Loki Laufeyson Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 Orange: "Wheres my eyebrows, yo?" Seriously, some of these sprites are missing eyebrows. Completely. Grey: "Holy uneven eyebrows, batman!" These guys/girls eyebrows are all caddywhompus and not matching properly. Try making them even. Blue: What is up with this girl's cheek? Its all pointy and weird. (not to mention holy shit popped collar but lol....) Yer still mixing colors from FE6/7 and FE8. That wyvern rider chick with the red hair...her skin tone is all sorts of borked up and doesnt match. I like the concepts of these sprites though! Not a bad start. Just keep practicing, smooth things out and stop mixing FE8 colors with FE6/7 colors. One palette or the other, mate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollocles Posted March 23, 2012 Author Share Posted March 23, 2012 Thank you for all your advices, they were really usefull. @Kratos Aurion: Merci pour tes conseils (et en français c'est encore mieux!) Voilà le résultat: @Florina: Thanks. I'll correct this later, I promise. In fact the eyebrows is the most difficult part, for me. I already try to correct Maeve (the one with the collar). Is it better? About the problem of colors, I'll try to correct this latter, once I'll complete the Army (only 18 peoples left). Once again thank you very much! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anouleth Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 (edited) Just a note; Salamander is the name of the Dragon who gave Fala his holy blood, so it seems off to give the same name to Alvis' half-brother. Unless you did that deliberately... Edited March 24, 2012 by Anouleth Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollocles Posted March 24, 2012 Author Share Posted March 24, 2012 (edited) Just a note; Salamander is the name of the Dragon who gave Fala his holy blood, so it seems off to give the same name to Alvis' half-brother. Unless you did that deliberately... It is deliberate. We don't know who he is the first time we meet him, so it's a clew. His parents are only mentionned in special events. Moreover he, Therpsichore and Ayami only appear in a Gaiden Chapter. More informations in my deviantart: http://appolionos.de...allery/34195955 Update: This is the eyebrows correction, I also correct the contours and Vylon's face (the first one) and Anita's neck (pink haired girl). I hope it's better now... Edit 2: 02:25 pm And there are two new characters who (almost) fit the Aran/Samson archetype: Alfiona (Lance Knight): An honest loyal knight of Lenster Ra (Wyvern Knight): The most famous knight of Thracia Edited March 24, 2012 by Apollocles Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 Ra's head seems to not have enough depth (no brain space). And his attire doesn't exactly scream wyvern rider. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buttmuncher.ops Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 i like the sprite with the spiked shoulderguards, it's well done imo from the creative side Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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