Ansem Posted April 21, 2010 Share Posted April 21, 2010 (edited) These are just some mugs i made when i was bored You might have seen some of them already I'm a newbie if you hadnt notice yet Constructive Criticism is welcomed My best one so far This was my avy for a while This one was designed after me and the first mug This is one i rushed. The collar is badly done and so is the neck. i'll fix it when i have time Edited February 5, 2011 by Train Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Posted April 21, 2010 Share Posted April 21, 2010 My best Mug so far MegaNeck Lloyd's jacket is worn just a tad bit higher than you have it on that sprite so I'd suggest shortening the neck, thinning it a bit, and lowering the head a few pixels more into the outfit :) Also, his hair is cut off close to the point where it should be going into the jacket. It looks like you raised the head higher or something without filling in the hair. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted April 21, 2010 Author Share Posted April 21, 2010 (edited) I didnt change the neck I see what you mean with I gave it a border so that people can tell Nevertheless i attempted trying to lengthen the neck and here is what i got Edited April 21, 2010 by Kai-Sama Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Posted April 21, 2010 Share Posted April 21, 2010 I didnt change the neck I see what you mean with I gave it a border so that people can tell Nevertheless i attempted trying to lengthen the neck and here is what i got Head's at the right height now, but the neck is still a bit too thick in the front. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted April 21, 2010 Author Share Posted April 21, 2010 I dont get what you mean by thickness I moved the head more to the right Did that help? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Posted April 21, 2010 Share Posted April 21, 2010 I dont get what you mean by thickness I moved the head more to the right Did that help? When I said thinner, I meant shortening the neck horizontally. The left side of the neck should be less visible and slightly more to the right to give the right proportional neck size. The neck outline goes straight down from the left side of the head. Try to move it over so that the neck outline goes straight down from the dark shady spot right under the mouth. That seems like a good reference point I think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted April 21, 2010 Author Share Posted April 21, 2010 I see now Would it worked if i got rid of it like this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Posted April 21, 2010 Share Posted April 21, 2010 I see now Would it worked if i got rid of it like this :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted April 21, 2010 Author Share Posted April 21, 2010 I fixed the Hector one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Posted April 21, 2010 Share Posted April 21, 2010 I fixed the Hector one Apparently his neck had some minor issues too These look really good by the way, and let me just say that I S-S-S-SUUUUCK at FE6-8 sprites. Weird, I know Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted May 7, 2010 Share Posted May 7, 2010 Ephraim's face = WIN! Ephraim~sama~ <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted May 20, 2010 Share Posted May 20, 2010 This is one i rushed. The collar is badly done and so is the neck. i'll fix it when i have time *Blink* Shite, I probably should've looked at this thread earlier..only recently I made a sprite for a hack boss using Murdock and Glaring Hector XD Ah well, I should probably change mine to avoid confusion. (Your fixed version looks better than mine anyways ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted May 21, 2010 Author Share Posted May 21, 2010 If i remember correctly the glaring Hector and the angry Hector are different Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted May 22, 2010 Share Posted May 22, 2010 That's sad Hector, according to the list in a nightmare module. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted May 22, 2010 Author Share Posted May 22, 2010 (edited) Yay i made more All of these are for a RP im in This is Helios. One of the Crimson weapon wielders. This is Helios after some retouching So i made two older versions of Helios and i cant decide which one to use This is the first one And this is the alternate one Edited May 22, 2010 by Kai-Sama Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 For some reason I'm liking the first older one better. He seems more humble than what we're used to XD Yeah go with that one. I'm sure by the end of this if he survives he'll be a bit more humble especially if he gets laid XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanami Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 Helios? Humble? What the fwooo? I'd go with the second older one, based on what Phoenix said, but disagreeing with his points. Unless you've been making Helios unlikeable on purpose from the very beginning, I don't see how you could change him to be more..."humble" Plus, I enjoy Helios's stupidity sometimes XD A bit like the character people use for comic relief. And the second one yells "I noble, respect meeeee~!" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted May 29, 2010 Author Share Posted May 29, 2010 He does seem a little humble I'll use the second one for something else Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deliriyum Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 Would you mind if I used this guy in my hack? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted May 29, 2010 Author Share Posted May 29, 2010 @ Core: Sorry, no can do Erika lance lord sprite Needs some work To me i think the head looks a little big Scarface :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted May 30, 2010 Share Posted May 30, 2010 Eirika's sprite is too small. The image was resized. That guy has a bulge of hair in the back for some reason. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted May 31, 2010 Author Share Posted May 31, 2010 I dont remember resizing the Erika sprite Need a little help with this. I doesnt look quite right to me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 (edited) I dont remember resizing the Erika sprite Need a little help with this. I doesnt look quite right to me I don't see any splicing error(then again I'm not zooming in yet), just that there is a circlet in the back, with nothing going across the forehead.Though there is hair irregularity. Edited May 31, 2010 by AstraLunaSol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted May 31, 2010 Share Posted May 31, 2010 Neck shading and a bit of hair shading where the two hair types meet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Posted June 1, 2010 Share Posted June 1, 2010 Is that Helios' mum by any chance? It looks like a work in progress, pretty good so far though. The aforementioned errors should be fixed though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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