Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 13, 2008 Share Posted August 13, 2008 (edited) Book 1: A Normal Day Narrator: it was a normal day in the Serenes forest. Beorc and Laguz alike were going about their ways, doing chores, their jobs, and helping others. Tomorrow would be the "Moonfest" ,the day the moon shines its brightest, and everyone was preparing for the once in 5-years holiday. That was...until they decided to take over.... {Plaza Waterway 8:45 am} Masu: You got them Lyle? Lyle: right here...wow these babies were heavy... Masu: Bianchi was right...these will do the trick....blow it all to bits... Lyle: how do we light them? everything is damp here... Arc: IDIOT STAND ASIDE!!! "HE" DOESNT WANT US TO FALTER! JUST SET THE TIMER! Lyle: golly...mod aboose... Serene: all set sir! Arc: good! now we just run....we run fast... MEANWHILE {Serenes Plaza 9:00 am} Gatrie: sooooo...how much is it again? Musashi: 500 gil. or 3000 rupee or do you prefer 6,000,000 yen? Gatrie: ...oh your so funny...you know I only carry yen with me...how is a dude supposed to buy a kick ass katana with prices this high? Freohr: Gatrie! Good mornin' neighbor! Gatrie: F-freohr! um...hi!! h-howzit goin? Freohr: Oh im fine...im just on my way to the plaza. Nightmare wants to give a speech on the Moonfest. Gatrie: oh cool im on my way there myself! *glares at musashi* um...walk with me? Freohr: sure thing! {Nightmare's Courtroom 10:00 am} Nightmare: everyone, everyone! Gather around! I have some news about the Moonfest that im sure you will all want to hear! Knife: GET ON WITH IT Nightmare: now now now! dont rush me! you will not want me to speed through this! *ahem* first of all let me say thank you all for being here today at MY courthouse! After Fireman mysteriously disappeared I was so happy to be able to take it over...i mean...inherit it.... Light: IM NOT GOING TO BE HERE ALL DAY! Nightmare: anyway...i think you all should know that this coming Moonfest will have to be postponed for...a much later date.... Everyone: "mumbles of confusion" Nightmare: why do you ask? well its quite simple! NONE OF YOU WILL BE ALIVE TO SEE IT! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!! LOOK BENEATH YOUR FEET FOOLS!! THE ENTIRE FOREST UNDERGROUND HAS BEEN RIGGED WITH PLASTIC EXPLOSIVES!!! YOU WILL ALL DIE IN...OH...2 MINUTES!! Fuukarutora: but...why nightmare???? Nightmare: why? WHYYYYYYYY??????????????? ITS QUITE SIMPLE!! AS SERENES IS BOMBED TO OBLIVION WE WILL BE WAITING...WAITING TO COME BACK....AND REBUILD SERENES!! WE WILL REBUILD IT UNTIL IT BECOMES THE GREATES EMPIRE IN THE UNIVERSE!!!.....well ive talked too long....good bye. *nightmare vanishes* Ground: beep....beep.....beeep.... Knife: awww shi--- Narrator: what has become of the denizens of the forest? who are the conspirators to this heinous crime? has anyone survived???? find out in the next episode of: LAST LEGEND I: THE HEARTS OF SERENES sneakpeek: BOOK 2: 5 years later... Edited August 17, 2008 by Gatling Von Revolver Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted August 13, 2008 Share Posted August 13, 2008 That was...random, but cool! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 13, 2008 Author Share Posted August 13, 2008 well..theres more coming soon...!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desdemona Posted August 13, 2008 Share Posted August 13, 2008 XD Nightmare's evil. