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TheReaper

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  1. Myes well i think its certainly better. It falls better on him and all. Palettes suck balls..Could you do a custom palette of him maybe? Clothing could be used LaRachels or maybe even proto Moulder if you want it darker white

  2. Circle time

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    On the lower part of the pony tail it seems like the hair is just really flat, shading in the bottom half needs to be less liney, Start of the pony tail seems too stacked with the shading so it doesnt look as though it flows. The eye is lacking shading near where ive circled it on the more to the left. The right hand side of the face OPV, is also too line shaded which makes his face look really straight. Also the shading circled in the collar is too dark in places and the 2nd shade is stacked again.

  3. Critique is nice to listen to ... esp since Kanami gives such detailed and good critique. Though when your say AK or TBA level maybe then you can go "pfeh" to critique"Levin's face does look off, maybe his eyes are too be to be him. Since your doing the older version of him right? older fe men tend to have smaller eyes and more shading under the eyes.

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