First, a million thanks for this translation! it's perfect and and the game is also perfect, wonderful.
Now as I was playing I stumbled upon this ONE short sequence with still some original text left.
that is during the intro rolling scenes if you don't click anything. I'm playing on PS3, not via emulation. Patched with 2.3 version.
here comes a screenshot I got just in time before it goes back to fully translated scenes!