TLSothe Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 (edited) Yes, I used several members of here, but still-- *Mathew puts on a sweatshirt and walks outside* Mathew: Hm... I would rather not do this.. ??:Come on Mathew , you are late! Did you say your goodbyes? Mathew : She--she was asleep, so, no, she will get it. ??: Who is 'she'? I cannot keep track of your family. Mathew : My girlfriend, she is my only family. ??: Okay, let's hurry. Mathew: Yeah, yeah, I am coming, Lyle. Lyle: Okay, but the guys are waiting. Mathew : Uh-huh, I know. So, do we have to do this?? Lyle: Yeah, we do, it isn't a choice man. Mathew : Hrm, okay. Lyle: Yeah, Okay. So, your girlfriend, is she going to understand? Mathew : No. She will not, but, this is not a choice. Lyle: MaSu is up here, like…. I would say 30 miles. Mathew : Excellent. MaSu: Hey, where were you? You took forever. Lyle: Lover-boy had to kissy-kiss his girlfriend good-bye, Mathew : Jerk. MaSu: You idiots, we do not have time for this! Lyle: Yeah, let’s move, before they find us. Mathew : I guess we have no choice... Ranger: Hey!! Who are you three? MaSu: Stand back, this will be quick *MaSu pulls an Elfire tome* *Ranger readies axe* MaSu: Fall, fool. *MaSu casts Elfire* Ranger: Gyargh…..… Lyle: You do know I can fight. Mathew : All three of us can. MaSu: So? MaSu: Shut up and enjoy the trees, I love these thick forests. Lyle: Indeed. I like the beaches down town though. Mathew : This general area is great, especially the girls. MaSu: Oh-ho that is where I met Princess Kilvas. Lyle: Yeah, nice. I met a few girls here. Mathew : We all did, I met Rachel here. Lyle: Yeah, okay, we are almost here. Mathew : Who all is up here? *MaSu pulls out a clipboard.* MaSu: Death, Dathiason, Knife, Princess, Bianchi, Fiz, and a few soldiers. Mathew : not many... Lyle: Not good… MaSu: We are all good fighters though. Mathew : Yeah. Let’s see, an assassin, a Shaman, another assassin, a Raven, a…Bianchi?? MaSu: She is a Troubadour. Mathew : A Staff, good; And then a Paladin, and some soldiers. MaSu: Okay, here we are. Lyle: Excellent. Mathew : yeah. Edited September 3, 2008 by Mathew O'Connell Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzaku Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 why does the story have only you, lyle and Masu? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 why does the story have only you, lyle and Masu? Because it's the intro to the story.... I like it so far. Introductions to stories are always slowish. But I like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 (edited) They are the only I mentioned so far, this is Chapter 1, if you look though...Knife, Princess, and Bianchi are in. Lyle, thanks, I actually wrote this story years ago, but my name was different, and it featured other friends. Edited August 12, 2008 by Tibarn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzaku Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 oh, ok Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 Ace, you are soulja boy right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzaku Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 nope. l am Ace. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Ace, you are soulja boy right? He was. Yes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 You were Soulja boy though weren't you? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 Thanks Lyle! I will add Ace to my story, as he...reminds me of a friend. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzaku Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 yes, l was but never again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 why does the story have only you, lyle and Masu? hes just mad that he isnt in it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 hes just mad that he isnt in it. He is going in soon-ish. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzaku Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 oh, yes yes l am Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 Ch 2 will be up tomorrow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzaku Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 ok, can't wait to see it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 ok, can't wait to see it. I think you can replace Terry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzaku Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 um.. ok l guess. . . