Princess Kilvas Posted August 19, 2008 Share Posted August 19, 2008 (edited) I must know who Mike is....XD YAY!! A new part!! That was awesome! *applauds* YES!! I have a Death Note and a closet-full of Soren plushies! XD Edited August 19, 2008 by Princess Kilvas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted August 19, 2008 Share Posted August 19, 2008 I must know who Mike is....XDYAY!! A new part!! That was awesome! *applauds* YES!! I have a Death Note and a closet-full of Soren plushies! XD <_< Awesome finally a new part! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fireman Posted August 19, 2008 Author Share Posted August 19, 2008 (edited) I must know who Mike is....XDYAY!! A new part!! That was awesome! *applauds* YES!! I have a Death Note and a closet-full of Soren plushies! XD HINT: It has been mentioned that he is the brother of Queen Fox. Whoa...I just had a deja-vu moment... Edited August 19, 2008 by Fireman Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted August 19, 2008 Share Posted August 19, 2008 HINT: It has been mentioned that he is the brother of Queen Fox.Whoa...I just had a deja-vu moment... Ohhhh.....Ok....Sorry... =P I need a cast list.....XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fireman Posted August 19, 2008 Author Share Posted August 19, 2008 Ohhhh.....Ok....Sorry... =PI need a cast list.....XD It's okay. XD I would send you a cast list, but I'm not allowed to.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted August 19, 2008 Share Posted August 19, 2008 Yes, the "higher ups" are not allowing him to post a cast list... *cough* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiba Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 (edited) I liked this its very good and yes I just read it all today Edited August 21, 2008 by Kiba Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted August 22, 2008 Share Posted August 22, 2008 Lol... More... I still haven't appeared, have I? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songbird Posted August 24, 2008 Share Posted August 24, 2008 Joan is awesome. EVERYONE acts like evil people for the lols. It's common sense. And. OMG. I USED TO BE TERRIFIED OF CLOWNS KEEP THEM AWAY FROM ME ;___; Now to end this charming act review off: LolBowser. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fireman Posted September 1, 2008 Author Share Posted September 1, 2008 (edited) WARNING: The following act may contain shameless advertising of hotels. Act 11: Escape -Cra's underground dungeon(morning time)- *a guard opens the cell with Zero, Bowser, Lila, and NTG* guard: Zero! You're to be executed now! Zero: *still asleep* Five more minutes, mommy... guard: NOW! *everyone wakes up* Lila: Who?! What?! Where?! guard: Zero, come with me. You're execution is in five minutes. Zero: So it's come to this, eh? -meanwhile, at Hotel Masu- Mike: Wow, Hotel Masu sure is fancy. Raven: Hell yeah. Mike: I mean! Look at this place! A nine-star hotel with decorated rooms with the highest quality drinks at the lowest prices. Raven: Not to mention the outdoor pool that's usually swarming with chicks. Mike: On top of that, they have the finest staff available in all the world, that will cater to your every desire. Raven: Yes, Hotel Masu, where pleasure is only a phone call away! *Raven and Mike put their thumbs up* Fear smashes Raven and Mike with a steel chair. Mike and Raven fall to the ground, bleeding and unconscious. Pein: What was that for?! Fear: Sorry. I thought they had been possessed by some sort of commercial demon. *Deth facepalms* Princess: *sighs* I miss Soren... *Fear unzips his magical backup and takes out a life-size Soren plushie* Princess: Yay! *Princess grabs the plushie and hugs it* Princess: Um...Why is this plushie so dirty? Fear: Oh, don't worry. Those are just blood stains. I think the last guy who had the plushie lived...unfortunately... Princess: ...Blood stains... Pein: ...Lived... Deth: Unfortunately? Princess: I'm scared... Pein: Me too... Princess, Pein, and Deth stare into the Soren plushie's blank eyes. Princess puts the plushie on the table. Deth, Pein, and Fear slowly backup and leave the room. Fear: Wimps. -meanwhile, at the jet- *Bruce has just untied Joan* Joan: So...what now? Lover: I'm not talking to you. Joan: I wasn't talking to you! Lover: Hmph. Joker: This