Astelaine Posted September 26, 2011 Share Posted September 26, 2011 She looks great, Seph! Nice fixes! *cheers!* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted September 29, 2011 Author Share Posted September 29, 2011 (edited) Hey look, it's a blond, closet lesbian with huge tits. Edited September 29, 2011 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted September 29, 2011 Share Posted September 29, 2011 OhaiagainRefiawithadyejobandwhorishness. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted September 29, 2011 Author Share Posted September 29, 2011 (edited) OhaiagainRefiawithadyejobandwhorishness. ButAKIdidn'tevenlookatoruseRefiaforanyofthis;n; Like, what. Edited September 29, 2011 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted September 30, 2011 Share Posted September 30, 2011 Them's some biiiiig titties. Quite the interesting hairstyle though. Looks like she stopped bothering to primp it after a certain point. Makes it original. Me like. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted October 27, 2011 Author Share Posted October 27, 2011 (edited) Ahoy hoy ' x' Shiny Charmander gave me a great reference, AK bluntly pointed out problems, and now we have come to the end of the ride. Halloween contest time Edited October 27, 2011 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted October 27, 2011 Author Share Posted October 27, 2011 (edited) I finished it, and now she has a costume ' x' Edited the greens, they were a tad too bright. Edited October 28, 2011 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astelaine Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 Seph, great job with the fixes. She looks a ton better now, the hair and face especially. Soo cute~! As for crit: I feel like her cleavage comes up too high, and needs lowered a few px. On the other hand, I know you were specifically going for gratuitous funbaggage, so do as you will. Also, Rydia's irises seem too dark; unless you're zoomed in, they appear black. Needs moar lightest green. Good luck in the Halloween contest! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted October 29, 2011 Author Share Posted October 29, 2011 Yeah, it needed more of the lighter green. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 25, 2011 Author Share Posted December 25, 2011 Hey look, it's Catria ' x' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warg Posted December 25, 2011 Share Posted December 25, 2011 I like the sprite, but her left (our right) shoulder pad its not symmetrical with the other and it it seems like its going to fall Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 25, 2011 Author Share Posted December 25, 2011 It's not supposed to be symmetrical. That's called an angle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warg Posted December 25, 2011 Share Posted December 25, 2011 still it seems like its going to fall of her shoulder Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 25, 2011 Author Share Posted December 25, 2011 still it seems like its going to fall of her shoulder You meant with the trim, right. http://www.serenesforest.net/media/wall/wall5_1280_1024.jpg I used the wallpaper as the reference art for this, and the shoulder pads aren't symmetrical. And if you look, there's a strap of leather running under the shoulder pad. That's what's holding it there. I don't appreciate Fire Emblem character design because even though it makes sense it does look really stupid, but what can ya do. So if this wasn't supposed to represent Catria, I'd go and do something about the shoulder pads. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warg Posted December 25, 2011 Share Posted December 25, 2011 (edited) They aren't symmetrical you're right in that. I think you could put the shoulder pad one or two pixels closer to the rest of the armor PS; hope you dont mind i do that in your sprite Edited December 25, 2011 by Warg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 25, 2011 Author Share Posted December 25, 2011 I could, but I don't think it's falling like you do ' 3' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warg Posted December 25, 2011 Share Posted December 25, 2011 I pointed what i thought that could be improved, now it's up to you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 25, 2011 Author Share Posted December 25, 2011 Nah, I'm fine with it. Gotta work on my Christmas contest entry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 25, 2011 Author Share Posted December 25, 2011 Holy shit...! Christmas comp mug! Geezus I can actually finish stuff when motivated. Dithering was the only way I could get the effect of it being a wool knit sweater ahhhhh~ will never dither again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eCut Posted December 25, 2011 Share Posted December 25, 2011 (edited) Dithering definitely gave it that wool look! My only complaint is the white zigzags look a little too spaced out on the right(opv) side of her chest compared to the rest of the zigzags.But it is really nice. :) Edited December 25, 2011 by eCut Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted February 23, 2012 Author Share Posted February 23, 2012 Hey guys I still sprite D: Sometiiiiiimes. This is the old one for comparison. Geez, I used to be that bad at spriting? fgsfds Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onmi Posted February 23, 2012 Share Posted February 23, 2012 What do you mean "Used to?" I kid! I kid! The improvements are very obvious! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astelaine Posted February 23, 2012 Share Posted February 23, 2012 She is sooo cute. Hrrfff, adorable eyes! You should try a different angle on your next FC. Busty Blonde/Rydia, Catria, and Amera here all have very similar poses. Now that you have improved so much, issue yourself a challenge! :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted February 23, 2012 Share Posted February 23, 2012 http://puu.sh/i5Sz 8B -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- In all seriousness, yeah. I agree with Astel. Another pose would be interesting. I have to say that she is kinda...big. Idk if that is on purpose... Her hair is like...a rag on her head and the strands don't agree on where they originate and where they wanna flow. The near arm is kinda dinky compared to the far arm. I believe it's a near boob problem. Near boob is slightly bigger than the far one. lol idk. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted February 23, 2012 Author Share Posted February 23, 2012 (edited) http://puu.sh/i5Sz 8B -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- In all seriousness, yeah. I agree with Astel. Another pose would be interesting. I have to say that she is kinda...big. Idk if that is on purpose... Her hair is like...a rag on her head and the strands don't agree on where they originate and where they wanna flow. The near arm is kinda dinky compared to the far arm. I believe it's a near boob problem. Near boob is slightly bigger than the far one. lol idk. LolCharIloveyou<3 And I would but different poses are scary :< but I can try ; ~ ; Big is on purpose. And if you can help with the hair then hellllllp because I seriously don't know what to do Q u Q. And if the boobs are a problem then let me squish them down to size I'll see if I can bother AK about them :B OH BUT CHAR if you do help with the hair don't like, sprite anything for it because I tend to copy stuff when given a sprited example. Text or red lines pl0x? :< Edited February 23, 2012 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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