Deity Posted October 30, 2008 Share Posted October 30, 2008 (edited) Well here is a link to the story if you dont know where its at. I guess you can give feedback on it here and only here. :P Dragon's Rage Edited October 30, 2008 by Extreme Void Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Florete Posted October 30, 2008 Share Posted October 30, 2008 At first I thought this was Raven's...his (unfinished) story is also entitled Darkness Rising... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted October 30, 2008 Share Posted October 30, 2008 At first I thought this was Raven's...his (unfinished) story is also entitled Darkness Rising... Yeah. Fire Emblem Darkness Rising Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Posted October 30, 2008 Author Share Posted October 30, 2008 Yeah, he told me about it. XD but I had no idea someone had thought of this title before. Sorry for the confusion, peeps. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven Tyler Posted November 2, 2008 Share Posted November 2, 2008 It's a good story, but does the hero has to be over 6 feet tall, you know, the whole "I'm a giant brute merc!" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Posted November 2, 2008 Author Share Posted November 2, 2008 Der, he has too look imposing. ^^ You honestly dont believe a small runt measuring 5 feet tall is gonna stand up against the forces of evil, huh? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven Tyler Posted November 2, 2008 Share Posted November 2, 2008 Der, he has too look imposing. ^^ You honestly dont believe a small runt measuring 5 feet tall is gonna stand up against the forces of evil, huh? I was just saying things for the dare. The idea for a tall man to fight is good, however. I actually like mercenary stories and I hope this turns out good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Posted November 2, 2008 Author Share Posted November 2, 2008 I was just saying things for the dare. The idea for a tall man to fight is good, however. I actually like mercenary stories and I hope this turns out good. Oh, so you have read it? >>And I thought nobody paid any attention to it because I hadn't received feedback. Tis sad to write something and not get comments on it. I feel for all those writers. :( That is why I am gonna make that site tomorrow, so everyone can give feedback on every story that is submitted there. ^^ The story is gonna be alright, you just gotta read it and find out. There is still much to occur, like when Jyosua sends an army of Dragons after chiki. To stand against an invasion, Phydoria will have to unite, but even so, humans will have a hard time battling these beasts, who had never been seen before. And then, Rad is pursued by his dead friend, Yosh, who is reanimated back to life...And lots of peeps die from both ends...I'd say more, but I am spoiling everything... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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