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom103 Posted August 13, 2008 Share Posted August 13, 2008 lol night u bastard were am i. i wanna be the hero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 14, 2008 Author Share Posted August 14, 2008 (edited) Book 2: 5 years later... Narrator: 5 years after the great explosion of the forest. The forest no longer bears any trees...but instead a giant castle-city, rivaling that of Nevassa. Few survived the explosion... and those who did were locked away for life. Resulting from the dust created by the explosion...the sun no longer shines and the sky is corrupted, making it look blood red...this is the Black Jungle. {Holding Cell G 7:58 pm} Raven: Well good mornin' twins! Desdemona: ...its nightime... Raven: well pardon me missy! its just so hard to tell anymore! Cymbeline: bread and water again?....but-- Raven: you should be gracious that we spared you two...but NO!! ALWAYS NAGING!! NAG NAG NAG NAAAAAAG!! Well this'll teach ya! *pulls out whip*...hmm i think 5 lashes will do--- Narrator: suddenly an arrow shoots through Raven's hand. Raven: GRAAAAAAGH!! ???: damn it...i missed his head... Cymbeline: WHA--? Raven: My hand! MY BEAUTIFUL HAND!! NOW HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO--*shot* ???: YES! second time's the charm! ^&*: i knew youd get him Emerald. (_): Now grab his keys! Hurry! 123: im on it! Narrator: Suddenly 4 figures walk out of the shadows. Desdemona: wha--Emerald! Shadrach! Freohr! ...Gatrie? Shadrach: ok guys your free. Emerald: DES! CYM!! Freohr: NO TIME!! Cmon we can talk and run, yes? Narrator: And so the six make for exit. Cymbeline:....Gatrie is that you? Gatrie: ... Freohr: Forgive him, he... Emerald: He doesn't talk much anymore...Ever since 5 years ago...thats all I know...he doesn't tell us anything about what happened to him after that day... Shadrach: poor fellow...all he does now is-- Gatrie: Eat, Crap, an' Kill the enemy. Cymbeline: you forgot sleep. Gatrie: ...i dont sleep... Desdemona: =/ Yeah sure Gatrie... Emerald: LOOK! LOOK! THE EXIT!! Narrator: And so the six make it out of the prison. {Serenes Plaza Ruins 9:00 pm} Freohr: ok no one will find us here. Cymbeline: soooo...how did you guys... Shadrach: The idiot jail guard put all of us in the same cell together. So we combined our powers to cast Firaja to melt the bars. Desdemona: But firaja isnt even a spell... Shadrach: Yeah. AngelofDeath thought that, too. Cymbeline: brother??? HOW IS HE? Freohr: um...he's... Gatrie: still burning for 5 years. Desdemona: NOOOO!! Gatrie: FACE IT! HE BETRAYED US SO HE'S DEAD!! Shadrach: *ahem* after our escape, we called ourselves the "Hearts of Serenes" and we searched for 5 years a means to end this all... Desdemona: Did you? Emerald: yes. Two days ago... we found Fireman. Freohr: ...but we failed to contact him...Metal Arc is hot on our tail. Gatrie: Fucking mods... Cymbeline: so...what do we do now? Freohr: We call the Fireman. meanwhile {Tower of Bavil-Throne room 9:15 pm} ????: WHAT??? THOSE TWO ESCAPED???? Masu: I-Im afraid so sire... Lyle: Forgive us your majesty!! We had no idea of Raven's lack of spidey-sense!!! ????: ....FOOLISH WORMS!! Must I leave everything to Nighmare??...very well 1 more chance! And if you fuck this up...then my black carpet...will become a red carpet...DOOM! Doom: Yes...sire? ????: you have show promising results recently...you and Nightmare will bring the fight to the enemy....and take these two as well. You may deal with them how you wish. Doom: Yes sire....come you fools! By your leave sire. ????: ahhh....what a beautiful blood moon we have tonight...the next will be even better... TO BE CONTINUED! sneekpeek: Book 3: AMBUSH! Edited August 14, 2008 by Gatling Von Revolver Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knife Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 Nice. Some things don't make sense though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 14, 2008 Author Share Posted August 14, 2008 Nice. Some things don't make sense though. theyll make sense as the story progresses Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 14, 2008 Author Share Posted August 14, 2008 part 3 coming SOON Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 15, 2008 Author Share