Kriemhild Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 Some stuff I wrote for the hack. Comments, suggestions? [spoiler=Lumi's C4 conversations.] Chapter opening Convo (before scene shifts to the player group): (Lumi enters) Ganter: Ah. Good. You came, Lady Lumi. There’s a group of bandits approaching. Would you mind helping us again? Lumi: I will see to that they do not harm the village, Sir Ganter. Ganter: You have my gratitude again. Recruitment convo: Lumi: Leave this village at once, fiends! Or suffer the wrath of my blade! Renair: We are not bandits! Please listen to us, we just want to get through. We mean no harm? Lumi: Is that true? Renair: If I speak falsely, you may strike me down on the spot. Lumi: Hm… very well. I’ll see if I can talk to Sir Ganter for you. Renair: Thank you. (Lumi joins) Boss Convo with Ganter: Ganter: What is the meaning of this, Lady Lumi? Lumi: Sir Ganter, they are not bandits. They merely wish to get through. Ganter: Bah! I can’t believe it, you actually believed them? You’ll have to get past me first! Lumi: Sir Ganter! I do not wish to fight you! After the Chapter: Lumi (to Renair): Sir Ganter… he was a good man. It was just that… there were many bandits attack at this village in the recent days, and he got paranoid. Renair: … I am sorry… Renair: By the way… I never learned of your name. Lumi: Luminis. Lumi for short. Renair: Thank you, Lumi. Lumi: Eh. Do you mind if I travel with you? There is someone I need to find and I don’t know this place well. Renair: Of course! [spoiler=Noctian's C23 convos] Chapter Opening (after the whole already-written opening is done): Noctian: Lady Luminis… I have failed you… (eyes closed, not smiling, as it if he was crying) Random bandit: Hehe, ’s a nice lookin' sword you got th--- Noctian: -CRITBLICK- Get out of my face! You scum of the earth, nothing could bring her back, stop coming near me! Recruitment: (Lumi on the left, Noctian’s back to her on the other side on the right) Lumi: NOCTIAN! Noctian: That voice…(*turns around, Lumi runs to him and embraces him) Lumi: You are alive! Noctian: My Lady… I… I… (closes his eyes) Lumi: Don’t worry about it… come with me, there’s much fighting to be done. We’ll catch up later! (smiles) Noctian: O…of course, my Lady. After chapter is over: (all three lords on left, Noctian on right) Noctian: I apologize for any trouble I may have caused you earlier. Renair: No need for apologies. I take you are the one that Lumi is looking for? Noctian: To the best of my knowledge, I am, milady. If it’s not too much trouble, may I stay with her for as long as she is here? Renair (or the main Lord, whichever one): Of course. Poor Ganter... Those conversations look pretty good except I'm not sure it's gonna look good with three lords on the left of the screen. FE normally puts maximum two people on any side iirc. The RNG hates you. Yup. But what I don't get is that none of the options would have allowed me to win. It has to be either higher or lower and if the RNG decides to make it the same, you lose. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 It's trolling you. Well, Renair has to be there since she's the one to recruit Lumi who has to recruit Noctian. Then I guess... one of the others? If it doesn't look with three, that is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Rey León Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 Boo. One slot left and that's reserved for Proto which leaves no room for my River character. Who am gonna get laid a paired ending with now? :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 Lumi, durhu-*shot* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 (edited) LOL. I dunno. One of the other mages? Lumi has too many paired endings. Two is enough. Edited September 19, 2010 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 Amelia *Shot* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Rey León Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 Lumi has too many paired endings. Two is enough. Aw, I wanted to do a PE where we duel to the death and it's left ambiguous as to who won and came out with the title of "Saint of Swords". :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Rey León Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 Amelia *Shot* Hope it was a headshot. :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 Aw, I wanted to do a PE where we duel to the death and it's left ambiguous as to who won and came out with the title of "Saint of Swords". :P If it's not a romantic paired ending, actually, I'm fine with it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kriemhild Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 Boo. One slot left and that's reserved for Proto which leaves no room for my River character. Who am gonna get laid a paired ending with now? :P Wait, you didn't submit a Myrm/SM yet? LOL. I dunno. One of the other mages? Lumi has too many paired endings. Two is enough. Noctian and...? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 (edited) Chase. Rein wrote the supports and gave me two endings, one friend ending and one romantic ending. I liked the supports, and the A support works best with the romantic one so I went with that. NoctianxLumi, however, is faster than ColmxNeimi. Edited September 19, 2010 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kriemhild Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 (edited) Chase. Rein wrote the supports and gave me two endings, one friend ending and one romantic ending. I liked the supports, and the A support works best with the romantic one so I went with that. NoctianxLumi, however, is faster than ColmxNeimi. Well, if you allowed the ChasexLumi pairing, then I'm sure El Ray Leon would do anything to get another paired ending for you. For a support to be faster than ColmxNeimi... is gonna be inevitable. And awesome too, for efficiency runs. Edited September 19, 2010 by Proto Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 (edited) Except Noctian joins 19 chapter after Lumi. But it IS Anima x Fire at 80+5. I just don't want Lumi falling for every dude she supports with. >___< besides her brother because this isn't Judgral. Edited September 19, 2010 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 How about you do the writing and I fix the grammatical mistakes? That way both of us contribute, right? Okay then. I'll write these supports at school. 8] Amelia, PM me Vincent and Amelia's info (backstory, personality, etc.) Eh, K. *revives thread* New mug~ for Adrian, bard/trapboy. Oh damn, that's nice! Amelia *Shot* >.>;; I have Vincent! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 Oh damn, that's nice! Thanks! ... Trapboy is trap. He's 20. XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Rey León Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 If it's not a romantic paired ending, actually, I'm fine with it. Cool. Our relationship will be what Mia x Lucia's should have been! (Too bad I can't support with Noctian though, I feel my character's supposed to know him) if trapboy wasn't a bard, I'd support with him. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 (edited) Cool. Our relationship will be what Mia x Lucia's should have been! (Too bad I can't support with Noctian though, I feel my character's supposed to know him) if trapboy wasn't a bard, I'd support with him. If there was only another slot... Noctian's on popular demand. 8D Proto's Lumi's bro, though,so he has priority there for Noctian support. He could still have a post-recruitment convo with him. Bards/Dancers are useful. And he actually has some form of durability here. Take a look at his growths later. Tethys was boss on Jehanna run. Lets Saleh do multiple-warps. Edited September 19, 2010 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 >.>;; I have Vincent! :3 Orly Wanna write the support? I have school and will be gone for the week. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fayt Zelpher Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Rey León Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 Wait, you didn't submit a Myrm/SM yet? I did, but because I was too slow, I missed out on adding my character's mate. I guess I have to wait for a character to be cut or find another that's unattached. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 ... *Kicks Fayt* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Rey León Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 ... Anything you want to talk about? You know we're only talking about the hack because we got nothin' else to do. :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 SUPPORT ADRIAN. HE IS THUNDER AND GIVES DURABILITY Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 *Kicks Fayt again* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 Don't kick Fayt. :< Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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