Knight of the White Lake

Epic Wins: The chapter where you get Mia (I can't remember the name of it) I moved all of my units up the center aisle once everyone but the boss and his guard were dead. *reinforcements come in from the back* "Okay, time to get farther away than I was and position a rear guard, heal who needs healing." *looks through units, Rhys can reach them, chooses Gatrie because he's lowest on HP* The two knights and (is it an archer down there?) move in and attack a unit I had completely forgotten about: Ike. I had accidentilly left him down there without moving him--and he only has 12 HP. D: As I saw this, I realized that only one of the knights would be able to move in and hit Ike. The first unit (long range, I believe an archer, I can't remember right now) moves in and shoots. Hits. D: Ike now has a lower amount of HP, way too near to death. The first knight moves in. *MISS* "OH MY GOODNESS!!* Ike hits once, then criticals--epic. I was screaming with happiness, remembering that with my current position only one of the knights would be able to move in on me. I then realized that in killing that knight with a critical, it would allow the second knight to come in. The second knight came in, and I'm squirming in my seat. He attacks--misses, then Ike, with one use left in his sword, criticaled and killed the knight. Leveled up, stats boosted in every stat but luck. THAT is an Epic Win. Just to add to it, I had accidentily put Rhys in the range of the knight with a javelin of the bosses guard. The knight came in, threw the javelin--MISS. Epic Win. Epic Fail: On the level with the three ships, I put Ike on the middle bridge to defend--I figured he'd be fine (full HP, forged sword). About 3 units could reach him, but I figured it wouldn't matter because I looked at their stats and saw that the nearest unit wouldn't be able to be killed in one round by Ike. Archer come in. *HIT* "COME ON!" Knight comes in *HIT* "Grr." Ike hits once, criticals. "WHOOOOOOO!!!" Myrmidon comes in. *MISS* Ike misses the myrmidon. "WHAT??" Myrmidon criticals. O_O "GRRRAAARRR!" Epic Fail.

This is great! I really like the fanfiction you write anyway, but this, if you continue, is certainly a masterpiece. Perhaps Nintendo will pick up on it??.... probably not, but it would be awesome if they would, or if a movie could be made. Anyway, I only saw two grammatical hiccups, but I forgot to write down where they were. Awesome job. Please finish this one, and don't leave us with a short synopsis of what would happen, because this is an AWESOME story.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but as far as I'm concerned, and what I've heard from other people on this site, Jill just stinks... doesn't she? I didn't think a transfer would help her get out of that rut. And the only thing Zihark needs help in is stregnth, right? So, couldn't you just save yourself the trouble and just give him a couple energy drops in RD instead of other characters?

You'll add to this list, right? Add at least Marcia, I'd add in Rolf. Rolf isn't so hard to train up. Probably Rhys too. His magic can be come incredibly high. And, I'm shocked at your lack of Soren on this list. Add him to it, and, if you can actually max them out, the laguz you want and you'll be awesome.

Aw man, you're stopping? Oh well. It was GREAT while it lasted. Hey, thanks for not leaving us hanging. I appreciate that. I hope you continue to write.

Ok, the voice of Rolf: FAIL The voice of Mist (FE10): FAIL, especially in the GM kickbutt cutscene Skrimir + Ranulf + Tibarn: I don't see what was wrong. EPIC! Although, he could've left out 'keep up with me...'

It's really up to the player on bonus experience. But I usually give my BEXP to units that are good that come in underleveled, i.e. Mist, Rolf, Nephenee, and Zihark to a degree.

There should be a "they both stink" option...

Say what!? Ilyana has more DEF?...... . . . . . . ............. .... sure...... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . are you serious?

Yeah, I knew something like that was coming. So thunder is the best, eh? I guess, in order to use things like Rexbolt, I could give Soren every Arms Scroll I find in the game. But that would mean giving them to no one else... Big whoop.