Posted August 15, 2008 BOOK 3: AMBUSH!!! {Serenes Plaza Ruins 11:00 pm} Cymbeline: Where are we going? Emerald: Were going to meet fireman at the entrance to the Onyx Mines. We should reach there by midnight. Desdemona: but how do we know this? Shadrach: the last time we tried to contact him we were ambushed by Metal Arc and Serene. Fireman bolted...but left us a note to meet him at the Onyx Mines at midnight tonight. Freohr: We managed to escape alive but...we had to kill Serene in the process. Gatrie: Metal Arc got lucky...I almost smashed his head like a-- Cymbeline: GATRIE THATS HORRIBLE!! Emerald: Just shut up Gatrie! Gatrie: WHA--YOU LITTLE--*grabs Emeralds shirt and pins him to the wall* Cymbeline: GATRIE STOP!!! Gatrie: OH YEAH?? WHY??? Freohr: Gatrie...please...put him down. Gatrie:....*looks stunned*...yeah...ok...*puts emerald down* Emerald:....o-ookay...i-i think we...should get....g-going... Shadrach: c-couldnt say...i-it any b-better mys-s-self! *grins at emerald* Emerald: >] Desdemona: ....men.... Freohr: Hey you dastards! COME ON! HURRY UP!!! Were leaving without you! {Onyx Mines 12:00 midnight} Masu: they here yet? Lyle: i dont see 'em Doom: idiots! QUIT LOOKING INTO THE MINE!!! THEY WONT BE IN THERE!!! Masu: i knew that. Nightmare:....ssssss.....they betterrrrr hurrrrry up. i thirrrssst for blood...rrrrrrrrr..... Lyle: ...no STOP!! NIGHTMARE NO!!! IM ON YOUR SIDE!! Nightmare:....a pity....you look tassssssty. Masu: I see them!!! Doom: Ready yourselves!! Lyle: death speech 5? Masu: you bet. Nightmare: hell yesssssss.... ------------------- Emerald: --and so i learned how sheep bladders may be used to prevent earthquakes... Desdemona: th-thats nice em... Narrator: suddenly Nightmare, Masu, and Lyle jump from a high cliff to land in front of the heroes. Masu: Fool brigands worry amore! Lyle: For after this you will breathe no more! Masu: A slow death is what you want? Lyle: Well lets oblige! Enjoy your final haunt! Masu: MASU!! LYLE: LYLE!! Masu: TEAM ROCKET BLASTING OFF AT THE SPEED OF LIGHT!! Lyle: SURRENDER NOW OR PREPARE TO FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT! Nightmare: MEOWTH, THATS RIGHT!! Gatrie:.....you must REALLY WANT TO DIE. Freohr: Gatrie!! NOOOO!!! Narrator: Gatrie stops from casting Meteor and killing everyone. Gatrie: *out of breath*....i-im sorry freohr... Nightmare: WELLY WELL WELL! Ccccccccym!!! and Desssssss to! Cym and Des: *gasp* Night! YOU WILL DIE FOR WHAT YOU DID!!! Narrator: A fight breaks out. But oddly Gatrie does not fight....instead he sits and clutches hid hooded head. Emerald: gah! theyre too strong!! Shadrach:.....oh...my...*passes out* Freohr: SHAD!! SHAD NO!!! WHAT HAPPENED TO---you---*passes out* Cym: WHAT THE HELL?? *passes out* Des: ...i feel fine... Masu: heh...*bashes des in the head with rock and knocks her out* Nightmare: hmmmm....yesssss the twinsssss are powerrrrfull indeed...but only des blocked my esp....didnt sssssee that coming...well ok...lock 'em up boyssss--- Doom: *holds sword to Nightmare's throat* did you see this coming? Nightmare: ....welll....no...who ARE YOU DOOM? Doom: 1....0....3 Nightmare:...wherrre did you learrrn to count? Doom103: Sweet Dreams...Nightmare *beheads nightmare* Masu and Lyle: *screams like little girls and runs away* Doom103:.....thats over...I have my vengence....forgive me Hearts of Serenes...i cannot aid you. But nor will I hinder you. I choose neutrality. Goodbye. *walks away* Gatrie: hhhh....hhhh.....ohhh...my.....gahhhh....i.....musnt...try....to....cast....me-.....