Sigrun

[VincentASM]

I was stuck on the RD part of the bio for a while, so hopefully it's usable : o

Summary

Sigrun is the commander of Begnion's Holy Guard, a noble of Begnion, and an important vassal of Apostle Sanaki. She has a kind and forgiving personality, in stark contrast to her subordinate, Tanith.

Bio

In Path of Radiance

Sigrun first appears to provide much-needed backup, when the Greil's Mercenaries battle to protect a Begnion vessel that is carrying the Apostle. After Apostle Sanaki is found, Sigrun formally introduces herself as the commander of Begnion's Holy Guard. Later, she provides information for the various missions that the Greil's Mercenaries undergo, while they are staying at Begnion. However, after the Greil's Mercenaries leave Begnion, she no longer has a place in the story.

Despite having few appearances, it is clear that Sigrun views Sanaki as somebody very important to her. She is not only cautious of Sanaki's physical safety and status as the Apostle, but is also happy to see Sanaki grow. As for herself, Sigrun's manner of speech is polite and apologetic. Also, during a base conversation, Ike remarks that Sigrun is surprisingly honest and straightforward, unlike many other nobles he has met.

In Radiant Dawn

Sigrun accompanies Apostle Sanaki, when she escapes from the senate-ruled Begnion. To aid Ike's battles, Sigrun returns the holy sword Ragnell to Ike, on behalf of the Apostle. Afterwards, she fights alongside Ike's forces, under the banner of the Apostle's Army. Sigrun also temporarily acts as commander of the Apostle's Army, when they are ambushed by Daein forces, and she leads the forces to protect Sanaki.

After the Goddesses awaken, Sanaki decides to enter the battlefield herself, which causes Sigrun to protest. Naesala offers to protect Sanaki, but Sigrun adamantly refuses, stating that responsibility belongs to the Holy Guard. However, there is time to argue, so Sigrun reluctantly allows Sanaki to do as she pleases. When Sanaki initially encounters the Disciples of Order, they brand her a fraud for allying with Yune, which angers Sigrun.

Eventually, Sanaki confesses to Sigrun that she is not the true Apostle and asks for Sigrun's honest view of her now. Sigrun replies that nothing has changed- she explains that her allegiance was not to the Apostle, but to Sanaki herself. She reveals that she was proud to have served Sanaki, and will continue doing so until her death. Finally, Sigrun comforts Sanaki, by telling her that even though she is not the Apostle, she is still the one, true Empress of Begnion.

Following the relevation, Sigrun continues to fight alongside Sanaki, up until the final battle with Ashera, if the player so chooses.

On the battlefield, Sigrun can converse with a number of foes, many who fight on the senate's side. In one of her conversations with Jill, it is revealed that Sigrun was Haar's "friend" who negotiated to allow Shiharam's squadron to stay in Begnion after the battle of Talrega. Meanwhile, when she fights Lekain, she comdemns his lies and reminds him that there is no rule stating that the Empress of Begnion must be the Apostle as well.

After the war is over, Sigrun continues her services as the commander of the Holy Guard, and guards Sanaki for the rest of her life.

[Guest FreelancerSealBoy]

Looks good, except I did notice one thing:

However, there is time to argue, so Sigrun reluctantly allows Sanaki to do as she pleases.

I think you mean there is no time to argue.

[Mitoya]

Yeah, looks really solid. I mostly just want to take out a few unnecessary commas here and there (marked in parentheses):

Summary

Sigrun is the commander of Begnion's Holy Guard, a noble of Begnion, and an important vassal of Apostle Sanaki. She has a kind and forgiving personality, in stark contrast to her subordinate, Tanith.

Bio

In Path of Radiance

Sigrun first appears to provide much-needed backup (,) when the Greil's Mercenaries battle to protect a Begnion vessel that is carrying the Apostle. After Apostle Sanaki is found, Sigrun formally introduces herself as the commander of Begnion's Holy Guard. Later, she provides information for the various missions that the Greil's Mercenaries ((undergo) maybe "undertake?") (,) while they are staying ((at) should be "in") Begnion. However, after the Greil's Mercenaries leave Begnion, she no longer has a place in the story.

((Despite having few appearances, it is clear that Sigrun views Sanaki as somebody very important to her.) could be "Sigrun's few in-game appearances make it clear that..." but this is just personal preference) She is not only cautious of Sanaki's physical safety and status as the Apostle, but is also happy to see Sanaki grow. As for herself, Sigrun's manner of speech is polite and apologetic. Also, during a base conversation, Ike remarks that Sigrun is surprisingly honest and straightforward, unlike many other nobles he has met.

In Radiant Dawn

Sigrun accompanies Apostle Sanaki (,) when ((she) "the latter" or "the Apostle") escapes from the ((senate) capitalized?)-ruled Begnion. To aid Ike's battles, Sigrun returns the holy sword Ragnell to Ike (,) on behalf of the Apostle. Afterwards, she fights alongside Ike's forces (,) under the banner of the Apostle's Army. Sigrun also temporarily acts as commander of the Apostle's Army (,) when they are ambushed by Daein forces, and she leads the forces to protect Sanaki.

After the Goddesses awaken, Sanaki decides to enter the battlefield herself, which causes Sigrun to protest. Naesala offers to protect Sanaki, but Sigrun adamantly refuses, stating that responsibility belongs to the Holy Guard. However, there is time to argue, so Sigrun reluctantly allows Sanaki to do as she pleases. When Sanaki initially encounters the Disciples of Order, they brand her a fraud for allying with Yune, which angers Sigrun.

Eventually, Sanaki confesses to Sigrun that she is not the true Apostle and asks for Sigrun's honest view of her ((now) not sure if this works, but don't know what to do with it - maybe "at that point" or "based on this new information"). Sigrun replies that nothing has changed- she explains that her allegiance was not to the Apostle, but to Sanaki herself. She reveals that she was proud to have served Sanaki, and will continue doing so until her death. Finally, Sigrun comforts Sanaki, by telling her that even though she is not the Apostle, she is still the one, true Empress of Begnion.

Following the relevation, Sigrun continues to fight alongside Sanaki, up until the final battle with Ashera (,) if the player so chooses. (or: move "if the player so chooses" behind "alongside Sanaki" and before the comma)

On the battlefield, Sigrun can converse with a number of foes, ((many who) "including many who" or "many of whom") fight on the ((senate's) capitalized?) side. In one of her conversations with Jill, it is revealed that Sigrun was Haar's "friend" who negotiated to allow Shiharam's squadron to stay in Begnion after the battle of Talrega. Meanwhile, when she fights Lekain, she comdemns his lies and reminds him that there is no rule stating that the Empress of Begnion must be the Apostle as well.

After the war is over, Sigrun continues her services as the commander of the Holy Guard (,) and guards Sanaki for the rest of her life.

[VincentASM]

Thanks : D

I believe senate can be either capitalised or not. I decided to choose the former out of personal preference. If not, I'll change it later.

(Despite having few appearances, it is clear that Sigrun views Sanaki as somebody very important to her.) could be "Sigrun's few in-game appearances make it clear that..." but this is just personal preference)

Your suggestion also works, but it sounds a bit like Sigrun only talks and thinks about Sanaki ^^;;;

I'll have the others fixed as well. I can be a comma freak sometimes DX

Edited January 6, 2009 by VincentASM

[Doom103]

Sigrun is the best fe char ever.... next to hector

Well written

She is hot