If it was multiple choice, I wouldn't have gotten a straight answer. I've always found "hungry mage" lacking. I'm not heartless. I don't have anybody die..... But if Kieran or Mia die I'm not sad. I never use them. *cringes, waiting for the blow*

Excellent points, Fang, and it's possible you're right that my "good" units are what you would call "godlike", but I doubt it. Besides I've only had one full playthrough (first time memory card corrupted). It's also possible that Tanith was simply not as good as my other units, so I shoved her aside. I'm willing to accept that. Maybe I'll try Tanith this time through.

Meg. Or Fiona. Meg stinks when she comes in. And Fiona just doesn't come in decently leveled.

While I have no issue with someone saying Zihark is better, though it is debateable, saying Mia stinks is ridiculous. Plus their stats are rather similar for a long time. The main difference is Adept and Earth. So if you think Zihark's stats rule even more than his personality, wouldn't Mia's stats rule too? Maybe it's just me, but Mia is really weird and hard to train, for my team. She comes in at Chap. 7, and is nowhere near strong enough STR and DEF to take on Chapter 8. She comes underleveled for my teams, and therefore she seems like a stinky unit. And besides that her personality is funky. She's great in Radiant Dawn, in my opinion BETTER than Zihark, but that doesn't help for this poll.

So, which element is the best in Path of Radiance? And which would be best to train Soren in on my next playthrough? I did a bad job training him the first time, so which is the best element for Soren?

Tanith doesn't amount to much of anything-in fact, she stinks without her Sonic Sword, which is only helpful against flying units-and her reinforcements stink on ice.

That Lethe is an ok unit. And that I hate Marcia as a unit.

Hmm, Best as I can recall: 5. Oscar 4. Rolf 3. Zihark 2. Soren 1. Ike

I have yet to complete Radiant Dawn, because on my first (and only so far) playthrough, I got to the endgame and went in. I didn't get any of the laguz royalties! I don't know why, I thought I chose them to go in, but they didn't come with me for some reason, and I got stuck with units that I hadn't trained since early part 2. Will someone explain to me what happened or what I did wrong?

Zihark, because, plain and simple, his personality rules and his stats rule even more. Mia just stinks.

First time I played, I killed the BK, but then my memory card corrupted. Second time I played, I lost, but by 1 HP point (I'm not sure how he kept it. I aethered when he had 10 HP left) :P

Giffca rules, stat wise, but Tibarn is the better choice in my opinion because of flying. Naesala is just weird. I love Tibarn's personality. So Tibarn's my fav.

I think I would prefer segments. Hey, I finally made it back on (couldn't figure out how to get Serenes Forest to work right on "forget password" for some reason. May have been my computer...) Anyway, I LOVE what you're doing with Taksh! Awesome. You really can weave a story. Really nice.

Technically, on one of those errors, YOU were the one in the right. on the Allen retorted sarcastically, "Yeah, like I'm going to fall for that one" is actually correct, for his sarcastic retort IS what is being said. Otherwise, yeah, Shuuda is right. Just making sure that sentence is allowed. Also, another one of them said that the beginning sentence of a person's line should be lowercased. Er, no. Whenever someone is starting a new sentence, even if you have described half of what is happening, you always upper case the first word of a line that is the start of a new sentence. Keep writing! Oh, and I don't believe it's too slow paced. In fact, that would actually be a problem for the reader, not the writer. Just got to read it normally, not slowly. It doesn't help if you have a bunch of short sentences like "The duel raged" for no detail is inserted. Whoa. Did I just write that? I thought I was always the student of writing! Not the corrector! XD

Same thing happened with my story! The stories that I would post here would be FE free, but I'll post. And remember, these shorter stories are only the stories behind some of the characters. My REAL story is, if I did my math right (because I split things up into events that I believed would take 5 pages to write properly), going to be in the end, well, *coughs*, 300 pages. Possibly more. *laughs nervously* Will I ever finish it, I wonder?