Mitoya

Comments below in parentheses/strikethroughs. Just a few revisions, mostly minor grammatical things. Pretty good on the whole.

Looking pretty good. My comments are in parentheses. Sorry if they're a little difficult to read. Just minor stuff. Very nice overall.

Alrighty, here's my revision of the tenses, plus one or two extra small things I caught during the process. I left the Bio section in past tense, since it makes sense that way, and made everything else more uniform.

If you'd like, I could go through and point out the places where the tense shifting is a problem. If you've got it figured out yourself at this point that's fine, too; I just didn't know if that was what you meant by "help there is appreciated."

I might take a closer look at this sometime soon, but at first glance it looks pretty good. The one issue that I notice straight off is frequent tense shifting - I would just keep everything in the in Path of Radiance and in Radiant Dawn sections in the present tense. Also, I think the first part of the "Bio" section would be more appropriately titled Background. One quick typo I also noticed: "She eventually followed in his footsteps and became (a) dracoknight..."