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That feel of getting stuck in the very last line of a translation.

SOMEONE STOLE MY MOM

SHE DOESN'T LIKE ICE CREAM ANYMORE

I bet it's because she's feeling fat.

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AND YOU CALL YOURSELF A MAN

Can I compensate it with 3 Kung Fu and 2 chinese boxing classes per week?

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Until you're roughly the size of a barge.

This is no time for cheap rhymes man.

As punishment, I curse ye with the sound of a thousand children screaming in a sea of cookies n' cream (the best) ice cream.

May it echo through your mind for all of eternity.

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This is no time for cheap rhymes man.

As punishment, I curse ye with the sound of a thousand children screaming in a sea of cookies n' cream (the best) ice cream.

May it echo through your mind for all of eternity.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH

You didn't get the Beauty and the Beast reference? ;-;

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Which line is that?

P052

Time flied->Time flew

P055

"Once you notice, he's already left by himself! If you try talking to him, he's all gloomy."

This sounds weird. I'd say something like:

"When you look for him, he's already left! If you try talking to him, he becomes all gloomy!"

P059

Black/dark figures" rather than "black bodies"

as its center->as its target.

P066

"Left on a journey"

P067

"...to look for someone anymore"?

"And I was here in Manster when I thought that" > "And it was here, in Manster, that that thought occured to me."

P074

"I'm 100% fine now?"

P076

"We used to see"->"We used to look at"

P090

"I'm here because of" > "I'm here thanks to"

P091

I'd just say "Please lend me your strenght" because the rhyme makes it sound funny.

59 - I'm... unsure about the targeting part, because Lakche isn't completely (only mostly) sure it was magic. And regular winds don't really target anybody, do they?

67.1 - I'm not sure... because that would imply he gave up on his quest to find that someone, while it could mean he was just putting it on hold?

67.2 - Actually, I mistranslated resolved/decided (omoitatta) as thought (omotta), there. So it'd be something like "When I decided that, I happened to be in Manster." Even because he didn't stay in Manster specifically because of Manster's situation, but because he was already there.

74 - I'll wait for a native's opinion on that.

Otherwise, fixed.

59 - Well, I still think target could work, but better ask a native.

67.1 - It doesn't sound like that there's such an implication to me. Just that he'll stop for now, and go back to it when the time changes.

67.2 - I still think it'd be better to construct this in one sentence. Something like "It was in Manster that I made my resolve."

74 - But "I'm 100% now" doesn't make much sense to me. :E Well I assume, "100%" could replace "completely" and you wouldn't say "I'm completely now", right?

59 - That's the plan.

67.1 - I wonder if "it wasn't the time for me to be looking for someone" would be better and not require a complement...

67.2 - What about "and I was in Manster when I made that resolve?" I think it's important to leave it somewhat clear that he didn't make that resolve because of Manster, especially since he does present himself as somebody who was just passing by.

74 - I want to make sure that doesn't work in English.

67.1 - Sounds okay.

67.2 - Yeah, that works too.

76 - I'm 100% sure that it doesn't.

I probably missed some things, so it'd be best if you could proofread it as well.

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You didn't get the Beauty and the Beast reference? ;-;

Nope.

The only Disney movie I remember is The Hunchback of Notre Dame.

In unrelated news, screw you Dissidia and your unending stream of bogus lvl 130 fights.

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