Pnorm24 Posted October 1, 2011 Share Posted October 1, 2011 (edited) I like fancy words what can I say? Anyway I've been spriting on and off for about a year or so. After entering a few of the spriting contests on Shrine of Seals and just recently entering in one here I've decided that I should probably make one of these sprite galleries. Here goes nothing I guess. Previous Contest Entries - Lets just get these out of the way... Rebecca, Nino, and Serra Not my exact entry ( I changed up the colors) Looking back it seems way too simple to me Nergal, Kaim, and Murdock I was not of fan of this set but it still turned out relatively ok Louise, Fir, and Eleanora (twas an open splice competition) Another entry that, looking back, is a bit too simple in my opinion Neimi, Brunya, and Ursula My personal favorite out of all my contest entries (so far) It's far from perfect but still... Sain, Jerme, Aion, Canas, and Hugh My entry in the reclassing competition. I accidentally forgot to save the original version and had to remake it. Turned out for the best though. I like this version alot more than the original one Misc. Sprites - Sprites I made in my free time *NEW* / There are two versions of this guy because I couldn't decide which one I liked better. Headband or no? My avi over at Shrine of Seals. He originally had Cameron's armor but I changed it to Zonta's armor. I'll probably change it again if I ever stop being lazy and that won't be any time soon. The angle of his head doesn't really sit right with me. My avi here. The shading on the shoulder pads seem off to me. Especially his right (our left) shoulder pad. What's not wrong with this sprite? I'll probably end up remaking her in the future. The picture in my brain and the picture that I ended up were two completely different things. Definitely one of my lazier sprites. Orson and the beta versions of Kyle and Forde. Another lazy one. Lyn, Farina, and a bit of Natalie for good measure. The pony tail looks a bit off now that I think about it. Third times the charm. Marisa, L'Arachel, and one of the random villagers. Sometimes I wonder if I'm too lazy. Rejects - This is where my unwanted sprites will come to die Believe it or not this was for a contest. We had to make a meme face. I can honestly say I have no love for this sprite. Bad neck shading is bad. High coat collar is high. Horrible contest entry is horrible. NEXT!! A very, very, very poorly done Zihark. Apologies to all Zihark fans out there. If I make any more sprites they'll probably end up here as well. Here being the thread in general and hopefully not the reject pile. Edited October 12, 2011 by Pnorm24 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mariah the Magician Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 You're very good! Your only problem seems to be the head shape on the Zihark, you should take someone like Eliwood and use the back of his hair to fix it right up. xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 blonde girl with a hood is missing the back of her head as well, and the first sprite is borderline on being brainless too (though the bandana might just be at an odd angle). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mariah the Magician Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 I think what the first one needs is hair coming from behind the bandana, even if it's only some short hair (seems off just dissapearing) :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 (edited) Yeah seriously you should try give them room for their brains =D A few of them could use some more shading where the hair reaches their forehead. This is what I see on first glance. Also at first glance, Gheb's head looks way too large compared to his new body XD I like what you did with the one based off of Sain, but his neck is actually pretty long. Try shortening that and it'll look much better =] It's also sorta not in line with his collar. It looks like the collar is shifted too far to the left for his neck to even fit there. There might be a couple other longnecks in there (like possibly the one that's also in your avi), but I'm not too sure so I'll just wait and see if I'm not the only one. It's just Sain's at least where his neck most definitely looks too long. Oh also when people where bandanas they usually don't cover their ears with them. They have them go behind their ears. Or if they do go over their ears, usually not so much. It actually looks kinda lopsided when put on a head facing a different direction. Edited October 19, 2011 by Freohr Datia Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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