-teor....again... {Tower of Bavil throne room 1:00 am} ????: YOU FAIL ME AND YET YOU RETURN???? Masu:....im sorry sire!! Lyle: yes sire!! FORGIVE US!!! ????: NO!! PUNISHMENT THIS TIME WILL BE DEATH!!! BIANCHI!! METAL ARC!!! HIKA!!! YOU HAVE BEEN PROMOTED!!! Biachi: tehe...yes milord. Hika: shweet. Arc: HAHAHA!!! ????: NOW YOU TWO!!! PREPARE FOR DEATH! BE GLAD THAT IT WILL BE SWIFT!! Lyle: NO YOUR HIGHNESS!!! ????: BLOO FALCOWN!!!! Masu: BWARGH--- TO BE CONTINUED sneekpeek: Part 4- Finding Fireman Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 15, 2008 Author Share Posted August 15, 2008 part 4 coming soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 15, 2008 Author Share Posted August 15, 2008 Dont worry des. you and cym will get a REALLY big part later on! :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 17, 2008 Author Share Posted August 17, 2008 Book 4: Finding Fireman {Serenes Plaza Ruins 9:59 pm} Cymbeline:....ugh....oh my head...Des....Des? Desdemona:....hmmmm...WHA? HUH??? Cymbeline:....were back in the plaza....but...werent we... Desdemona: NIGHTMARE!! Gatrie: Nightmare's dead. Cymbeline:...*notices the others are asleep*...did you carry us all back here? Gatrie: yup Desdemona: how long have we-- Gatrie: A whole day. Even after death...Nightmare still haunts his victims... Cymbeline:....Gatrie...take off your hood. you haven't taken it off since you guys saved us... Gatrie: I follow orders from no one. Desdemona:....you follow orders from Freohr... Gatrie: !!!....shes...she...is... Cymbeline: shes your-- Gatrie: im not in love with her!!! Cymbeline: i was going to say "leader". Gatrie:........fuck off you two..... Desdemona: what are you hiding Gatrie? Gatrie: I SAID FUCK OFF!! Cymbeline: Gatrie...please!! Take your hood off!! Gatrie:...fine...anything for the ladies!! (his voice dripping with sarcasm) *takes off his hood* Desdemona: GASP Cymbeline:...GATRIE!! oh my goddess....oh....oh...no...whats... Gatrie:.....i lost my right eye and my face has a huge scar going down it....it could have been worse... Cymbeline: What happened? Gatrie:....you dont need to know...nobody needs to know... Desdemona: Does anyone else-- Gatrie:....only Freohr knows.... Cymbeline: =/ Desdemona: What happened last night, Gatrie? Gatrie: Ever heard of "meteor"? Cymbeline: The strongest black-magic spell. yes. No mage, save 1, has ever been able to cast it. Gatrie: exactly. well...I found the scroll that teaches Meteor...and Im positive I can use it. Desdemona: but...your no mage...how do you-- Gatrie: Meteor is the unique spell that does not require magic energy to cast! In fact...it is impossible to cast Meteor with magic energy....you must use...life energy. Fireman: im sorry...im a little confused... Gatrie: well...you see...a mage is used to using its magic for spells so...it automatically uses magic to cast meteor. Thats why its impossible! But if a mage does not use magic for...oh...7 days...(unlikely) then they can easily tap into their life energy...and cast Meteor....that means there must be NO magic running through the body at casting...and Im no mage so... Fireman: you can easily use your life energy. Gatrie: EXACTLY!---Fireman!!! Fireman: my payment? Gatrie: *ahem* here...its...ok..,got it! *hands fireman 100,000 gold) Fireman:....*ahem* Gatrie: oh! *pulls feather out of cym's wing* Cymbeline: hey!! what the hell? Fireman: good...100,000 gold and a raven feather...I am at your service. Gatrie:....now we just gotta wait until they wake up.... Desdemona: then what? Gatrie: We climb the tower of Bavil. TO BE CONTINUED!! sneekpeek: Book: 6 Meta Arc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 17, 2008 Author Share Posted August 17, 2008 part 5 on its way! