Person123 Posted December 1, 2013 Share Posted December 1, 2013 Working on my first FC sprite, and would appreciate feedback on which areas need improvement (the hair in particular) It's gone through a few iterations, and the most recent is here: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jiac Posted December 1, 2013 Share Posted December 1, 2013 That's pretty freaking amazing,I have lower standards so I say it's good but other people might be a better help. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted December 1, 2013 Share Posted December 1, 2013 Not bad at all! At a glance, it feels like the main issue is that you haven't used FE-style colouring, which gives it a very odd feel to it. On closer inspection, it appears that you've used an excessive number of colours for the hair (I count 5 shades) causing it to lose some definition. It looks like the outline colour is brighter than the darkest shade of blue that you've used, too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Person123 Posted December 1, 2013 Author Share Posted December 1, 2013 (edited) Alrighty, I've made the darkest blue a little bit brighter and tweaked the other blues to maintain the contrast I like. I have an update ready, I think I improved the hair a bit but it still needs further adjustments. Removing the extra hair shade and using FE colors gives me this: I'm gonna re-create the hair a third time. Seems to improve each iteration so maybe I can get it right next time. Actually looks like hair now. More fixes done. Shame nobody really checks this post Edited December 8, 2013 by General Ciraxis Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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