Dragoncat Posted November 25, 2014 Share Posted November 25, 2014 (edited) Also any author's notes will be here. Prologue might end abruptly, if so, I apologize. It's just a short...prologuey thing. But with that out of the way, the part where it talks about the wind in Crimea was inspired by the wind in my home state, Wyoming xD People actually say that here. I figured Crimea is mostly a plains area like Wyoming so...yeah. Edited October 23, 2015 by Dragoncat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted November 25, 2014 Share Posted November 25, 2014 Hey, prologues are usually much shorter than the actual chapters, don't worry about that. Trust me, mine are really short too (when I have them). :P Nice start btw! I chuckled at the Petrine part. lol Also, Samba's "ever heard of a comb?" lol Also, if you need a little assistance on writing Jerec, take a peek at my fic titled The Secret Sword. It's under my DoD short stories on ff.net. It's his latest appearance in a story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted November 25, 2014 Author Share Posted November 25, 2014 Yeah, Petrine's not exactly butt ugly. I'm sure she could use her looks to her advantage, lol, and I wouldn't be surprised if a few of the Crimean soldiers thought that way. And well, if I got woke up like that, I'd probably have bedhead too xD I might consider that when the time comes. Is your name on there Great Aether like on DA? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted November 25, 2014 Share Posted November 25, 2014 Yeah, true that lol. She's pretty much Tellius's Sonia. :P No, my username on ff.net is EmblemQueen. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowy_One Posted November 25, 2014 Share Posted November 25, 2014 Interesting start. I can't wait to see where you plan to go and for others characters to start getting involved. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted November 26, 2014 Author Share Posted November 26, 2014 Recruitment, yay! Synel is kinda my friend's OC. She used to have FE OCs but she doesn't do much with them anymore, one of them was a priest named Rahsynel or something who liked to whittle his staves...I liked that so I borrowed it. And I had to look up the name of the leader of a medieval town because mayor wouldn't fit. And I had to use one of those name generators for the town name. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowy_One Posted November 26, 2014 Share Posted November 26, 2014 Nice shout-out to the Battle-cleric class, but I'd think the priest would know enough about the Laguz to know about the Laguz Stones. They're not exactly 'hidden knowledge' after all. Tellus has one Goddess as well (Ashera), so 'by the gods' doesn't make much sense since Yune's existence isn't known. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted November 26, 2014 Author Share Posted November 26, 2014 Huh? Where are you getting laguz stones...oh I get it. Lol I was meaning more like eating random rocks for food. Like the gorons from Zelda. Libra mentions more than one god too, and they appear to just have Naga, so...yeah. And Grima, but of course he's evil. Yeah, I liked that shout out too. I'm hoping to have him promote into one ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted November 30, 2014 Author Share Posted November 30, 2014 (edited) First of all, Valmas and Xemar aren't entirely mine. Long time ago when I was trying to make this into a game, a guy by the name of Seraphim Swordmaster submitted those two. He has told me I can do what I please with them, so... Kenth is Ana's OC. I hope I wrote him correctly. I'm not entirely sure I even wrote Valmas right. I don't know if he'd tell his sob story to someone he just met. But, I had to get that out of the way. And yes, Kamrell is the Goldoan capital. Edited November 30, 2014 by Dragoncat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted November 30, 2014 Share Posted November 30, 2014 Kenth seems fine for now. You didn't do much with him, so I can't really say a lot. But what you did doesn't seem too out of character to me. Good chapter. lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted December 1, 2014 Author Share Posted December 1, 2014 Good :) I thought he would be kinda sarcastic and stuff like that. Good to know I pulled him off right. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted December 1, 2014 Share Posted December 1, 2014 (edited) You're welcome. ^^ If you want to see a taste of how he is when things are serious, you can check out the latest Dawn of Darkness chapter. He shows up in the latter half of it. He's also a bit star-struck and considers Ike a role model. Edited December 1, 2014 by Anacybele Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted December 1, 2014 Author Share Posted December 1, 2014 Haha, he probably won't even show up again. Like I said...brief cameo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted December 1, 2014 Share Posted December 1, 2014 Oh, okay. lol I don't remember you saying that, but I probably just missed it somehow. :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted December 6, 2014 Author Share Posted December 6, 2014 Snowy's character introduced! I know she's supposed to be shy, but...I had her approach Darcen anyway. He DID help her. If it's okay, I might let those two develop a bit of a romance. Random idea though...still going back and forth on it. Jerec will come in soon. As in, probably next chapter. Still don't know when Goliath will be though. Also, kudos if you know who the brown haired rich guy is already ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowy_One Posted December 6, 2014 Share Posted December 6, 2014 I'm okay with it. But remember, Kelly is a Blacksmiths daughter and she CAN technically smith (she knows how to do so and how the various metals work together and the like), she just lacks the strength to do so. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted December 6, 2014 Author Share Posted December 6, 2014 I forgot about that. I knew she wasn't strong enough, yeah, but I forgot about her blacksmith dad. You're okay with how I wrote her, or the romance, or both? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowy_One Posted December 6, 2014 Share Posted December 6, 2014 I'm fine with both. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowy_One Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 If you ever need me to do any writing work for Kelly (I'd love to write up her attempts to enchant the weapons for example) or just need to ask me questions I'm USUALLY on AIM at OSnow3. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted December 11, 2014 Author Share Posted December 11, 2014 I had AIM a long time ago but dont any more and I really dont want to download it just for that. But okay :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowy_One Posted December 15, 2014 Share Posted December 15, 2014 Not to snark/push, but when will the next chapter be out? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted December 15, 2014 Author Share Posted December 15, 2014 Probably sometime this week. It's in progress. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted December 21, 2014 Author Share Posted December 21, 2014 (edited) Not much to say that I didn't PM to Ana. Except...the mention of Cerai being drunk and slamming into the wall. Lol, right? Sometimes I'm so mean to my OCs. Wait I take that back. There is more to say about this chapter. I did my research and found the name of the guy who attacks Ohma in RD(Yeardley). And now that it's been revealed that the tavern hogger was Ludveck, I had to look at his mugshot thing because I forgot what color his hair was. It's nice to have all the info I need right at my fingertips/on the main site. I don't know how Jerec knows all that...I just needed a reason to introduce him. Maybe he overheard some of the Crimean nobles complaining and plotting. Maybe he's sneaky like a thief and can spy effectively. Idk... Edited December 21, 2014 by Dragoncat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted December 21, 2014 Share Posted December 21, 2014 Damn it, I forgot about this thread again. xP But I already said stuff in the story topic... I liked what I read though! :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted December 21, 2014 Author Share Posted December 21, 2014 Damn it, I forgot about this thread again. xP But I already said stuff in the story topic... I liked what I read though! :) Haha I noticed. It happens to the best of us... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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