Rei Rei Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 So, Mangafox is a chapter behind on Steel Ball Run. Turns out the most recent chapter is actually Chapter 75, not 74. It's still behind 20 chapters, but... I won't even begin part 8 without part 7 ending. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheEnd Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 (edited) Almost no revision suggestions in chapter 6... I can just hope that's a good thing. And I think I'll be releasing updates on Mon/Wed/Fri from now on. Three chapters per week doesn't sound too bad. Enjoy chapter 7, etc. Edited July 1, 2011 by TheEnd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chalis Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 Pg100- It took me a while for me to realize Celice wasn't talking to Arthur. Maybe something like "Since you're a girl, we can't have you overexert yourself with us" or something similar. Levin is the dick, Holsety is just multiplying that by ten. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheEnd Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 Pg100- It took me a while for me to realize Celice wasn't talking to Arthur. Maybe something like "Since you're a girl, we can't have you overexert yourself with us" or something similar. Levin is the dick, Holsety is just multiplying that by ten. Yeah, it took me a while to notice he was talking to Patty, too. I translated the whole dialogue completely wrong in the first time, it's worded funkily But I think there might be double meaning in that dialogue (you're a girl, so it'd be tough for you): either it's the obvious "go back to the kitchen", or "Arthur is in this group, ARE YOU SURE?" Maybe. Opinions/suggestions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psych Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 105 -> Our hidden unit strikes them from behind, in a Pinger Attack. (Should be Pincer.) Then finally Leaf and the Others take the castle. (I thought they were the pincer attack.) 118 -> I've never experienced more happiness until today. (That just kinda sounds weird..) 119 -> This might just be me, but when Aless says Eltoshan, is it supposed to be Aless or something or is he referring to his father? That's kinda confusing. 132 -> While the others keeps them busy! (Should be keep.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chalis Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 Yeah, it took me a while to notice he was talking to Patty, too. I translated the whole dialogue completely wrong in the first time, it's worded funkily But I think there might be double meaning in that dialogue (you're a girl, so it'd be tough for you): either it's the obvious "go back to the kitchen", or "Arthur is in this group, ARE YOU SURE?" Look who's talking, Celice. Maybe if Arthur says something unrelated "what's going on over here" -wise ("I'm in this group too." ?) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheEnd Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 (edited) 105 -> Our hidden unit strikes them from behind, in a Pinger Attack. (Should be Pincer.) Then finally Leaf and the Others take the castle. (I thought they were the pincer attack.) 118 -> I've never experienced more happiness until today. (That just kinda sounds weird..) 119 -> This might just be me, but when Aless says Eltoshan, is it supposed to be Aless or something or is he referring to his father? That's kinda confusing. 132 -> While the others keeps them busy! (Should be keep.) 105 - It's already pincer. Blame the font. 118 - Both sound weird tbh Maybe I'll just change it to something more generic like THIS IS THE HAPPIEST DAY OF MY LIFE (because that's what he means), then. Though I need to match it with his previous bubble... I wonder if "... never I had felt as fortunate as today" would work, grammatically. 119 - It's like "ever heard about Eltoshan? Yeah, I'm his son." 132 - fixed Look who's talking, Celice. Maybe if Arthur says something unrelated "what's going on over here" -wise ("I'm in this group too." ?) That sounds good to me. Edited July 1, 2011 by TheEnd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Rei Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 C'mon translators, get part 7 done already! TE go give them a hand Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheEnd Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 I didn't even read Part 4 onwards Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Rei Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 I didn't even read Part 4 onwards That's not important, really. Well, kinda Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icon of Sin Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Didn't miss a thing I see. My friend loves LoH : TitS. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheEnd Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 That's not important, really. Well, kinda CONTEXT Didn't miss a thing I see. My friend loves LoH : TitS. Of course. I approve. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icon of Sin Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 I approve. First joke that came around : when another friend of ours noticed that Trails in the Sky could be shortened as TitS, he saw that LoH could also mean Lots of Huge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheEnd Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 First joke that came around : when another friend of ours noticed that Trails in the Sky could be shortened as TitS, he saw that LoH could also mean Lots of Huge It's so ironic that the vast majority of TitS' female characters are actually quite modestly sized. And that only changes in the second series... which probably won't be called TitS if it's released it the west. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icon of Sin Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 It's so ironic that the vast majority of TitS' female characters are actually quite modestly sized. And that only changes in the second series... which probably won't be called TitS if it's released it the west. Clearly Nihon Falcom and Tecmo are in complete opposites when talking about breasts. I should show him YsF once he gets himself a new computer...or my old one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheEnd Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 (edited) Clearly Nihon Falcom and Tecmo are in complete opposites when talking about breasts. I should show him YsF once he gets himself a new computer...or my old one. Though lately... Guaranteed success, huh. Edited July 2, 2011 by TheEnd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icon of Sin Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Guaranteed success, huh. I'm unsure about it. From what I know he's not much of an action RPG fan and prefers turn based ones. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheEnd Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 I'm unsure about it. From what I know he's not much of an action RPG fan and prefers turn based ones. TIME TO CHANGE HIS MIND. Sleep. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icon of Sin Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 TIME TO CHANGE HIS MIND. Sleep. I'll do so thanks to the soundtrack. Sweet dreams. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheEnd Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 I had a dream. In it, AceNoctali said his interests shifted and he wasn't going to continue translating Fujimori, gave me his raws and allowed me to pick the project up. I'll do so thanks to the soundtrack. That's the plan. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marthur Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 (edited) I had a dream. In it, AceNoctali said his interests shifted and he wasn't going to continue translating Fujimori, gave me his raws and allowed me to pick the project up. Maybe it was a premonition. Edited July 2, 2011 by Marthur Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marthur Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 @TE: P120: "We don't have time to waste on a single enemy!" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NTG Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Regarding 118, maybe one of these? this is the most happiest I've ever been this is the most happiness I've ever experienced I've never been happier than I have today 127- empty bubble? in bottom-right panel 131- why are you still (just seemed odd to me) why are you holding back why aren't you attacking why are you just sitting there why are you not moving Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marthur Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Regarding 118, maybe one of these? this is the most happiest I've ever been Can you really say that? :S Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NTG Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Can you really say that? :S aw darnit "most happiest" is redundant indeed or whatever you call it :( this is the happiest I've ever been there! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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