I need your opinion about my spriters.

[Nicolas]

So what are you think about them?

[Jiac]

They're alright,nothing to incredible but the first one to be quite honest...may kinda need improvement,something just seems off,the 2nd one is alright and the 3rd is good.

[Alvitazi]

I like the third one, since I know you've used it as your avy before.

[Nicolas]

Thanks.

I'll work with first two.

I think the second needs something, like beard, or mustache, or better eyes.

[Myke]

they're pretty rough to be honest, especially around the necks in the first two. I've seen a lot worse, though, and the character designs themselves are interesting

for the first one, deviate the jawline some (sharp, mathematically precise angles like that do no belong on faces) and fill in the gap beween his hair and his neck (unless he has magic antigravity hair of some sort?)

for the second, the neck should curve outwards instead of inwards as it goes down. that's about it, actually.

good luck

[Carter]

the first one's face looks a tad bit fat.

the second one, i'm not too sure, but his face looks like an oval.

and the third one, i like.

[Ump]

Just work on your shading dude. Practice by trying to make splices look as clean as possible. Use existing sprites for reference. There was a tutorial I learned from, that explained everything about making mugshots, but that was years ago. If you know what "pillow shading" is, try your best to avoid that.

[NICKT™]

Third one's the only decent one. Scrap the other two and work on that one until it's as perfect as you yourself can make it.

[eclipse]

The color styles are inconsistent. The first and second one looks like it has FE8 colors, while the third one has FE7 colors.

[X-Naut]

All of your sprites have some sharp angles on them. Mainly the hair of the first two, but even the cloak on the third is sharp in places. The necks on the first two look weird too.

[Nicolas]

OK, I worked with my second. Now it's look that:

Now, his neck look more natural and he has new eyes.

Maybe I should give him mustache, or beard?

[Myke]

that's a big improvement, actually

and sure why not

[Nicolas]

Version with mustache.

EDIT

Edited October 23, 2013 by Nicolas

[MRDRHAWK]

I honestly like the mustache version better

[Nicolas]

And new one:

[Haku]

Critique:

1. I think the eye with the monocle is too far up.

2. The robe and shoulder armor are not aligned properly.

3. The hair and stubble needs tidying; there are quite a few strands.

4. The shoulder plate needs reshading because of the robe.

That would get you started I guess.

btw it is a great improvement from the last one, keep it up

Edited October 25, 2013 by KoopaTroopa

[Nicolas]

2. The robe and shoulder armor are not aligned properly.

Can you explain it? Because I don't understand.

After few small changes:

Edited October 26, 2013 by Nicolas

[Haku]

My eyes might be weird but the robe doesn't seem to go over the shoulder properly, the outline of the shoulder is too high I think. Hope this helps.

[NICKT™]

The way the cape is draped over the right shoulder gives the impression that he's facing away, look at Percival's mug to see what I'm saying.

You want it to instead of going over the shoulder and outwards to the right, to instead wrap up around to the left.

[Myke]

or something idk

[Nicolas]

OK, thanks.

I'll change that latter.

[Nicolas]

Another one:

Edited December 30, 2013 by Nicolas

[ghast]

looks good to me!

[deranger]

Did you use sacean parts for the face? He looks somewhat asian. Maybe Japanese. Cool stuff.

[Nicolas]

Did you use sacean parts for the face? He looks somewhat asian. Maybe Japanese. Cool stuff.

Nope. Just Lott mug+Oswin mug+some other.