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted August 13, 2008 Author Share Posted August 13, 2008 (edited) Chapter 2: *Bianchi runs out and hugs the three men tightly* Bianchi: Are you hurt?! Where were you?! Mathew : Bianchi-Bianchi.. MaSu: This idiot here took an hour. Sorry. Lyle: Yeah, that. Mathew : Assholes. Lyle and MaSu: You know me are kidding! Bianchi: *Sigh* idiots, we do not have time to kid. MaSu: Sorry. We know this is serious. Lyle: Yeah…. Well, let us go into the base. Mathew : 0_o, yeah, so, this is war, eh? Lyle: You act so amazed… it is weird; you are a fighter, no? Mathew : Yeah, but war; it is so…devastating, killing innocents, leaving towns ravaged? MaSu: And the army of Bern has not begun yet. *Knife walks in* Knife: Hey morons, where were you? MaSu: Do not ask. It is a long story, ending with Lyle and I being assholes. Mathew : asshole. MaSu: I cannot do anything right! WHAT DID I DO NOW!? Mathew : Uhm….nothing? MaSu: THAT IS IT! Mathew : …!? *MaSu attacks Mathew * *Mathew dodges.* Lyle: You idiots!! *Lyle smacks Mathew , and kicks MaSu* Mathew and MaSu simultaneously: Ow…ow. Ow…ow Lyle: Let’s go now, eh? Knife: Hah. Bianchi: …… idiots. *Princess runs and tightly hugs the three men* Princess: Where were you? Mathew : Bah. Full moon, it angers me. It hurts my eyes. Princess: Hello? MaSu: You just love complaining you little snot! I bet you hate the BEATIFUL Mountains too! Princess: Did I die? *Princess waves hand over the two men’s faces* MaSu: WHAT?! Lyle: We were traveling slowly. That’s all. MaSu: OH, hi Princess. *Princess Sighs* Mathew : Okay, well, I suppose it is time to meet them, did any other rebels arrive? Knife: Very few. *Mathew is putting on his jacket while speaking* Mathew : Who? Bianchi: A few men, a Priest, Dr. Lord Sothe , and an archer, known as Ace. Mathew : A doctor? Nice, we can use all the ranged weaponry we can get.. MaSu: Hey. It is dark, Princess, it is dangerous to travel at night, go ahead of us please. *Princess sighs* Princess: Hm…. Okay… I will be waiting guys, don’t die? Lyle: No problem. Knife: I will come with you and Bianchi to protect you. *The three run ahead* *Mathew , MaSu, and Lyle stop* Mathew : What—is that?—who..? MaSu: Oh, no.. Lyle: Hm…. There aren’t many… MaSu: More than 10. Mathew : ….. MaSu: ….. Lyle: Damn. Ranger Lieutenant: HEY! You! Who are you? *MaSu takes Mathew ’s jacket, and pushes them in the bushes* MaSu: My name is… Criag, I am a… soldier-for-hire. Ranger: Hm…. Okay, you may go. *Mathew pulls sword* *Lyle draws sword* MaSu: Okay, thank you good sir… hey, WHAT’S THAT? *Rangers turn around* Rangers: What??? *Lyle and Mathew attack the men* *Mathew cuts 2 men’s heads off instantly* *Lyle stabs the commander* *MaSu uses Elfire to handle the rest* Lyle: Okay, let’s go! MaSu: Well done. Mathew : …… MaSu: …Mathew . Let’s hurry. Mathew : Yeah… we better move. *Lyle is 30 paces ahead* Lyle: Move guys! MaSu and Mathew : Lyle: Idiots, come on! We have a war council! *The next morning* *Everyone is sitting at a table* Damon: Okay men. You see here— *Damon touches a map on the table* Damon: That Emperor Cifga is attacking and defeating one empire after another. *Damon points at the map, where several territories are Red* Damon: Our base is here— *Damon touches a green dot on the map* Damon: You all know the history. Ace: I do not, I am new. Damon: Okay then, I will tell you. Damon: Long ago, over 6000 years ago, Emperor Gihref commenced a war, it was known as ‘the war of insanity’ during it, he claimed 76% of the world; leaving few, few rebels. The rebels fought them off as hard as possible, but they were bested in numbers, supplies, and morale. They were defeated, and punished. Now 5,990 years later, a new Empire was forged, and we are all that is left. The ‘Rangers’ are an elite race of killers, trained to defeat us. Ace: Whoa…that is an extensive history. Damon: Yeah. Bianchi: Men. What is the point? Princess: We need to get to the point. Knife: The point is! We are having troubles, these Rangers fight well, and we are losing the war. Ace: Oh… damn. *Lyle walks in* Lyle: Hey guys, what did I miss? Damon: Nothing big. Fireman: Guys, what are we going to do?! Mathew : Damon told me last night, we could not sleep. Damon: Uh---bup. Mathew : Oh, yes, go ahead. Damon: Okay, I will lead the riders out, and we will smash into a prison. Mathew : And then, the reinforcements come, and I lead the infantry out to block them while Damon frees the prisoners. Edited August 13, 2008 by Mathew O'Connell Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted August 13, 2008 Author Share Posted August 13, 2008 Cliff-hanger ftw. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzaku Posted August 13, 2008 Share Posted August 13, 2008 it is very good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 HUGE WALL OF TEXT. Otherwise I liked it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted August 14, 2008 Author Share Posted August 14, 2008 Yeah, I can have 3 up soon. Now to read Sothe's. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knife Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 Finally, a story that gets my personality right. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted August 14, 2008 Author Share Posted August 14, 2008 Really? I thought you would kick my ass for butchering it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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