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Celice is very happy when Alvis is dead~

Celice is very happy when he meets the ghosts of his parents~

How childish... Whoever said he is 10 must be right.

I did.

I have to go, unfortunately.

Bye.

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1. Comma needed before and after

2. Comma needed after

3. Comma needed in between

4. Comma needed in between

5. Comma needed in between

6. Comma needed in between

7. Unecessary sentence

8. Comma need in between

9. Italics part: What? Doesn't that kind of go without saying? And isn't that out of place?

10. Bolded part: Apostrophe unecessary

His grammar is attrocious, facts about FE4 aside.

That's because he's from Brazil, if I remember right.

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I've never heard anything about luigi being a BR.

I don't think he is.

Oh, I guess you were quoting someone, and Lux was referring to him.... I thought he was referring to you.

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That's because he's from Brazil, if I remember right.

Well, you're supposed to

Use proper grammar, spelling, capitalization, and punctuation when posting.

And this is a story article which is to be published when done. Nothing should be mistaken.

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Well, you're supposed to

And this is a story article which is to be published when done. Nothing should be mistaken.

To be fair, Vincent and others do some proofreading.

However, that isn't the main issue with Luigi's articles...

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