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 17, 2008 Author Share Posted August 17, 2008 Book 5: Meta Arc {Black Jungle Market 7:30 am} Freohr: Everyone ready? Emerald: No one has to pee... Gatrie:....idiot Shadrach: ...yknow...for an evil kingdom...this place is rather cheerful... Fireman:...its all a veil of lies hiding the madness within... Shadrach:...Gatrie...why did you buy an eye patch? Gatrie:........i like pirates Emerald: I thought you liked ninjas? Freohr: =/........wha?? What is? Fireman:....everyone is leaving... Arc: good thing....we dont want a bigger mess do we? Hika: hellooooooooooo Cym! and Desy too! HEEEHEEHAHAHAHA!! This will be funny! Cymbeline: HIKA!!! Desdemona: aww...look...a bunny. Fireman: NOOO DES!! THATS METAL ARC!!! Arc: thats Meta Arc to you Fireman. Hika: going to climb the tower eh?? HAHAHSSHAJAJAJA!!! fools...this is where you all DIE!!! *uses psycho keneisis on everyone* Shadrach: AHHGGHGHHH THE SCREAMING!! MAKE IT GO AWAY!!!! EMERALD: THE VOICES...THE VOICES!!! FREOHR: NOOO NOOOOOOO!!! Gatrie:........gah.......urgh....wrble Desdemona: but I feel fine... Cymbeline: me too... Meta Arc: FOOL THE TWINS!! THE TWINS!!! Hika: oh yeh....HEY CYM!! DES! WHEY DONT YOU TWO LES-- Cymbeline: dont say it Hika: oh im sorry...why dont you two bi-se... Desdemona: stop now!!!! Hika: your right.....you two dont have the parts to have-- Cymbeline: HRAAAAAAAAA!!! Desdemona: SCRAAAAAAAAA!!! Desdemona and Cymbeline: PYROBLAST!! Narrator: Suddenly a huge implosions occurs inside Hika and Meta Arc's bodies...as they start throwing up magma....ew Emerald:....wha...its ov-AHHH!! WHAT THE HELL??? Cymbeline: whos laughing now Hika? Desdemona: poor lil bunny... Fireman: NOO TIME!! THE ENEMY KNOWS OUR Where-abouts!! WE MUST REACH THE TOWER OF BAVIL!!! All: Lets go! To be continued... Sneekpeek: Book: 6 Bianchi...goddess of psyche. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 17, 2008 Author Share Posted August 17, 2008 part 6 on its way Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 17, 2008 Author Share Posted August 17, 2008 Book 6: Bianchi...Goddess of Psyche {Tower of Bavil entrance 8:34 am} Freohr: Were here... Gatrie:...again.... Emerald: what Gatrie? Gatrie:....nothing.... Cymbeline:....can we really end this now? Shadrach:....we hope... Fireman: we will...we will Narrator: Suddenly the doors open and a huge amount of soldiers come out. Bianchi: SOLDIERS OF THE JUNGLE!!! KILL THE REBELS!! NO SURVIVORS!!! Soldiers: YES-LALI!! Shadrach:.....dwarves???? Emerald: THEIR ARMY IS MADE UP OF DWARVES???? Soldiers: LALI-HO!!!! Fireman:...now I see why I was hired... Soldiers: LALI-H-- Fireman: SILENCE!!! Narrator: suddenly the dwarf army just falls to pieces...quite literally... Gatrie: all the blood.... Cymbeline: ahhh...cant watch... Freohr: Kmon...lets get climbing. Bianchi: NOT SO FAST!!!! *glides down to the heroes* Emerald: Bianchi!!! *readies bow* Bianchi: now now! Lets not be hasty! I come in peace!...you see I ADORE chaos! And you..."Hearts of Serenes" seem to be full of it! It would be a shame to see it go to waste... Shadrach: Your point is? Bianchi: please allow me to give you safe passage! Freohr:......sounds like a plan! Lets go team!! Fireman:........trap....... {Tower of Bavil sky deck 9:00 pm} Emerald: HOW BIG IS THIS FUCKER??? WE HAVE BEEN CLIMBING FOR 12 hours!!!!! Shadrach: Ever been to New Pork city? Emerald:....ugh.... Bianchi: were almost to the top...its a pity you guys wont make it. Fireman: i knew it! *pushes bianchi off the edge of the sky deck.* Bianchi: AHHHHHHHHhhhhh...... Fireman:....that was easy. Cymbeline:....oooookay...is that the door to the throne room? Gatrie:........thats it.... Desdemona:.....well lets get in there!!!! All: *opens door*..... TO BE CONCLUDED sneekpeek: Book: 7 A means to an end. