Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted July 31, 2008 Share Posted July 31, 2008 (edited) @Nightmare: im goin through with it buddy. im not backing down. ive come so far. Private Eye 007 She will seduce even him our ace in the hole... London is Calling London is heaven London is paradise found Need I continue? Civil War You were my brother... My friend... My rival... And now my enemy. Draw your blade. Our swords shall meet. The sparks will kiss the air. One will live. One will die. But we will both suffer. Let us find paradise! Let us find hell! At your ready... PREPARE YOURSELF!! ok heres the big one... this was possibly the most difficult poem i have ever written. you will soon find out why.... A Lonely Man's Wish This is new to me. I never felt this way towards you... Love? What? This cannot be! The feeling just sprouted. It hasnt been there long... But...love cant be doubted! Its a certain thing. And I am certain. Certain that love is what im feeling. Dont cast me away. Please give me a chance. Hear what i have to say. I thought of you as a friend But now I see... I feel love for you in the end. You are so nice. Your personality is perfect! I know you have probably heard this more than twice... But I want to call you mine. For I love you and only you... ... Cymbeline Cym will you be my Serenes Forest Girlfriend? final word: please? t-that took alot more courage than i thought i had... Edited July 31, 2008 by Gatrie AAUL: Guns Blazing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted July 31, 2008 Author Share Posted July 31, 2008 we britans say Cymbelien not Cymbeleen just an fyi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted July 31, 2008 Share Posted July 31, 2008 Great stuff, man. And good luck... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted July 31, 2008 Author Share Posted July 31, 2008 i never...wrote a poem describing how i feel about a person that way before....it was a first and im scared... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cymbeline Posted July 31, 2008 Share Posted July 31, 2008 Those were really nice poems, Gatrie. But. . . I. . . um. . . you know what my answer is. . . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzaku Posted July 31, 2008 Share Posted July 31, 2008 Those were really nice poems, Gatrie.But. . . I. . . um. . . you know what my answer is NO!!! Just trying to help. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost_Soul_Renault Posted July 31, 2008 Share Posted July 31, 2008 I found the last four lines to "Civil War" to be really good, it fits very well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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