Inactive Account Posted April 11, 2010 Share Posted April 11, 2010 (edited) I'd post these in my art topic, except we've got this lovely sprite forum here... I'm not much of a spriter, but I do occasionally make some. Old stuff: Kiryn, a laughably obvious splice... Newest one: Kelas, my RP character. I know the shirt and the hair need work... other comments? Also, by Fire Emblem standards, is Kelas' gender obvious or not? Edited April 11, 2010 by _____ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Cynthia- Posted April 11, 2010 Share Posted April 11, 2010 The outline on the shirt seems not dark enough or disjointed or something. Also, that dark yellow color on peach is not the prettiest color combination IMO. Overall good though, I don't really have any issues with the hair. She looks somewhat androgynous, though more female than male. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted April 11, 2010 Share Posted April 11, 2010 Its supposed to be Female Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted April 13, 2010 Author Share Posted April 13, 2010 Fixed the shirt a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Cynthia- Posted April 13, 2010 Share Posted April 13, 2010 Looks much better IMO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted April 13, 2010 Share Posted April 13, 2010 Did you darken the shirt? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted April 13, 2010 Author Share Posted April 13, 2010 It's a bit lighter, actually, and less color-saturated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted April 13, 2010 Share Posted April 13, 2010 It still looks darker to me Could be the contacts <_< Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted April 15, 2010 Author Share Posted April 15, 2010 Moar RP character. If you guess who he is, don't post it, I'm revealing that later... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 I assumed Kelas was a guy at first glance, but I'll never be 100% sure Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted April 15, 2010 Author Share Posted April 15, 2010 Heh, then I have achieved my objective. Makes it more plausible when people mistake her for a guy in-RP, lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 Heh, then I have achieved my objective. Makes it more plausible when people mistake her for a guy in-RP, lol. Why's that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 The mug has a simple charm to it, but clean up the splicing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted November 9, 2010 Author Share Posted November 9, 2010 Personal mug. I'm a geek and own too many black T-shirts for my own good. Criticisms welcome, especially regarding the hair and the mouth; I'm not entirely sure about those. More forthcoming, actually! I've got a few getting ready to post next time, and also an edit of the personal mug for Serenes Emblem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cymbeline Posted November 9, 2010 Share Posted November 9, 2010 (edited) Personal mug. I'm a geek and own too many black T-shirts for my own good. Criticisms welcome, especially regarding the hair and the mouth; I'm not entirely sure about those. More forthcoming, actually! I've got a few getting ready to post next time, and also an edit of the personal mug for Serenes Emblem. Missing a few dots of the outline on the right side of her neck. And her mouth has a lighter pink color that I think you forgot to change. Her right shoulder also looks a little odd. . . maybe round it out a bit unless her shirt is puffed out like that at the shoulder. Also, the shading on her neck next to her ponytail (braid?) needs to be more defined. Lastly, in terms of hair, the top of her head should maybe be rounded out a bit, since the slant looks a bit odd. Although admittedly, I do like her mischievous-type smile and design. :) Edited November 9, 2010 by Cymbeline Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted November 9, 2010 Author Share Posted November 9, 2010 Fixed some things. Thanks, Cymbeline. Also, nomad!personalmug, eventually for Serenes Emblem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted November 18, 2010 Author Share Posted November 18, 2010 arg double poooooost Entry for the 19th splicing contest. I saw the dragon, I had to try it. About those other ones I was gonna post, yeeeaaaahhh they're in progress. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psych Posted November 18, 2010 Share Posted November 18, 2010 ....You need to work on shading on the shirt thing for the other mugs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peener weener Posted November 18, 2010 Share Posted November 18, 2010 (edited) I'd post these in my art topic, except we've got this lovely sprite forum here... I'm not much of a spriter, but I do occasionally make some. Old stuff: Kiryn, a laughably obvious splice... Newest one: Kelas, my RP character. I know the shirt and the hair need work... other comments? Also, by Fire Emblem standards, is Kelas' gender obvious or not? Well, the first problem I noticed was that there is no shading under the hair. Is that a bandana in the first one? Also, I am not so sure about this one, but the outline might be too thick. Moar RP character. If you guess who he is, don't post it, I'm revealing that later... Same as above. And his eyebrow... I don't know. arg double poooooost Entry for the 19th splicing contest. I saw the dragon, I had to try it. About those other ones I was gonna post, yeeeaaaahhh they're in progress. <333333333 Edited November 18, 2010 by Dickpickle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted November 18, 2010 Author Share Posted November 18, 2010 Re the first one: yeah that's a bandana, and I'm pretty sure that's the first splice I made, I dunno... a year, two years ago? I see what you mean about the shading under the hair, thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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