is boring. What are we waiting for? Lover: We're waiting for Soren to find the keys...and the phonebooks. Speaking of which...where is Soren? Silence... Lover: Oh crap. Not again. Dammit! It's like I need to put a leash on him! *Lover goes into Princess's room and sees a note on the floor with a bunch of random scribbles on it* Joker: What is it? Lover: Don't ask me how I think this, but...I think it's a note from Soren... *Lover hands the note to Joker* Joan: Let me see. *Joker hands the note to Joan* Joan: "Dear Poopyheads, I went into town to see if I could get a blacksmith to forge us some new keys. Sincerely, your favorite emo mage." *Joan, Bruce, and Joker stare at Joan, giving her a puzzled look* Joan: What? I took gibberish in high school. Joker: Ah... *the jet rumbles* Lover: What was that? *Lover looks outside to see 15 men in clown masks shooting missiles at them* Lover: God...I hate clowns. Joker: Clowns, you say? *Joker walks outside* Joker: Hey guys! Wassup? clown#1: Oh you know. Just trying to rescue you. Joker: No need. I'm working with these guys now. clown#1: Aw...But don't you think chaos and destruction is more fun? Joker: True...Alright! Give me a gun! *clown#2 tosses a machine gun to Joker* Joker: AstaLa'Vista baby! Joker aims at Joan and presses the trigger. Lover pulls her out of the way and gets shot(50 bullets per second) for 5 seconds. Joan: Lover! NOOO! *Bruce transforms into The Hulk and jumps out of the jet. Joker is knocked down to the floor with The Hulk's left hook. Joker: Ow! That really hurt. Bruce: ...Go on! I'll be okay... *Joan closes the door to the jet* Joan: Wait! I don't have the keys! Lover: *half-dead* I just remembered...the keys are...in my pocket. *Joan reaches into Lover's pocket and takes out the keys* Joan: If you weren't dying right now, I'd so kill you. *Joan starts up the jet* Joan: Well, I've gotten the high score Jet Rescue 4, so driving a jet in real life shouldn't be too hard...Don't worry Lover! I'm going to get you into a hospital! *the jet takes off* clown#1: So...what now? *the clowns see The Hulk, looming over them with large, angry fists* clown#2: I'm guessing we have to fight this big, green guy. *clown#2 gets punched in the face by the Hulk* Hulk: HULK SMASH! -meanwhile, outside Hotel Masu- Frost: WARRIORS! ATTACK! *the 50 warriors transform into dragons and let out a devastating, combined burst of flame, destroying the first 57 floors of Hotel Masu* *Mike and Raven wake up* Raven: What the hell just happened?! Pein: I think these dragon fellows just destroyed the first 57 floors... Fear: And you guys wonder why I don't like there to be under 58 floors in a hotel. Frost: UNLESS YOU WANT ANOTHER DEMONSTRATION OF OUR POWER, HAND OVER PRI- Mike: NEVER! Deth: Here you go. *Deth hands Princess over to Frost* Princess: What the hell are you doing it?! Deth: I don't feel like protecting Princess anymore. Frankly, I find it fucking boring now. Raven: You're a sick bastard. Deth: Why thank you, Sir Raven. Frost: Wait a second...This isn't Priscilla! YOU DARE MOCK ME?! Fear: Oh...They were looking for Priscilla, not Princess... Deth: Fuck. PEIN! Pein: I know! Frost: Prepare to die! WARRIORS! ATTACK! *the 50 dragons simultaneously breathe out large bursts of flame* *in a blinding flash of light, Pein and Deth disappear, but in their place, stands a new, cloaked figure(Dva)* Dva: Freeze the flames. Action seconded. Motion carried! Dva lifts up his left hand. The bursts of flame are frozen in midair, inches away from hitting them. Raven: The hell? Mike: *stares at the flames frozen in front of him* I must admit. This is pretty cool. Dva: Delete the dragons. Action seconded. Motion carried! Dva points at Frost. Frost disappears from sight along with the frozen flames and the other dragons. Mike: Where'd they go? Dva: I deleted them from reality. Raven: What...or who...exactly are you? Dva: An avatar of order and chaos. Fear: Great...another Ashunera... To be continued by Act 12: Reunion Edited September 1, 2008 by Fireman Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiba Posted September 1, 2008 Share Posted September 1, 2008 good one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uguu Posted September 1, 2008 Share Posted September 1, 2008 *Joan, Bruce, and Joker stare at Joan, perplexed* This sentence doesn't make sense, but good nontheless. