Snike Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 Yeah, I'm just starting up, so I only have one sprite so far. This is Eric, a character in the Lord of Azure Flame RP that is ongoing here. Comments and suggestions would be nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 (edited) Hm let me see if i can fix it a bit Some errors involving shading and borders Edited May 31, 2010 by Kai-Sama Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snike Posted May 31, 2010 Author Share Posted May 31, 2010 Around which parts? I'll try to fix it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deliriyum Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 (edited) The colors in his hair make it look really flat, I think more contrast is needed. The collar of his undershirt looks a bit messy. His eyes look a bit colorless. The red belt needs more shading. Pretty good for first attempt. Edited May 31, 2010 by Core Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 My attempt at fixing Compare them both And before you come here and say it sucks Nady LETS SEE YOU SPRITE WHEN YOUR HIGH DELUSIONAL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snike Posted June 1, 2010 Author Share Posted June 1, 2010 Credits to Kai for fixing the model up, and Nadeisco/Kanami for making one of the original mugs. Design based off of Lloyd Reed and the aforementioned model of Eric by Nade. This one looks better than the first, IMO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 Oh right, you mentioned that Eric was pale. The hair seems a bit too bright though, unless that's what you were going for. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snike Posted June 1, 2010 Author Share Posted June 1, 2010 I'll darken it later. But, yeah, I'm pretty happy with it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 Lol, my name is eric and I'm black, tee hee. The neck could still use a bit of work though. I'm guessing the washed out colors are what you were aiming for? -Dancer Away! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Cynthia- Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 Yeah I like it, except the left side of his neck makes it look like he might have leprosy or something. Not sure if that's intentional. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snike Posted June 1, 2010 Author Share Posted June 1, 2010 Darkened the hair, and tried to get rid of that spot on his neck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Cynthia- Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 (edited) I liked the older hair better (the new one has too much contrast or something), good work on the spot though. Edited June 1, 2010 by -Cynthia- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deliriyum Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 You need to darken all the hair, not just the top shade. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snike Posted June 1, 2010 Author Share Posted June 1, 2010 This good? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deliriyum Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 Yeah it looks better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 (edited) This good? owowowow Eyes burning. That aside. The face looks generally fine, same with the hair, the undershirt looks a bit light, try darkening it or even giving it a second shade to shade it and see what happens. Also, look at some previous FE mugs and try to shade the neck a bit, and if you can, work on the overall shading of his skin. There's also pillow shading on his coat but I won't comment on that right now. >_> Overall pretty good for your first sprite. Edited June 1, 2010 by AstraLunaSol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snike Posted June 1, 2010 Author Share Posted June 1, 2010 Thanks. Sort of still a work in progress. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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