Thor Odinson Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 Layers ftw. One day, though, I will challenge myself to no layers. Just for one painting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 Hey Lumi am I doin' it right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 Lineart's a bit messy, but that depends on style. So far, yes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 (edited) Well, that was probably the most indepth critique I've ever done of a moderately bad story. ...I kinda wish someone would come and slam my self-esteem. I started ToKA to get better at writing, but...I've just been floating along so far :P Edited October 7, 2010 by Furetchen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 pfft, that's why I have 5 layers of linart then again my style is multiple strokes as it is. >_> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 (edited) I suggest do a final, cleaner layer of lineart on top, and then hiding the rest of the layers. Mine is too... I just learned connecting lines through years of practice. :> And damn, Furet, that is in-detail. ... You're probably one of the best writers on SF. It's hard to critique your stuff. Edited October 7, 2010 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 And damn, Furet, that is in-detail. Credit to Darros where it's due, he gave me a lot of bad shit to yell at. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 I suggest do a final, cleaner layer of lineart on top, and then hiding the rest of the layers. Mine is too... I just learned connecting lines through years of practice. :> That's what I've been doing for the last 5 layers...XD My hand isn't steady with this tablet yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 Ah yeah. ... I wish someone could give me an in-detail critique to my artwork. Because I WANNA BE THE VERY BEST THAT---*shot* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 That's what I've been doing for the last 5 layers...XD My hand isn't steady with this tablet yet. Do a different color with each layer of lineart sketch. Ultimately ending with black. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 ... You're probably one of the best writers on SF. It's hard to critique your stuff. Thanks, but... statistically speaking there's always gonna be someone better here. Shuuda maybe? Never actually seen his work, but he certainly critiques like he's qualified. And Eclipse is about on my level, so...we can definitely learn from each other, at least. Ah c'mon, with all the continuity errors and forgotten ancillary characters...(well, I do sorta have a plan for the Great Zimbardo...) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 (edited) I can critique your sprites, drawing isn't me. Yet If you want a giant paragraph/critique about you sprite, ask, most of the time I'll just point out obvious and not even bother to zoom in. =\ Black eh? Alright. Edited October 7, 2010 by Adell Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 (edited) Alright. Next sprite. I'm prepared for giant paragraph. I generally go from a light shade of blue, to a darker shade, then to black. Also use a thinner brush every time. Eclipse is great too. Well, I'm amazed by your ability to dialogue as it is. Edited October 7, 2010 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 Well, I'm amazed by your ability to dialogue as it is. Dialogue is easy. Descriptions are an irritating balance to pull off between Way Too Much and, well...Darros. Plot is where my things go unstuck. I've never written anything that's gone past chapter fourteen. Except that book I tried to write four and a half years ago, that made it to chapter 22 ... but each chapter was like three pages. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 Ah, thinner, got it. And it'll only be a paragraph if there's some thing REALLY wrong with them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BK-201 Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 Hi. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 I am the opposite. Good at BSing up plot but can never express them properly with words. Description... is where I'm really bad at. And this is why I'm a manga artist instead of a writer. Well, I hope I don't make too big of a mistake in sprites. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 And this is why I'm a manga artist instead of a writer. We must team up. Hey BK! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 I'm getting 60's in English. Even if it's probably because my teacher hates Asians I am clearly not suited for writing anything. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 Yes we do, Furet. The worst I've done in English is 79, I think. ... Damn essays. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 I Love Essays So Damn Easy To Do Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 Essays are so boring. I fall asleep. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 I could type foreeeeeeeeeeever on a subject if it was an essay about something solid. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 I couldn't give a crap on most of the essays assigned. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 What about if it was about PS? c: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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