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 17, 2008 Author Share Posted August 17, 2008 Book 7: A means to an end... {Tower of Bavil throne room 9:05 pm} Narrator: we join our heroes as they enter the throne room. ????: WELCOME!!! TO THE TOWER OF BAVIL! DID YOU ENJOY YOUR HIKE?? Gatrie:....nice job "milord"...the blood red carpet matches alot better than your old black one. Cymbeline: Gatrie?? Emerald: Gatrie what do you...? Gatrie: FOR TOO LONG HAVE I WAITED FOR REVENGE!! *takes off hood* LOOK AT ME!!! LOOK UPON THE FACE OF DEATH!!!! ZEPHRION!!!! ITS TIME FOR YOU TO DIE!!! All: GASP!!! Zephrion:.....HM...HM..HA...HAHAHAHAHA!!!!! FOOLS YOU CANNOT KILL ME!!! ZEPHRION!! THE DARKNESS!! Gatrie: Our last meeting scarred me Zephrion...but I am stronger now!!! DIE!!!!! *stabs Wishblade into Zephrion* Zephrion: uh...uhu....UHUHAHAHAHA!!! *disappears* IF YOU TRULY WANT TO FACE ME....Climb the stairs to the roof. I will be waiting. Shadrach:....Gatrie... Gatrie: NO TIME!! MOVE!!! {Tower of Bavil roof 11:55 pm} Freohr: we made it... Desdemona: look at the moon... Fireman:....tonight is the Moonfest... Zephrion: COME!! WITNESS THE POWER....OF THE MOONGOD!!! HRAHHHHHHH!!!! *suddenly a silver beam of light...coming from the moon envelops Zephrion. Freohr: ATTACK!!! *hits Zephrion with sword but sword shatters* Emerald: AHHHHH!!!! *bow and arrows shatter* Fireman: SILENCE!!! *but nothing happens* Cymbeline and Desdemona: PYROBLAST!!!! *instead the spell explodes above the tower making fire rain down* Shadrach: ITS USELESS!!!!! Gatrie: no...this is my battle....*runs at zephrion and thrusts wishblade* Zephrion: FOOL! *blocks with Sigmund* Narrator: The two clash weapons...and continue to fight. Eachother equally matched in combat prowess. The fight goes on for 10 minutes....and then... Zephrion: HRAHHHHHH!!! Gatrie: NOOOOO!!! *wishblade shatters and Gatrie is run through* Desdemona: GATRIE...HEAL!! Gatrie:!! NOOO! STOP NO MAGIC MUST TOUCH MY BODY!!!! Desdemona: but Gatrie you... Freohr: GATRIE NOOOOOOOO!!! Gatrie: ....forgive me...this is where we part... Shadrach: Gatrie!! WHAT ARE YOU??? Emerald: he's leavin'.... Fireman:....he's going to cast meteor... Freohr: GATRIE STOP!!! Gatrie: *his body starts glowing a fierce red* Cymbeline...Desdemona....Emerald...Shadrach...good bye my friends....Fireman...time for you to finish our contract. Fireman: *a faint tear in his eye* y-yes...i know...everyone! hold on tight! Desdemona: Gatrie.... Freohr: Gatrie!!! I....I.....DONT DO THIS!!!! Gatrie: Good bye Freohr....I have....always...l......lov.......ill tell you in another life. Good bye *his body becomes encased in flames* Fireman: TELEPORT!!!!! *teleports Cymbeline, Desdemona, Shadrach, Emerald, himself and Freohr outta there. Freohr: GATRIEEEEEEEeeee...... Gatrie:...heh...looks like im going out in style... Zephrion: WHA-WHAT ARE YOU???? Gatrie: METEOR!!!!!!!!!!! {Serenes Forest Plaza 9:00 am, 5 years later} Fireman:...ahh Freohr! How are you today? Have a seat! Anything to drink? Freohr: oh im fine...today is... Fireman: the Moonfest....yup...its 5 years to the day...Gatrie.... Freohr:...died for us all.... Fireman: yknow we never found his body... Freohr: you dont think... Fireman: I do...he's out there...somwhere....waiting for evil to re-appear....im sure of it.... Freohr: its like he used to tell me...(Flashback *Gatrie: a man...is mortal....he can be killed...but a man's heart lives on...forever beating in another life...we are the Hearts of Serenes...and we will never die*) THE END Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 17, 2008 Author Share Posted August 17, 2008 i hope you all enjoyed it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 18, 2008 Author Share Posted August 18, 2008 NEXT TIME!!! LAST LEGEND: II Thunderstone Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted August 23, 2008 Author Share Posted August 23, 2008 PLEASE SOMEONE READ MY STORY Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leakin Posted September 1, 2008 Share Posted September 1, 2008 That was absolutely.............WONDERFUL!!! i loved the whole thing, especially the ending. Very interesting plot twist in the end. Great job. :) :) ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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