Vampire Elf Posted November 25, 2010 Share Posted November 25, 2010 (edited) Yup :D, you're more than welcome to Edited November 25, 2010 by Vampire Elf Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted November 26, 2010 Author Share Posted November 26, 2010 nymore hair like? also changed his pose and stuffs. Thanks Sir Mentor Vamp and Seph for the advice sir mentor..how would i shade the cloth hanging off him XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 26, 2010 Share Posted November 26, 2010 @Teal I think you could split up the hair more there. It still looks really stuck together, and, from what I remember of Vincent in FF7 and Advent Children, his hair was really stringy and thin. @Green there should still be some more shading there, I feel. His hair IS coming down over his face, and it's not that close, so there would be a more profound shadow. It does look better overall, though. As for shading the cloak... I'll leave that to Vamp :P I don't know much about shading that stuff, but I think the shading would have to pertain somewhat to where he is underneath. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted November 29, 2010 Author Share Posted November 29, 2010 /random. Seph, would your comments change on the hair if i said those parts were jusr his bangs? he is gonna have hair at the back. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 29, 2010 Share Posted November 29, 2010 (edited) Nooooooooot really. I guess I'd have to see what you're talking about, really. Edited November 29, 2010 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted November 29, 2010 Author Share Posted November 29, 2010 okay. no worries. i just thought bout it before. im gonna finish the rest of him before i redo the hair. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted December 7, 2010 Author Share Posted December 7, 2010 (edited) *sigh* I feel so fucking jaded recently. *gives up on life slowly XD* I really shouldnt be making this but..nyeah...Needs shading.. *ive never drawn a shirtless man properly before..so sorry if the anatomy is pretty terrible* Reference: [ Edited December 7, 2010 by TheReaper Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peener weener Posted December 8, 2010 Share Posted December 8, 2010 *sigh* I feel so fucking jaded recently. *gives up on life slowly XD* I really shouldnt be making this but..nyeah...Needs shading.. *ive never drawn a shirtless man properly before..so sorry if the anatomy is pretty terrible* Reference: [ Uuuuunfff... You should reference some other shirtless sprite. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prompto Posted December 8, 2010 Share Posted December 8, 2010 Yeeeeeaah, I'm sorry, but that ref is bad. I don't think dudes should be that such an ugly type of skinny. >_>;; Lumi's pretty good at shirtless guys, so, you should try to get pointers from her. :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted December 9, 2010 Author Share Posted December 9, 2010 Entry to xmas comp. Nakey... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted December 13, 2010 Author Share Posted December 13, 2010 lawl im giving up on life hair and cleaness of his face is Vamps Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 13, 2010 Share Posted December 13, 2010 The body seems a bit skinny IMHO, but I don't know your reference. I quite like the lenthened Holly thing there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted December 13, 2010 Author Share Posted December 13, 2010 im not great with references ive found I prefer to use my imagination. I used this drawing I found for a rough reference in the end Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKTâ„¢ Posted December 13, 2010 Share Posted December 13, 2010 I don't think his body should be completely facing forward, so turn it around to the left. Nice use of Pris' feather. And I love your Vincent ref btw. x3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted December 15, 2010 Author Share Posted December 15, 2010 Mkay I'll try that Nickt. And that drawing is definatly my fave Vincent fan art ever. It's the most realistic of him Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peener weener Posted December 15, 2010 Share Posted December 15, 2010 His arms are way too thick compared to the torso, the ribs look... wrong, the angle is awkward. I seem like a dick. But I am trying to help. Right? I mean. Wow. I'm a moron. ANYWAY DAT HAIR YES Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted December 15, 2010 Author Share Posted December 15, 2010 No thank you ~ <3 any advice is much welcomed。 the angle of him I can't really help since I for an unknown reason made him facing forward. And Vamp did his hair and made it neater/better. But I'll redo the arms and ribs. I had no idea how to shade them XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peener weener Posted December 17, 2010 Share Posted December 17, 2010 Actually... it might be that the torso is too thin? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted December 20, 2010 Author Share Posted December 20, 2010 (edited) i made his torso wider and arms more contrasting *nods* 'nd help with hair would be greatly appreciated for Yazoo. i tried first to splice him but then got annoyed. so did this. oh my his body is too narrow. *back to paint* Edited December 20, 2010 by TheReaper Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken Zomg Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 (edited) The body should be about that wide, and have less of a curve. Edited December 20, 2010 by Ken Zomg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted December 20, 2010 Author Share Posted December 20, 2010 thats a nice drawing *hits head* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken Zomg Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 Well, you can't expect me to make that using same-color, same-opacity pixels... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted December 20, 2010 Author Share Posted December 20, 2010 no sorry i didnt mean it to sound rude!! i was just complementing your drawing., sorry! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken Zomg Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 Huh? I was just explaining that I wouldn't be able to make that in sprite form. You didn't sound rude at all. :P And thanks for the compliment! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted December 27, 2010 Author Share Posted December 27, 2010 merry xmas people. etc Yazoo FF7 Advent Children. .pft Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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