Princess Kilvas Posted February 12, 2009 Share Posted February 12, 2009 (edited) He looks kinda like Snake. Hmm...looking at it now, He does. Edited February 12, 2009 by Princess Kilvas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted February 12, 2009 Share Posted February 12, 2009 looks like nightmare cuz of the blindfold Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted February 12, 2009 Author Share Posted February 12, 2009 He looks kinda like Snake. Snake? SNAKE? SNAAAAAAAAAKKKKKEEE?! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted February 12, 2009 Share Posted February 12, 2009 Nighty? Nightmare? That's not Nightmare. That's just a random bartender. XD looks like nightmare cuz of the blindfold This Also, am I the only one who thought the generic theives Battle Animation in Path of Radience looked like Solid Snake? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riariadne Posted February 12, 2009 Share Posted February 12, 2009 ThisAlso, am I the only one who thought the generic theives Battle Animation in Path of Radience looked like Solid Snake? Not really, the Radiant Dawn generic swords-masters do though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted February 19, 2009 Share Posted February 19, 2009 Only one page for now. kinda crappy. I wasn't in the best of moods while drawing it. Next coming soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted February 19, 2009 Share Posted February 19, 2009 Kewl Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted February 20, 2009 Share Posted February 20, 2009 You know, if you're going to draw chairs, you should try to do a better job. They're not even in perspective. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted February 24, 2009 Share Posted February 24, 2009 The 20th page: Next coming soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted February 25, 2009 Share Posted February 25, 2009 When drawing comics, try to compress the frames a bit more. I may as well add that when you draw your character faces they look too flat and don't have enough shape. There are also too many frames with nothing but a character saying something in it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted February 26, 2009 Share Posted February 26, 2009 Next Page When drawing comics, try to compress the frames a bit more. I may as well add that when you draw your character faces they look too flat and don't have enough shape. There are also too many frames with nothing but a character saying something in it. Sorry, I had already finished this page before you posted that...But I'll definitely keep that in mind for the next page. Sorry again...^^' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted February 26, 2009 Share Posted February 26, 2009 As for frame order, the last three are arranged incorrectly, assuming you're going with manga style. Usually, while the panels are read from right to left, if there is a "vertical" panel next to two horizontals then the two horizontals are read before the vertical in descending order. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted March 1, 2009 Share Posted March 1, 2009 Ok..22nd page. Also the end of chapter 2. (finally). I tried to compress the frames a little.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted March 1, 2009 Author Share Posted March 1, 2009 Hooray! Though, looking back on it, I hate the dialogue. XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted March 4, 2009 Share Posted March 4, 2009 Page 23. This'll be the last page for awhile, I'm gonna try to upload more at a time from now on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted March 5, 2009 Share Posted March 5, 2009 Lol at the last frame. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ragnell Posted March 5, 2009 Share Posted March 5, 2009 Your comic is fairly good as usual. But the last frame, while funny, had a really bothersome problem with it. Both characters' necks are much too long. I know you can't go back and change it now, but I just thought I'd bring it up to help you in the future. It's still good, though... I really like this story. This was the first story I read before I joined SF, and it kinda' set the mood for the website for me. But is there a way Princess and Lyle could make a copy of this story (both manga and script) without messages throughout. While funny, it can be really hard to find where specific things are, and the manga strips are hard to follow with all the messages in between. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted March 12, 2009 Share Posted March 12, 2009 (edited) Your comic is fairly good as usual. But the last frame, while funny, had a really bothersome problem with it. Both characters' necks are much too long. I know you can't go back and change it now, but I just thought I'd bring it up to help you in the future. It's still good, though...I really like this story. This was the first story I read before I joined SF, and it kinda' set the mood for the website for me. But is there a way Princess and Lyle could make a copy of this story (both manga and script) without messages throughout. While funny, it can be really hard to find where specific things are, and the manga strips are hard to follow with all the messages in between. Oh, you mean like..a topic with nothing but the pages? also, 3 more pages. I'm gonna start putting page numbers on them. More soon. Edited March 12, 2009 by Princess Kilvas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted March 12, 2009 Author Share Posted March 12, 2009 Hooray! More more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 Finally! I'm able to access Serenes! 2 more pages: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 Once again there were some confusing panels orders (specifically 03/05/09's top line), but 15/03/09's page was quite nicely done. However, you need to have less blank space in the frame and fill it up (even if it's just a cheap texture). If you do decide to put something like buildings in, try to do them with some good quality drawing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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