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fireman Posted September 1, 2008 Author Share Posted September 1, 2008 This sentence doesn't make sense, but good nontheless. Whoops. Thanks for noting that, Hika. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 Psst, when do I appear? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fireman Posted September 2, 2008 Author Share Posted September 2, 2008 Psst, when do I appear? Soon enough. :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 -tries to figure out what that means- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 It means about 200 acts later. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fireman Posted September 6, 2008 Author Share Posted September 6, 2008 (edited) FNZ is undergoing new, more proffesional management by Nightmare, Songbird, and I. The tables have been set and every last detail decided, so Act 12 shall come out later today. Also, until said otherwise, each act shall be posted on Saturday or Sunday from now on, once a week, every week. Edited September 6, 2008 by Fireman Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted September 6, 2008 Share Posted September 6, 2008 Alright that seems good. I do that as well. Can I ask, that if it's possible, that I know a bit ahead of time so I don't post near the time time as you are. Or visca versa Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fireman Posted September 6, 2008 Author Share Posted September 6, 2008 Alright that seems good. I do that as well.Can I ask, that if it's possible, that I know a bit ahead of time so I don't post near the time time as you are. Or visca versa Okay. That sounds good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted September 6, 2008 Share Posted September 6, 2008 Okay. That sounds good. Thanks. On weekends I'll tell you any of you three (depends on who is on) that I'm about to post soon. And if you are about to do post, can you PM me if I'm on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fireman Posted September 7, 2008 Author Share Posted September 7, 2008 (edited) ~Plot Notes~ []=Deth talking {}=Pein talking (nothing)=both Deth and Pein talking ---------- Act 12: Reunion written by Fireman edited by Nightmare -at Cra's underground dungeon- guard: Well? What are you waiting for? Get up! *Zero stands up* *NTG wakes up* NTG: What's going on? Bowser: Zero's going to be executed. Lila: Wait! I have a secret stash of pineapples in the hidden cabinet in here! I'll give all of them to you if you just leave Zero alone for now! guard: As tempting as that is...I'm going to have to bring Zero to the execution room now. Zero: Fine. -at the remains of what used to be Hotel Masu- Fear: You see, a few years ago, Vincent and I made Dva in a lab. He would have the power to bend reality, but we were afraid that he would misuse this power, so we decided to give him two minds instead of one. Both of which, together, would be able to see all the rights and wrongs of any situation. You know the two minds as Deth and Pein. Deth is the mind of anger and force while Pein is the mind of compassion and understanding. It was perfect, except....That was the problem. They had two minds that were complete opposites. They never got along and one day, they used their reality bending power to separate them into two bodies, but be able to reform back into one if the time ever came. Raven: So let me get this straight. Right now, standing in front of us, is the man who can change everything back to normal...But he won't? Dva: [Correct.] {Deth doesn't want to...} Raven: Convince him, then! Dva: {What do you say, Deth? How about we restore the world back to normal?} [Action denied.] {Why not?} [Why should we? It's not like it benefits us.] {But it'll help these people.} [Why should I care about others? In case you've forgotten, we don't need anyone else to survive.] {But it's the right thing to do.