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So the general concept here is that this game would be primarily sea based. The main crew spends it's time traveling from place to place on a boat and picking up passengers with varying backgrounds. A short story version might focus on a prologue chapter of the crew. which would be about 8 or so characters, 3 introduced in the prologue. Probably a soldier, fighter, myrmidon trio. the basics. After this prologue the shorterned version would feature maybe 9 or so chapters exploring the main cast and all of their passengers, perhaps taking on a clue (board game) stance of who-dunnit mystery. Most battles would be against opposing ships. Archers get to mount ballistas like cannons. In my head an extended version would feature multiple large scale ship combats, like 5 or so allied ships against 5 or so enemy, a full on naval war type combat, a boss fight against a kraken that ends in a shipwreck. I imagine city sieges where you have to leave the comfort of your merchant/mercenary/pirate boat and take castles, and that the eventual loss of your legion after the kraken results in your crew being tossed ashore, only to a find a country in shambles from the kraken eating all their fish. After slaying the beast, you became its heroes and champions, and the remaining portion of the game is spent defending this new found home and establishing a permanent base. The loss of the ship is meant to be a very emotional moment, as is the final chapters when you confront the fishing villages oppressive soveriegn nation and gain it independence. tldr; pirates/merchants, naval based combat, and story about independence/slaying legends and what it means to be a hero thoughts?

Well i have returned to all of you and I'm much ready to start interacting again! It has been far to long. after many monthes of inactivity i come to bring you writing! lots of writing! check it out if i post it, please i would appreciate feedback! caution my grammar well be garbage but that is why i need you wonderful friends in the forest to advise me! As far as that goes i also want to say: HEY EVERYONE ! (if any of you remember me.... *forever alone*)

Shamans are amazing, easily my fav as well. Anyway hi i'm AceGamerValen, but you can call me Ace. Or AGV. Or Valen. doesn't really matter :) anyway hello!

Hahaha hey! I agree with most of what you said! Welcome aboard! Beware the elites...

TEAM REVIEW! Croconaw- hell yeah i got croconaw Vibrava- FLYGON! Slugma- not the best but i wanted a fire type Stantler- He has hypnosis too i do believe Tropius- actually not terrible Togetic-cause i hate shuckle

Togetic!

They were the two i was debateing for next lol. uh..... tropius

Stantler!

Slugma. Cause BURN

Hey :). Welcome and hope you have fun

Vibrava. Not cause it's good. Just cause Flygon :)

Yeah we are starting :)! Croconaw

How is picking order determined randomly or by order of who signed on?

You know what I'm in. But this will be my first ever draft

(I'll prob put up two today and two tommorow) number 2: Break away from the empty feeling Stay a day survive the lightning crashing Keep going!, Keep dealing! Empty faces fill the spaces in be-tween And it seems through it all I've forgotten how to feel Starting to fall Gimme something real! Gimme a reason! gimme the key to answer the question I don't even know! Look around i have found everything is how it always was Only one things different here The basic constant disappears ..and thats me So i stay worried! every day another heart breaks Every day another life shakes away its feeling The numbness grows the mind it slows! Break away from the empty feeling! Leave this place leave the draining pressure of surviving Or keep going, keep dealing with your own empty feeling So i stay worried I know i'm selfish and i know i'm self-rightous! Gimme something real! Gimme a reason! Gimme the key to answer the question I don't wanna know! Lately it seems theres more and more, and i dont care I'm sick of being apathetic a useless wasted piece of space I'm sick of being this pathetic I wanna run away become something new! Something true! Just escape that empty feeling

(critique honestly but fairly please) I know a place where there is no pain there is no doubt there is no shame I know a place where it never rains there is no hate there is no fame I know the place that i'd like to be and thats with you keep me safe inside your arms keep me warm away from harm stay beside me while im angry never leave me when i'm down stay with me while its scary and when im lost make sure im found Figure me out let me in when we've been to our place i won't do you wrong i won't let you fall i will sing this song as we conquer it all I will love you till the end of time i will love you while i'm losing my mind! I will miss you when your not around i will kiss you the minute you come around Take me to the place where we'll never be found lay on the floor desperate for more Take away the pain! Take away the tears! Break me of my pride and shame, and melt away my tears! Just stay with me... while i'm broken.... stay with me I'm devoted Everything about you makes me smile Everything you do makes this worth while! So take me to the place where there is no pain there is no doubt there is no shame take me to the place where it never rains there is no hate and are no flames Just take me with you wherever you go

I would love to! Can we discuss this sometime in the future? I'd love to share what i've been working on and get your help and opinion.

This xD. I am quite serious about writing but i am also absolute garbage at grammar. Hopefully this doesn't take away from the quality of my pieces to much and i am trying to improve. Thank you for the feed back.

So hey I'm new here and i'm duh a big fan of fire emblem. But i love writing and working on stories, or anything really related to literature. I would love to discuss books and thoughts on any great works. I've writtin poetry, songs (but i can NOT sing.), and many other such things. I have 3 chapters completed of my own book that I wouldn't mind letting people read and critique although my grammar is atrocious. I would love to be invited or asked to help with the writing, story and character conception of any hacks, but i have no interest in spriting things myself. Hey guys and AceGamerValen has finally arived.