Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 5, 2013 Author Share Posted January 5, 2013 The hair looks better, definitely :P Yeah the shirt shading could still use some fixies but w/e :3 The new armour shading definitely helped that issue. The cloak shading is better with a second shade as well. What's the bit that's kind of above where the cloak attaches on the left OPV though? It's sort of up and to the right a bit :o That was a spliced bit from Ephraim. I'm going to fool around with that a bit more, as well as the shirt. Her cheek's still all jagged, and your trim could use a lot of love. this is the nicest critique you've given me. I assume her right (our left) cheek, correct? I agree. I want to fix it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted January 5, 2013 Share Posted January 5, 2013 ^ Just splice Eirika's jaw back on her face? That'd help it. The splice is getting better though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 6, 2013 Author Share Posted January 6, 2013 Spliced the jaw back and played with cloak positioning. I think it looks better now. I don't know what to do with the shirt just yet, so I'll leave that for next. I also started working on a newer one... it's incredibly basic and needs lots of touch-ups but I figured I'd show off what I have to see where I should go next. Syrene's hair, Wendy's armor, and Marisa's neck can all go choke on a dick. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Gabriel Knight Posted January 6, 2013 Share Posted January 6, 2013 The jaw line of the brown haired girl needs to end beneath her ear. Here, it ends behind her ear. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 10, 2013 Author Share Posted January 10, 2013 The jaw line of the brown haired girl needs to end beneath her ear. Here, it ends behind her ear. It ended beneath her ear before, but the jaw near the end was a little derpy, so I made a quick adjustment. The last line of the jaw is covered by her earring. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 12, 2013 Author Share Posted January 12, 2013 (edited) In an attempt to fix derpiness I said fuck it and spliced on different armor. I'll try to make it less splicey later. Minor hairfixes as well. Little stuff, mostly where the hair meets the armor. I really don't like the neck. Edited January 12, 2013 by Hamlet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted January 12, 2013 Share Posted January 12, 2013 armor's too big Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 12, 2013 Author Share Posted January 12, 2013 armor's too big Unfortunately I'm aware. Male and female socialknights don't necessarily have the same armor requirements. That's going to be the next change after I do something about the goddamn hair and neck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 12, 2013 Author Share Posted January 12, 2013 brb rehaul I'm aware the hair needs work and she needs to look less like Miledy... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 13, 2013 Author Share Posted January 13, 2013 Added a breastplate and a choker to her. I'm willing to fix the choker because it's kind of amateurish. Also altered hair in a few places, and added a tiara. Lots of color changes as well. Hair darkened in both versions, cloak made red in FE7 version, armor in FE8 version made less... bad. The space under her shoulderpad looks like it could use something but I don't know what. Help anyone? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 13, 2013 Author Share Posted January 13, 2013 (edited) I've been a busy bee today. Been working on weapon icons again. I'm going to say this once and only once: Most of the Axes are reshades of existing axes from various FE's. I suck at custom axes. The Magic Swords are also reshades of existing weapons. Anyway, here's a lowdown of the weapons: Iron Sword / Slim Sword / Steel Sword / Silver Sword / Iron Lance / Slim Lance / Steel Lance / Silver Lance / Iron Axe / Steel Axe / Silver AxeKatzbalger / Claymore / Zweihänder / Rapier / Ashlpeiss / Corseque / Fauchard / Dane / (Unnamed Axe) Lancereaver / Armour Cutter / Longsword / Dragon Sword / Axereaver / Riderbane / Knight Pike / Dragonspear / Swordreaver / Halberd / Pollaxe / Dragon Axe Wing Clipper / Hero Sword / Winged Spear / Hero Lance / Flying Axe / Hero Axe Earth Sword / Light Sword / Storm Sword / Killer Sword / Javelin / Pilum / Spiculum / Killer Lance / Hurlbat / Francisca / Killer Axe Turmung (S-Level Sword) / Rameses (S-Level Sword) / Templar (Prf Spear) / (Unnamed S-Level Lance) Edit: And for funsies here's an updated Anya: Hair edits, eye edits, minor color edits. Edited January 13, 2013 by Hamlet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eCut Posted January 13, 2013 Share Posted January 13, 2013 Love looking at icons! I think my favourite is the rapier. :3 My only problem is some of them are not using a dark outline, but that might just be a personal thing for me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heartwhisperer Posted January 13, 2013 Share Posted January 13, 2013 They look good... I don't like very much the red in the Silver Axe, it looks a bit confusing... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 13, 2013 Author Share Posted January 13, 2013 Love looking at icons! I think my favourite is the rapier. :3 My only problem is some of them are not using a dark outline, but that might just be a personal thing for me. Most of my icons use the dark brown, black, and dark purple colors for the outline, although some use lighter colors here and there. I try to balance it out, but I can always look at some outlines and see what I can do. Thanks for the Rapier comment! Although it's mostly an edit of the GBAFE one, hahaha. I think it looks tons better than the original, haha. They look good... I don't like very much the red in the Silver Axe, it looks a bit confusing... It was meant to be a ribbon of sorts (as you can tell, I like ribbons). If it doesn't work I can remove it; it was just an experiment, I guess. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heartwhisperer Posted January 13, 2013 Share Posted January 13, 2013 I don't see why axes should have ribbons... it's okay for lances or some kind of swords, but it's strange for axes... anyway the concept is not that bad if you like it, I was just thinking that that axe's ribbon should be sprited better because right now it's a bit confusing... :) Also I like the title of this topic... genius... ahah.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 18, 2013 Author Share Posted January 18, 2013 Color update on Anya as well as some hair shading here and there. Currently working on a Tier 1 battlesprite. WIP. More weapon icons. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 19, 2013 Author Share Posted January 19, 2013 Two more goodies for you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted January 19, 2013 Share Posted January 19, 2013 the lady's head shape and neck seems a bit weird. the other one looks fine. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted January 19, 2013 Share Posted January 19, 2013 (edited) The other ones jaw is funky. And his whole far cheek. I think the jawline may need to be lowered a bit. (or the mouth is too close to the jaw) Edited January 19, 2013 by L95 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 19, 2013 Author Share Posted January 19, 2013 I'll work on the other one later, but here's a fix on Buck: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted January 19, 2013 Share Posted January 19, 2013 (edited) Much better~ But his jawline shouldn't be going behind his ear. No, seriously. It gives me the creeps. I don't know why. Edited January 19, 2013 by L95 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 19, 2013 Author Share Posted January 19, 2013 Wow, what a dumb mistake on my part, hahaha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 20, 2013 Author Share Posted January 20, 2013 Took in Kate's neck and fixed Buck's jawline. I'm going to get drunk now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 20, 2013 Author Share Posted January 20, 2013 Here's a new one I whipped up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 21, 2013 Author Share Posted January 21, 2013 gyazo-ing this because it's obviously not done but yay hair Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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