Chalis Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 ;_____; It has Lute, so your story is automatically awesome. Kidding aside, it's a deep reaching emotional story. Before I can say anything more... Are you trying to write more to the story, or are you trying to come up with more fanfictions? Adding a chapter (not to the one you just read, though) but I've been stricken by writer's block for who knows how long without much luck. Current word count is 3700 something like that but is still half of what the previous one was, every now and then I think of whether I should beef up one section of it or to keep adding. Admittedly there's two out of the four sections that don't have very much and a third I'm still working on. I guess I should keep writing and hope it eventually comes to me again or something. As you probably noticed, my deep rooted problem is organization. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uguu Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 after the transformation of Ralf and Clark into FATRALF and FATBLACKCLARK, Heidern underwent his own. he turned into GIANTHEIDERN. he started out as a colossus, with only his foot in battle while his toes fought for him, but then it was only the heel of his boot. he crushed people in a city OH NO GIANT CYCLOPS oh wait he has an eyepatch lol. he kept getting bigger and bigger. he disappeared one day.after a week the sun rise was brighter than ever and Heidern rocketed out of the sun and made a pose when he landed on earth. he didnt stay tho and wnet back into space.hegrabbed the sun and put it in his emptu eyesocket yes he was that big already! he shot laser beams with the sun eye and stuff. meanwhile FATRALF was sitting on the moon and then the moon started to move The waves started to swell.it came to life and grew limbs and then FATRALF wrestled with it. GIANTHEIDERN kept shooting laser beams lol and FATBLACKCLARK was just stting on Eartj watcing all of it. he end Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Rei Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Heidern is broken on Kof94. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fireman Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Fan fiction was created by fangirls. This is fact. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lux Aeterna Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Adding a chapter (not to the one you just read, though) but I've been stricken by writer's block for who knows how long without much luck. Current word count is 3700 something like that but is still half of what the previous one was, every now and then I think of whether I should beef up one section of it or to keep adding. Admittedly there's two out of the four sections that don't have very much and a third I'm still working on. I guess I should keep writing and hope it eventually comes to me again or something. As you probably noticed, my deep rooted problem is organization. Well, since you seem to prefer not to show me the work, at least let me tell you this: Keep on writing, my friend. You'll be doing the world a favor if you do. :) But if it's writers block... I recommend you do what I do whenever I seem to have the dreaded ailment: Take a walk, get some fresh air; or at the very least: take a break. I came back and finished my assignment without much problem because my mind was more clear and relaxed. By the way, did you choose that story to show me because it had Lute in it? XD I... Don't like criticizing people, so... I'll keep my mouth shut here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chalis Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Fan fiction was created by fangirls. This is fact. Then why are your words struck through? I dunno, Shakespeare liked to do a lot with his historical plays... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rodykitty Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Then why are your words struck through?He demands DLC costs for the uncensored version. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chalis Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Well, since you seem to prefer not to show me the work, at least let me tell you this: Keep on writing, my friend. You'll be doing the world a favor if you do. :) But if it's writers block... I recommend you do what I do whenever I seem to have the dreaded ailment: Take a walk, get some fresh air; or at the very least: take a break. I came back and finished my assignment without much problem because my mind was more clear and relaxed. By the way, did you choose that story to show me because it had Lute in it? XD I... Don't like criticizing people, so... I'll keep my mouth shut here. I wouldn't mind showing you. It's FE4 fanfiction starring [guess who] but since I'm not very organized I literally stare at a blank page for a bit before I start pulling dictionary words out. Last time it was 'clandestine'. I chose that story because it's the only one that's finished considering it's a one-shot. Oh, and that I was praised by a random Anon for it. I like that Anon. That Anon fed my inner muse. Criticism is all I have ;_; gib me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lux Aeterna Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 I wouldn't mind showing you. It's FE4 fanfiction starring [guess who] but since I'm not very organized I literally stare at a blank page for a bit before I start pulling dictionary words out. Last time it was 'clandestine'. I chose that story because it's the only one that's finished considering it's a one-shot. Oh, and that I was praised by a random Anon for it. I like that Anon. That Anon fed my inner muse. Criticism is all I have ;_; gib me. Well... I'd prefer it if you showed me tomorrow. I tend to think better in the daytime. If you're around then, I'd be glad to help. ^^ Sorry, but I really can't be of much help right now. *cries* I was simply going to agree with you. It seemed a little... Unorganized, at places, that's all. But honestly, other than that, it was great! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chalis Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 *begins the process of self-loathing* ...This person has my same problem. =O! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fia Posted July 30, 2009 Author Share Posted July 30, 2009 Back and I have to say goodbye again, lolclass. Also, Chal. If you want, we can talk about your fanfic later... =o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Tarrasque Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 (edited) BLASPHEMY. I second this. Also, Ah hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Edited July 30, 2009 by Sirius Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lux Aeterna Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Also, Ah hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha ... Since no else is asking, I will: What in the world is so funny? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rodykitty Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 (edited) Goddess Icons are the same in FE6-10. However, the icon is different than FE3/DS': , FE1/2 doesn't have icons for items/weapons, and FE4/5 just use rings for stat boosters. Edited July 30, 2009 by Chainey Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Tarrasque Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 ... Since no else is asking, I will: What in the world is so funny? Read: Yes, Sapphire Cup with Jack Levin (Astro Robin) because I'm used to Captain Falcon but he sucks in Big Blue and Mute City Sapphire. Red Gazelle had 372 and I had 371 and I was about 0:00:050 from ending up in 8th place in Mute City which would've made me win the cup = Also, it sucks in Sapphire's Mute City when you take the floating high and end up with such speed that crash into a wall a bit above the main high :( I CAN NEVER KILL MY RIVAL IN MUTE CITY UNLESS IT'S BLACK BULL AND HE'S 3 CARS AROUND ME! BULLSHIT! Oh and this is on Master Class btw. I'll laugh if I have an easier time with the Emerald Cup on Master >_>. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoNameAtAll Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 I second this. Third'd. FE7 is more boring. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lux Aeterna Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Read: I'm assuming this means you've beat the emerald cup? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rodykitty Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 4th'd. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Tarrasque Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 I'm assuming this means you've beat the emerald cup? Yup... I hear diamond cup's gonna be a real bitch though. Haven't even tried to beat it on Novice so it'll be a while. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marthur Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 *Rp as kid* Don't worry Mr. Dio. My mom and dad told me that drinking was wrong! I would never even go near that stuff! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lux Aeterna Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Holy... When Julia does the Narga event, the music is the same as when you talk to Athos in the Nabata desert!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoNameAtAll Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Holy... When Julia does the Narga event, the music is the same as when you talk to Athos in the Nabata desert!!! Other way around. Since, y'know, FE4 came first. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lux Aeterna Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Other way around. Since, y'know, FE4 came first. I never referred to which was first. I just said the music is the same. : P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Tarrasque Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Grats on beating FE4 I guess... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lux Aeterna Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Grats on beating FE4 I guess... I haven't beat it yet Sirius. ^^ All that's left is Julius. I plan to kill him tomorrow. Right now I need some sleep. G'night. ^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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