A bit late, but thank you for the input everyone! School has kept me busy, but I should have some free time in the next few months, so expect a few more attempts from me.
I should have clarified, but the third one is meant to be a leather/cloth hybrid, more the lighter type of armor you'd expect on archers and thieves in game. But yeah, in hindsight the trim does need a bit of work. Thanks for pointing it out guys!
Once I get some of them passable, I plan to try to make a short hack with them.
I just made one recently to ease myself back into things, its not the best, but...This isn't exactly the 'best of' showcase anyways