fuzz94 Posted May 4, 2012 Author Share Posted May 4, 2012 Gatrie Revamp from Subieko and me. Having trouble figuring out what to do with the hair and I might do more with the armor. Critique? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos Aurion Posted May 4, 2012 Share Posted May 4, 2012 The face isn't in the same direction as Marcus' face, which make the head a bit odd. Maybe it's on purpose, but Gatrie should have blond hair. I don't have much more to say.. Hmm.. I see Marcus, Hector et Gilliam in the mug, am I missing some characters? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 4, 2012 Author Share Posted May 4, 2012 Wil's eyes. The hair for Gatrie has been a trouble for me (First time i did earlier in the thread.) I have no idea how to get his hair down Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos Aurion Posted May 4, 2012 Share Posted May 4, 2012 As for the hair, I think you should splice more than only one character's hair if you want more a Gatrie look. I think you should try to modify a bit the armor (the goldish part) :it would look more unique. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 4, 2012 Author Share Posted May 4, 2012 Yeah that was the plan for the armor. Not so many GBA fe characters have hair like him so it will be a bit of challenge. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 6, 2012 Author Share Posted May 6, 2012 A personal mug I did for ArngrimtheBerserker. I might try to make an eye patch for it if I can figure out how to... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 (edited) Hair flow is kinda derpy, but from here the shading on the rest looks good :P (the shoulder pad looks a little wierd but blame FE6) Edit: actually the shoulder pad is just on an awkward angle. Edited May 6, 2012 by Jubby Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 6, 2012 Author Share Posted May 6, 2012 Hmm. Maybe I'll use someone elses shoulder pad for it. Maybe Wil's works better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 Your work is getting much better than the first time Fuzz. It may not be perfect but deff much better. Keep up the good work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 6, 2012 Author Share Posted May 6, 2012 How is that for the shoulder pad? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 Lumpy, bro. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 The trim is very lumpy and inconsistent. You should reshade it entirely. Trim isn't hard to do, and I think you have enough skill to do trim. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 6, 2012 Author Share Posted May 6, 2012 where exactly? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 Most of it, in all honesty. http://gyazo.com/acb1c00c163040990917790b48a54c0f This area has the worst problems. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 6, 2012 Author Share Posted May 6, 2012 Is that better now? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 Yep. Much better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 Pillowy and lumpy, with awful trim. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 6, 2012 Author Share Posted May 6, 2012 Could you point out where exactly or with a bit more description so I can fix it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 (edited) The entire pauldron? I can't really be more specific if the entire thing in general is lumpy, pillowed, and lacks form. Stop layering all the edges with pixels; not every edge needs to have the darkest colors on it, nor do dark pixels always need to be blended out with mid-tone pixels. The trim width is horribly inconsistent and lacks a definite light source and form. Trim more than just an embossed layer of shiny shit, mate. Also, considering that the pauldron's color is so light to begin with, it doesn't make much sense to use border color to separate trim from pauldron - it's too stark, and all it does it make it look cartoony. Edited May 6, 2012 by jellyFISH Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 7, 2012 Author Share Posted May 7, 2012 (edited) Woah! Lot's of stuff to say haha. I hope this is at least close to what you were trying to tell me to fix. Edited May 7, 2012 by fuzz94 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 12, 2012 Author Share Posted May 12, 2012 (edited) Ayy! This is Anthony, an original character. He's a fighter Edited May 12, 2012 by fuzz94 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sea Lion Posted May 12, 2012 Share Posted May 12, 2012 I'd change the hair color, the middle tone is a little hard to see. The lines on his shirt are also pretty jagged. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted May 12, 2012 Share Posted May 12, 2012 (edited) Nils hair kinda uses 4 shades and more of the darkest blue, go for a better hair color. Edited May 12, 2012 by L95 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 13, 2012 Author Share Posted May 13, 2012 Boom hair color Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted May 13, 2012 Share Posted May 13, 2012 (edited) His hair is burning my eyes out. I've eye goop running down my face like bad mascara. I don't know where you got that hair color, from, but it's absolutely radioactive. Edited May 13, 2012 by jellyFISH Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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