Thor Odinson Posted January 12, 2011 Author Share Posted January 12, 2011 Hey, she only changed from Seth to Furet~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted January 12, 2011 Share Posted January 12, 2011 You forgot Shanan cochina. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted January 12, 2011 Author Share Posted January 12, 2011 Shanan was in the sig and coexisting with Seth. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted March 4, 2011 Author Share Posted March 4, 2011 Holy crap. I haven't sprited in a really long time. Anyway, with an update. Sprited Sakusa's personal mug because I can. I'm so out of practice. D: Cred to Astra for fixing the face for me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 I'm not a good spriting, so woo, not much critque. Blue box= Needs moar shading. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted March 4, 2011 Author Share Posted March 4, 2011 ...ohshit I forgot about that part. See, the hair wasn't there in the original version. Sakusa asked me to add it on later, so... derpLumi. Will fix next update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astelaine Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 Wow, beautiful. I love the hair and costume design. :) It's good to see a sprite from you again! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted April 5, 2011 Author Share Posted April 5, 2011 (edited) <3 Older!Lumi. Anywaaaay Need to gather crit for this. Eyes of asdf have been covered. I'll fix that later. Not touching PS for the rest of the day because homework. Some AAing missing on the cloak is because it used to be black. I fixed it already but haven't been .png'd yet. But yeah. Go nuts. Edited April 5, 2011 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 Whole mug is too small, dudette. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted April 6, 2011 Author Share Posted April 6, 2011 It's certainly bigger than the original Lumi Mug. :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 (edited) Pretty sure he means the head, Lumes, which IS too small. The head, from the top of the hair (not counting the ponytail thingy in the back that's holding up some hair, since, you wouldn't count the ponytail in Lyn's sprite, either.) is only 45, when it should be at least 48, and the face is really not wide enough. The armor is wide enough, at 87. Edited April 6, 2011 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted April 6, 2011 Author Share Posted April 6, 2011 That, I can fix. Might as well take a break from homeworking anyway. Boney, be more specific next time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 I actually meant it when I said the WHOLE mug, but really, some sizes are just off, I didn't observe enough. The arms are too thin and the head too small for the torso. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted April 6, 2011 Author Share Posted April 6, 2011 There is no arms. Just cloaks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 I know, but the cloak suggests how thick the arms are, and it looks like they're really thin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Blind Archer Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 (edited) There is no arms. Just cloaks. Not an excuse, especially not from someone with as much experience with the human form as you have. Honestly, you're one of the last people I'd expect to hear that from. The shading on your cloak flows from in to out in a very steady curve, and this implies that either A ) she's got pencil-sized arms like Bones is suggesting, or B ) your statement is to be taken literally. There is no arms. And I doubt you were going the amputee route. Cloth takes the shape of whatever is underneath, and in the case of arms, there would be more evidence. I don't have any experience with draping yet, so I can't tell you how to fix it. All I can tell you is that something needs fixed, and the cloth will likely have to be redone, WITH the arms fully drawn in first so you can get the general shape of the cloak to fit it. Edited April 6, 2011 by The Blind Archer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted April 6, 2011 Author Share Posted April 6, 2011 Compared to a few chicks and Lucius. Hits the 7 con mark like I wanted her to. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Blind Archer Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 (edited) Then redraw the cloak using that as a guideline, because, I repeat, the shading is what's making it look like she has no arms. lol using stats as a basis for character design Edited April 6, 2011 by The Blind Archer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted April 6, 2011 Author Share Posted April 6, 2011 I honestly have no idea how to shade cloaks in pixel style to fit the shape of arms. Bottom-up shot of my intentions that is completely wrong in terms of perspective but I cbf to do it correctly oh well. Should I just make the cloaks bigger? Unless I can get some sort of reference for this. o3o What I like numbers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Blind Archer Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 (edited) A little Google-fu, and we have references. One, two, and the last one is probably closer to what you want (possibly nsfw, it's just a doll). Edited April 6, 2011 by The Blind Archer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted April 6, 2011 Author Share Posted April 6, 2011 Thanks Dei~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted April 6, 2011 Author Share Posted April 6, 2011 Update. owo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xiltas Crysten Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 Looks better thatn the the previous one, though I think her right eye (left eye our point of view) should be moved down one pixel. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted April 6, 2011 Author Share Posted April 6, 2011 That has been done during the various stages of testing. That is the only angle the eyes can be at without looking really awkward. I've already tried. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xiltas Crysten Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 Really? Well, that would have been the only thing I would have changed, aside from that it's perfect.^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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