Nicolas Posted October 4, 2013 Share Posted October 4, 2013 So what are you think about them? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jiac Posted October 4, 2013 Share Posted October 4, 2013 They're alright,nothing to incredible but the first one to be quite honest...may kinda need improvement,something just seems off,the 2nd one is alright and the 3rd is good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alvitazi Posted October 5, 2013 Share Posted October 5, 2013 I like the third one, since I know you've used it as your avy before. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicolas Posted October 5, 2013 Author Share Posted October 5, 2013 Thanks. I'll work with first two. I think the second needs something, like beard, or mustache, or better eyes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myke Posted October 5, 2013 Share Posted October 5, 2013 they're pretty rough to be honest, especially around the necks in the first two. I've seen a lot worse, though, and the character designs themselves are interesting for the first one, deviate the jawline some (sharp, mathematically precise angles like that do no belong on faces) and fill in the gap beween his hair and his neck (unless he has magic antigravity hair of some sort?) for the second, the neck should curve outwards instead of inwards as it goes down. that's about it, actually. good luck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carter Posted October 5, 2013 Share Posted October 5, 2013 the first one's face looks a tad bit fat. the second one, i'm not too sure, but his face looks like an oval. and the third one, i like. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ump Posted October 5, 2013 Share Posted October 5, 2013 Just work on your shading dude. Practice by trying to make splices look as clean as possible. Use existing sprites for reference. There was a tutorial I learned from, that explained everything about making mugshots, but that was years ago. If you know what "pillow shading" is, try your best to avoid that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKTâ„¢ Posted October 6, 2013 Share Posted October 6, 2013 Third one's the only decent one. Scrap the other two and work on that one until it's as perfect as you yourself can make it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted October 6, 2013 Share Posted October 6, 2013 The color styles are inconsistent. The first and second one looks like it has FE8 colors, while the third one has FE7 colors. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X-Naut Posted October 6, 2013 Share Posted October 6, 2013 All of your sprites have some sharp angles on them. Mainly the hair of the first two, but even the cloak on the third is sharp in places. The necks on the first two look weird too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicolas Posted October 13, 2013 Author Share Posted October 13, 2013 OK, I worked with my second. Now it's look that: Now, his neck look more natural and he has new eyes. Maybe I should give him mustache, or beard? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myke Posted October 14, 2013 Share Posted October 14, 2013 that's a big improvement, actually and sure why not Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicolas Posted October 23, 2013 Author Share Posted October 23, 2013 (edited) Version with mustache. EDIT Edited October 23, 2013 by Nicolas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MRDRHAWK Posted October 23, 2013 Share Posted October 23, 2013 I honestly like the mustache version better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicolas Posted October 25, 2013 Author Share Posted October 25, 2013 And new one: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haku Posted October 25, 2013 Share Posted October 25, 2013 (edited) Critique: 1. I think the eye with the monocle is too far up. 2. The robe and shoulder armor are not aligned properly. 3. The hair and stubble needs tidying; there are quite a few strands. 4. The shoulder plate needs reshading because of the robe. That would get you started I guess. btw it is a great improvement from the last one, keep it up Edited October 25, 2013 by KoopaTroopa Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicolas Posted October 26, 2013 Author Share Posted October 26, 2013 (edited) 2. The robe and shoulder armor are not aligned properly. Can you explain it? Because I don't understand. After few small changes: Edited October 26, 2013 by Nicolas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haku Posted October 27, 2013 Share Posted October 27, 2013 My eyes might be weird but the robe doesn't seem to go over the shoulder properly, the outline of the shoulder is too high I think. Hope this helps. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKTâ„¢ Posted October 28, 2013 Share Posted October 28, 2013 The way the cape is draped over the right shoulder gives the impression that he's facing away, look at Percival's mug to see what I'm saying. You want it to instead of going over the shoulder and outwards to the right, to instead wrap up around to the left. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myke Posted October 28, 2013 Share Posted October 28, 2013 or something idk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicolas Posted October 28, 2013 Author Share Posted October 28, 2013 OK, thanks. I'll change that latter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicolas Posted December 30, 2013 Author Share Posted December 30, 2013 (edited) Another one: Edited December 30, 2013 by Nicolas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghast Posted December 31, 2013 Share Posted December 31, 2013 looks good to me! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted December 31, 2013 Share Posted December 31, 2013 Did you use sacean parts for the face? He looks somewhat asian. Maybe Japanese. Cool stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicolas Posted December 31, 2013 Author Share Posted December 31, 2013 Did you use sacean parts for the face? He looks somewhat asian. Maybe Japanese. Cool stuff. Nope. Just Lott mug+Oswin mug+some other. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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