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    So the general concept here is that this game would be primarily sea based. The main crew spends it's time traveling from place to place on a boat and picking up passengers with varying backgrounds.

    A short story version might focus on a prologue chapter of the crew. which would be about 8 or so characters, 3 introduced in the prologue. Probably a soldier, fighter, myrmidon trio. the basics. After this prologue the shorterned version would feature maybe 9 or so chapters exploring the main cast and all of their passengers, perhaps taking on a clue (board game) stance of who-dunnit mystery. Most battles would be against opposing ships. Archers get to mount ballistas like cannons.

    In my head an extended version would feature multiple large scale ship combats, like 5 or so allied ships against 5 or so enemy, a full on naval war type combat, a boss fight against a kraken that ends in a shipwreck. I imagine city sieges where you have to leave the comfort of your merchant/mercenary/pirate boat and take castles, and that the eventual loss of your legion after the kraken results in your crew being tossed ashore, only to a find a country in shambles from the kraken eating all their fish. After slaying the beast, you became its heroes and champions, and the remaining portion of the game is spent defending this new found home and establishing a permanent base. The loss of the ship is meant to be a very emotional moment, as is the final chapters when you confront the fishing villages oppressive soveriegn nation and gain it independence.

    tldr; pirates/merchants, naval based combat, and story about independence/slaying legends and what it means to be a hero

    thoughts?

    I have returned, bow mortals!

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    Well i have returned to all of you and I'm much ready to start interacting again! It has been far to long. after many monthes of inactivity i come to bring you writing! lots of writing! check it out if i post it, please i would appreciate feedback! caution my grammar well be garbage but that is why i need you wonderful friends in the forest to advise me! As far as that goes i also want to say:

    HEY EVERYONE ! (if any of you remember me.... *forever alone*)

    AceGamerValen Songs

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    (I'll prob put up two today and two tommorow) number 2:

    Break away from the empty feeling

    Stay a day survive the lightning crashing

    Keep going!, Keep dealing!

    Empty faces fill the spaces in be-tween

    And it seems through it all

    I've forgotten how to feel

    Starting to fall

    Gimme something real!

    Gimme a reason!

    gimme the key to answer the question I don't even know!

    Look around i have found everything is how it always was

    Only one things different here

    The basic constant disappears

    ..and thats me

    So i stay worried!

    every day another heart breaks

    Every day another life shakes away its feeling

    The numbness grows

    the mind it slows!

    Break away from the empty feeling!

    Leave this place leave the draining pressure of surviving

    Or keep going, keep dealing

    with your own empty feeling

    So i stay worried

    I know i'm selfish

    and i know i'm self-rightous!

    Gimme something real!

    Gimme a reason!

    Gimme the key to answer the question I don't wanna know!

    Lately it seems theres more and more, and i dont care

    I'm sick of being apathetic

    a useless wasted piece of space

    I'm sick of being this pathetic

    I wanna run away become something new!

    Something true!

    Just escape that empty feeling

    AceGamerValen Songs

    in Written Works

    Posted

    (critique honestly but fairly please)

    I know a place where there is no pain

    there is no doubt

    there is no shame

    I know a place where it never rains

    there is no hate there is no fame

    I know the place that i'd like to be

    and thats with you

    keep me safe inside your arms

    keep me warm

    away from harm

    stay beside me while im angry

    never leave me when i'm down

    stay with me while its scary

    and when im lost make sure im found

    Figure me out

    let me in when we've been to our place

    i won't do you wrong

    i won't let you fall

    i will sing this song

    as we conquer it all

    I will love you

    till the end of time

    i will love you

    while i'm losing my mind!

    I will miss you

    when your not around

    i will kiss you

    the minute you come around

    Take me to the place where we'll never be found

    lay on the floor desperate for more

    Take away the pain!

    Take away the tears!

    Break me of my pride and shame,

    and melt away my tears!

    Just stay with me...

    while i'm broken....

    stay with me

    I'm devoted

    Everything about you makes me smile

    Everything you do makes this worth while!

    So

    take me to the place where there is no pain

    there is no doubt

    there is no shame

    take me to the place where it never rains

    there is no hate and are no flames

    Just take me with you wherever you go

    Writing :)

    in Introductions

    Posted

    Hi, I'm going into editing

    hit me up, I would love to help out if you need it

    I would love to! Can we discuss this sometime in the future? I'd love to share what i've been working on and get your help and opinion.

    Writing :)

    in Introductions

    Posted

    If you're serious about writing, then please clean up the grammar. It's hard to take someone seriously if there's a lot of grammatical errors in a piece of writing.

    This xD. I am quite serious about writing but i am also absolute garbage at grammar. Hopefully this doesn't take away from the quality of my pieces to much and i am trying to improve. Thank you for the feed back.

    Writing :)

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    Posted · Edited by AceGamerValen

    So hey I'm new here and i'm duh a big fan of fire emblem. But i love writing and working on stories, or anything really related to literature. I would love to discuss books and thoughts on any great works. I've writtin poetry, songs (but i can NOT sing.), and many other such things. I have 3 chapters completed of my own book that I wouldn't mind letting people read and critique although my grammar is atrocious. I would love to be invited or asked to help with the writing, story and character conception of any hacks, but i have no interest in spriting things myself. Hey guys and AceGamerValen has finally arived.

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