Joerachi Posted October 18, 2010 Share Posted October 18, 2010 I need to make it more masculine. i'm trying to make it look like me dammit. ಠ_ಠ No excuse for it looking blatantly like Amelia though. Why do I look like her so much ;-; Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Light Lord Posted October 18, 2010 Share Posted October 18, 2010 Mmm, it looks a bit odd in the neck. Also, maybe I'm wrong with this one or I'm getting blind, the colors of the neck are a bit different to those of the head. Cool work with the mug and keep it up, hope you enter in ALS sprite competitions in the near future. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted October 18, 2010 Author Share Posted October 18, 2010 Mmm, it looks a bit odd in the neck. Also, maybe I'm wrong with this one or I'm getting blind, the colors of the neck are a bit different to those of the head. Cool work with the mug and keep it up, hope you enter in ALS sprite competitions in the near future. The neck does look weird from this much zoomed out. NEEDS BLACK OUTLINEING The neck colors were taken right off of the face. I'm pretty sure they are the same color. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Light Lord Posted October 18, 2010 Share Posted October 18, 2010 Then I must get some glasses. Anyways, it's quite good in my opinion, welcome to the spriter community (even if I'm a novice ). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted October 18, 2010 Author Share Posted October 18, 2010 (edited) Here is attempt number 4 (Yes. Number 4.) Edited October 18, 2010 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanami Posted October 18, 2010 Share Posted October 18, 2010 Number 4 is now missing an eyebrow. And as you said yourself, neck (and body) lacks outlining. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted October 18, 2010 Share Posted October 18, 2010 The neck needs shading under the hair where the hair comes over it. It looks super flat. Also, unless you've been near an explosion of fire as of late, you need eyebrows XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted October 18, 2010 Author Share Posted October 18, 2010 (edited) WHOOOOOOOA NELLY. Am I missing an eyebrow? Fixing. Edited October 18, 2010 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted October 18, 2010 Author Share Posted October 18, 2010 (edited) Fix'd the eyebrow problem and did a wee bit of shading. Edited October 19, 2010 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted October 19, 2010 Author Share Posted October 19, 2010 Yay for triple posts. silly photoshop, There isn't 23 colors in this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted November 10, 2010 Author Share Posted November 10, 2010 Ok guys, seriously, I feel guilty about quad posting. It's just like my FE10HM Thread, for gods sake. I enlarged it just for easier viewing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 10, 2010 Share Posted November 10, 2010 The neck shading is way off and the clothes have no border color. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted November 10, 2010 Author Share Posted November 10, 2010 The neck shading is way off and the clothes have no border color. I was toying around with the hair and I guess I forgot to correct the neck. Silly me :P . I assume we're talking about the inside and not the cloak right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 10, 2010 Share Posted November 10, 2010 I'm talking about the cloak. That blue you have there is not an adequate substitute. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted November 10, 2010 Author Share Posted November 10, 2010 (edited) What do you mean that? That kind of flew right over my head. And since I'm posting. Edited November 10, 2010 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 10, 2010 Share Posted November 10, 2010 THERE IS NO BORDER COLOR ON THE CLOAK. Argh. The purple you have around the head is not on the cloak, is what I'm talking about. The neck looks 1% better, but it's still way too bright on the right side (OPV) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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