body. He can stick his hand in there and tickle his neck. Don't put it FLAT on his shoulder...but resting right above it rather than hovering.

Been spriting for a while. It's been a loooooong journey of hard work, blood, sweat, tears, and late night Taco Bell runs. I'm becoming content (kinda) with my progress but the journey is still not over...and...uh...yeah. That's my history. These are kinda old...but I thought I'd put them up anyways (should really go back and fix them). These are for a side project kinda (that anyone who is interested and has some skill) that is just planned to revamp/fix FE8 mugs. And that's it for now.

haha. Don't blame you. I've been a ghost for the past...say...idk... 2 years? Also me not having a computer since September doesn't help either. IDK. Not much of a forum person as I used to be, but I like the art and the people so I stick around. 8B

lol good to see you guys too. Good to have a computer again. Good to be spriting. haha I feel kinda weird saying all that...but hey...it's the truth. 8B

Haaaaaaaaay eCut! So, on your bandita: Not a bad job. I won't lie though...that so called leather bandana thing is making her look like she shaved the front third of her head like the male bandits did. I guess it's a code for them? I suggest changing it to the same color as her clothes. OR white like her axe. Her hands are kinda big, but I don't really blame you. Bandits are built like gorillas. I guess another standard before you can join a bandit group. I guess just try and shave off a pixel or two...and either add it to her near leg or shave off some more from her far leg. Yes, her leg is slightly bent...but she's got a ham back there and a drumstick up close. Just seems a little weird. lol. Not A LOT to fix, but those things you can polish up. Also, not sure if you are aiming to fix up that trap!splice...I mean...cause it was for a contest...but in case you do: -Does he have heterochromia? Near eye is a nice, shiny, and faint blue. Far one is like STARE INTO YOUR SOUL abyss purple. Also having a bit of a lazy eye problem. The near one is a liiiiiiiittle bit too interested in what's happening behind him but trying to look normal so it suffices with using some peripherals. Work on the eyes a bit more. (I suggest you go with the faint bluepurple look on the far side. I'm a fan.) -Not sure how the armor works. He could kill someone with the far shoulder pad after a hug...or by simply turning to his left too fast if there is someone behind him. I probably wouldn't stand too close...or get to friendly. If it was intended, alright. Cool. If not...I'd prooooobably want to go for a more symmetrical look and put the point at the middle of the pad. -Looking at the position of the shoulders...the far one is a lot longer than the near one. It's like the near one has dependence issues and doesn't wanna leave the body. Could very well have been Franz's sprite...but this is something that is easily fixed. -Not entirely sure how the hair works. I'm liking what you were going for...but it lacks definition. The hair is like LETS SWAY TO THE FAR SIDE and then there is that one hair on top that is like NO I WANNA GO TO THE FOREHEAD. Nothing a little shading won't fix. -Dat chin. I pray he will never have to look down during a haircut; he'd perform an unwilling tracheotomy. Round it out a little. Just a little. Not like woman round...but more like not jut out in a point round. Pretty interesting use of the set, though. Keep up the good work. As long as you learn something, it wasn't a complete waste of time. 8]

I have to say-- you are not terrible at what you do. You have shown much improvement and have some interesting concepts. As for critique on your latest sprite (the shaman, Sansa, if you will): -Unless she is wearing a bump it, the top of her head looks like a tumor is growing up there. -It seems to me like her bangs are at a middle part. If so, her near bangs are like WHOAH VOLUME and her far bangs are like THINNING IS THE FIRST SIGN OF BALDING. Try to find a happy medium? Or make them both the same size, whether you choose the thin or voluptuous. -What is she thinking about? Her eyes are rolling back into her head to see what is on her mind. Either that or they are looking up at her hair and trying to figure out which of the bangs is bigger and why. Try making her look...down more? -Her face is at an angle to where her near eye could probably go down a pixel. This will force you to change the head shape as well. -Does the fur go all the way around her kinda like a fur hood? If not, right now it's like shoulder hair instead of a fur lining. -Trim is a little jagged. I'm afraid to run my finger across it cause I feel I'd cut myself. Anti-alias a bit more on them. -4head? No. It's a 3head. She needs a little more...and the hair line needs a bit more shading. Speaking of shading, I'd probably darken the darkest shade of hair she has and lighten the lightest. Just a tad. It'd help with the MY HAIR IS KINDA FLAT look. Again, you aren't terrible. That sprite is decent. Just needs some polishing. 8]

tee hee Nice to finally make an account here.