} [i don't freaking care what's the right thing to do! And that's that!] CGV: Why is Dva talking to himself, Raven? Raven: You didn't pay attention to Fear at all, didn't you? CGV: Nope. -at a church- *a jet lands* Joan: Wow! I landed a jet without crashing into anything at all! Hm...It appears I don't have any gas left though...Oh well! (A trail of destruction lies behind the path of the jet.) *Joan gets off the jet* *Joan sees Kid, Peppy, and Simon sitting on the floor* Joan: Hi guys! Kid: Joan? I thought you were a bad guy? Joan: Nope. I'm actually a good guy. Kid: Well in that case...WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG?! Joan: Pardon? Kid: LOVER SAID WE ONLY HAD TO WAIT AN HOUR! DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG WE WAITED?!? WE WAITED THREE FREAKIN' DAYS! THREE FREAKING DAYS! Peppy: Where is Lover, by the way? Kid: THREE FREAKING DAYS! Joan: Oh my self! Lover! He's dying on the floor of the jet! Simon: Let's go. He's probably still clinging to life! *Kid, Peppy, Simon, and Joan run into the jet to see a dead Lover lying on the floor* Simon: Strange...I've never been wrong before. Peppy: So Lover's dead... Kid: GOOD! THAT BASTARD DESERVES IT! Simon: Guilty of lust...may God bless your wicked soul... *draws a cross on his chest* Joan: This is all my fault. If only I had gotten away earlier, he wouldn't have been hit by all those bullets. -execution room- The warden and his two bodyguards are standing in the dark room with a lone chair sitting in the middle. warden: Where's Zero? *a guard and a man with a paper bag on his head walk in* warden: That Zero in that bag? guard: Yes, sir. warden: Strap him to the electric chair. *the guard straps the bagged man on to the electric chair* warden: Turn it on! The guard pulls the lever on the wall and a bright surge of electricity surges through the body of the bagged man. bodyguard#1: Whoa man. Nice light show. bodyguard#2: Totally psychedelic. The paper bag burns to ashes, revealing it to not be Zero's face, but someone else's. warden: The hell? *looks at the guard* Then who are you?! The guard takes off his helmet, revealing himself to be Zero. Zero takes out a gun and aims it at the warden. Zero: I'm Zero, the hero! *the two bodyguards take out their guns and aim it at Zero* *Zero activates his Geass* Zero: I command you two to die! *the two bodyguards aim their guns at themselves and press the trigger, thus, killing themselves* Zero: You're next. *Zero shoots the warden in the head, killing him* -back at the remains of Hotel Masu- Dva: [i'm hungry. Let's eat.] {Action dismissed.} [What? You fucking...] Princess: I have a suggestion. Dva: {Yes?} Princess: Can you teleport the jet and everybody in it over here? Dva: {What do you say?} [i say...only if you let me eat something.] {Fine. Action seconded.} Motion carried! *a tray with a hot dog, a soda, and a bag of Cheese Nips materializes out of thin air* Dva: [Cheese Its?! I hate Cheese Its!] {They're Cheese Nips!} [Like there's a difference!] {Hey! There is a big difference between Cheese Its and Cheese Nips!} [Like what?] {Well....} [AHA! You see! They're the freaking same!] Princess: Ahem. Dva Oh, right...Action seconded!] Motion carried! *the jet appears in a flash of blue light* *Joan, Kid, Peppy, and Simon walk out of the jet* Peppy: Where are we? Princess: Kid! Kid: Princess! *Kid and Princess hug each other* Princess: I thought Joan- Kid: I turns out she's a good guy. Princess: Oh. Raven: Hey guys. Look what I found! Raven turns over a large chunk of rock to find a girl under it. She has red hair and a feather in her hair. *the girl(Priscilla) wakes up* Priscilla: Ughh...Where am I? Raven: Hey there, who- *Nyrik jumps out from behind a large rock, aiming an arrow at Raven's head* Nyrik: Put your hands up and stay away from her! *Raven raise his arms and backs away* *Vincent and Eggman arrive* CGV: Vincent? That you? Simon: With Eggman? CGV: Why are you two here? Raven: What the hell is going on? Vincent: I have something important to tell you all. Eggman: And I am here to deliver to you the Master Plan to defeat Cra, once and for all. ---------- ~Writer Notes~ The 1st version of this act was originally titled "Prison Break". Songbird was supposed to edit this act as well, but we were already late in posting this act, so we decided not to send it to her. (Sorry, Song.) To be continued by Act 13: Four and only Four Edited September 7, 2008 by Fireman Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zero the Hero Posted September 8, 2008 Share Posted September 8, 2008 Yes! *standing ovation* This should be a real movie! This is Oscar material! :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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