blyegg Posted July 29, 2014 Author Share Posted July 29, 2014 (edited) New map; ive been trying some height changes... Edited July 29, 2014 by Kisara Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Primefusion Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 Red - Horizontal stairs aren't normally shaded on the left and right. You've made it look like the stairs are hovering above the floor. Yellow - Walls in corners need shading as well. Orange - Consider using a different tile here. The current one sticks out on the sides a bit too much. You may also want to remove the Swastika. I know it's originally a Hindu symbol with positive meaning, but the Nazi Party forever damned it =/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted July 30, 2014 Author Share Posted July 30, 2014 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted August 1, 2014 Author Share Posted August 1, 2014 huge wip map incoming Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted August 7, 2014 Author Share Posted August 7, 2014 (edited) oh yeah, it's a world map btw Edited August 7, 2014 by Kisara Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted August 8, 2014 Author Share Posted August 8, 2014 (edited) I should fix that eye but eeeeeeeeeeh fixed the eye, time to recolor and shit Edited August 8, 2014 by Kisara Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted August 8, 2014 Share Posted August 8, 2014 Jesus, so many forts. Cut down on those. Just too many mini-buildings in general. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted August 8, 2014 Share Posted August 8, 2014 He said it's a world map, so I think the intention of the buildings to represent towns and stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted August 8, 2014 Share Posted August 8, 2014 I'm impressed this continent having the stability and collective resources to invest in so many giant bridges. The really long narrow channel on the left of the map seems geographically improbable. Don't see any technical errors. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted August 8, 2014 Share Posted August 8, 2014 (edited) sHe said it's a world map, so I think the intention of the buildings to represent towns and stuff unfortunately Klok has a point, there are kind of a lot of forts(there's more than 30). I understand the world map aspect, but why would any country be building fort after fort on beach areas for example. I would just say cut down on the forts that are all in the same immediate area(other than the two forts tot he south of the castle, I'm assuming that's similar to Crimea, and it makes sense to have). Edited August 8, 2014 by Skitty of Time Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted August 15, 2014 Author Share Posted August 15, 2014 wip Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted August 16, 2014 Author Share Posted August 16, 2014 (edited) (placeholder clothing till i find good clothing) EDIT: someone said the clothing was fine for a zerk. well, saves me the effort, so. Edited August 16, 2014 by Kisara Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted August 16, 2014 Author Share Posted August 16, 2014 done i guess Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted August 17, 2014 Share Posted August 17, 2014 Partially bald sprites seem to look good. Based on the two that I've seen. Nice chibi, though the ear seems to be attached to the neck in it. Is the bald part of her(?) head tattooed? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted August 17, 2014 Author Share Posted August 17, 2014 (edited) yeah, its a tattoo. people suggested some norse design of whatever but i looked at it (it being a reference image someone linked me) for a split second and ended up just using jaffar's instead Edited August 17, 2014 by Kisara Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted August 22, 2014 Author Share Posted August 22, 2014 i died while sf was gone too bad im back to haunt you with mah shitty sprites Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted August 23, 2014 Author Share Posted August 23, 2014 the hair needs some work, goddamnit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Wolfram Posted August 28, 2014 Share Posted August 28, 2014 You wanted me to say something about mugs.Those all are really good but this one I like the most. He could be dark person but with soft heart. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted September 1, 2014 Author Share Posted September 1, 2014 (edited) Eh? EDIT: EDITS THO Edited September 1, 2014 by Kisara Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted September 2, 2014 Author Share Posted September 2, 2014 Finished, i guess Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted September 7, 2014 Author Share Posted September 7, 2014 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted September 7, 2014 Share Posted September 7, 2014 He's a bit tall... His hair and head look a bit weird. I think you should fluff the hair in the back out a bit. His head might be a bit too tall as well. The piece of hair at the very top makes very little sense, and his bangs are kind of ugly, they're too spiky and look unnatural. I think the inside of the collar should be dark and not orange. The shading on the second level of shoulder armor on the right looks a bit messed up too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blyegg Posted September 7, 2014 Author Share Posted September 7, 2014 (edited) He's a bit tall... His hair and head look a bit weird. I think you should fluff the hair in the back out a bit. His head might be a bit too tall as well. The piece of hair at the very top makes very little sense, and his bangs are kind of ugly, they're too spiky and look unnatural. I think the inside of the collar should be dark and not orange. The shading on the second level of shoulder armor on the right looks a bit messed up too. Heh, most people tend to suggest fixing hair, so I'll likely redo the hair sometime tomorrow, as well as make those armour fixes In the mean time: wine (because of a joke on a skype chat) Edited September 7, 2014 by Kisara Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted September 7, 2014 Share Posted September 7, 2014 His head feels high up off his body. He's like a giraffe if you picture him without the armor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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