Astelaine Posted January 21, 2012 Share Posted January 21, 2012 Wow, that Skrimir. Unf! In all seriousness, that's some fucking excellent hair. I'm just mesmerized by all the details. Beyond that, his face, pose, and clothes are excellent too, and all the shading is so smooth. Gosh, Vamp. P.S. Will love you forever if you finish that Haar from the first page. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted May 23, 2012 Author Share Posted May 23, 2012 (edited) *Really should sprite more often and consistantly* Fe7x Eliza Far arm's too dark? And maybe shoulderpad's should match? I dno This is like, first draft. (Yeti's battle sprite, I couldn't be bothered re-uploading with it removed as I'm at work, so yeah, that's not mine) Edited May 23, 2012 by Vampire Elf Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kon Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 Holy nuts, Vamp made an update. :o On the sprite, I'm not sure if it's just me but it looks like her left (her POV) pauldron is too far off her shoulder, making it look a little like her arm is dislocated. And her right arm looks very tiny and for some reason it looks oddly shaded. Maybe a bit too much of the second shade? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 (edited) *Really should sprite more often and consistantly* Fe7x Eliza Far arm's too dark? And maybe shoulderpad's should match? I dno This is like, first draft. (Yeti's battle sprite, I couldn't be bothered re-uploading with it removed as I'm at work, so yeah, that's not mine) Yea Vamp, you should. (It's Nayr, btw.) And get your butt on IM. :( Also concerning Eliza. Might sound a little ironic coming from me, but you have got WAY too much outline on her undershirt. Even I don't put that much. :p Edited May 23, 2012 by The Illusive Man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 (edited) Yeah, looks a tad dark, the far arm. I feel the arms could be a bit thicker, as well, since they look kinda stick-thin atm especially considering that she's a physical unit. Looking good otherwise, though. Edited May 23, 2012 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted May 23, 2012 Author Share Posted May 23, 2012 Thanks For the cnc so far! I'll get a crack onto it when I get home :) @Nayr: ATM her undershirt isn't shaded, when I get to it I'll be using her hair tones. @Anyone who cares: I pretty much only use Skype now, feel free to add me justin.ilijevski just put your username in the add so I know who imtalking to ;) Which shoulderpad type should I got for? Simple or tiered, I feel tey should be the same, she's a lord, but she's also t1, so I dno Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 Are her headpieces on her cheeks meant to be at the same level? If so, the one on the right is too high up on her face, I think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Blind Archer Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 Whose right, ours or hers? Her head's on an angle, so that could possibly change the outcome. This is generally why I use near/far regarding positioning on portraits That said, I'm echoing Lumi's comments about the arms. She's scrawny for a physical class. I don't know how FE Yeti wants the character builds to be, but Eliza needs serious beefing up either way. Why am I giving feedback on a sprite when it's nearly 1 AM? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 Whose right, ours or hers? Her head's on an angle, so that could possibly change the outcome. This is generally why I use near/far regarding positioning on portraits Sorry, I did mean her right, and I was taking into account the fact that she's slightly tilted towards her right, which should really mean that the end of her right headpiece should be at least level or lower than the end of her left headpiece. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BwdYeti Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 Far arm's too dark? And maybe shoulderpad's should match? I dno Yeah to both, and probably should have a gauntlet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted May 23, 2012 Author Share Posted May 23, 2012 So amidst working on eliza fixes I started a splice contest entry, inspiration was Elysium from SC5. Any cnc would be nice, I'm hating the hair and body atm but I can't see much in the way of fixing them without overhauling it and it no longer being splicey. Wtf I did :/ I don't even... http://gyazo.com/b3158ceabb0adaabdcd030bc9dd0a891.png So I accidentally jpeg'd my inital working file, but thanks to the magic of photoshop I was able to set it to 9 colours and retrieve my shit :D and then drop all the shading I'd lost from the splices back in :/ *beats starting it from scratch though* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 Which shoulderpad type should I got for? Simple or tiered, I feel tey should be the same, she's a lord, but she's also t1, so I dno I say tiered. Simple may look too simple for a lord imo and tiered doesn't really make her look T2. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xiltas Crysten Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 Something's bothering me about Eliza's left (our POV) arm, it seems a bit too slim. Still like the overall design, especially the helmet thingy, or whatever to call it^^ Love the Elysium mug, everything is great^^ Couldn't criticize anything about it though I'm still wondering how she sees and breaths Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 So amidst working on eliza fixes I started a splice contest entry, inspiration was Elysium from SC5. Any cnc would be nice, I'm hating the hair and body atm but I can't see much in the way of fixing them without overhauling it and it no longer being splicey. I think you should add some slits for the eyes to see through. Otherwise she'd just be bumping all over the place when trying to walk. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 She doesn't have any in SC5, which is what Vamp was trying to emulate :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted May 24, 2012 Author Share Posted May 24, 2012 Where I'm at with Eliza, still tinkering with lots of bits and pieces, wondering if anyone has updated cnc. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos Aurion Posted May 24, 2012 Share Posted May 24, 2012 The shoulderpads look better now. I think the neck is a bit to thin, maybe a couple pixels wider would look better. Also IMO it's too much shade (still talking af the neck), she has short hair so light should be able to reach her neck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted May 24, 2012 Share Posted May 24, 2012 (edited) So amidst working on eliza fixes I started a splice contest entry, inspiration was Elysium from SC5. Any cnc would be nice, I'm hating the hair and body atm but I can't see much in the way of fixing them without overhauling it and it no longer being splicey. Damn. My current wip/idea for the splicing comp actually isn't so different from this. Must find a way to make it different now :/ Looks really good though. The hair that goes down the back is rather...smooth. Like it doesn't really look like hair. Edited May 24, 2012 by StrawSloththeSawSlothStraw Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted May 24, 2012 Author Share Posted May 24, 2012 The shoulderpads look better now. I think the neck is a bit to thin, maybe a couple pixels wider would look better. Also IMO it's too much shade (still talking af the neck), she has short hair so light should be able to reach her neck. Yeah, I'm thinking I'll widen it a pixel or 2 and lighten the shading! I think I need to shorten her neck too. Damn. My current wip/idea for the splicing comp actually isn't so different from this. Must find a way to make it different now :/ Looks really good though. The hair that goes down the back is rather...smooth. Like it doesn't really look like hair. Yeah, that's Ismaire's hair (unedited iirc), I probably wont edit the splice further, but down the track I might use the helm as a base for a hack size Elysium, I really want to re-do her(kinda like I did with my ishtar splice, but more heavy duty) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted May 27, 2012 Author Share Posted May 27, 2012 Ok the top two are the fixes, I've got two neck variations, lighter and darker, I dno what I prefer. The two below are just alternative colour schemes to give the undershirt some colour. (Bottom left) Uses a dark navy for the shirt and eyes (Bottom right) uses a navy for the shirt but keeps the blue in the eyes and drops the yellow trim. (Top 2) use a hair tone; dark grey for the shirt and keeps the bright blue for the eyes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted May 27, 2012 Share Posted May 27, 2012 I think the light neck and light eyes seems the best. In other words, upper left. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv Posted May 27, 2012 Share Posted May 27, 2012 Same opinion as L95. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos Aurion Posted May 28, 2012 Share Posted May 28, 2012 I think the upper left one's neck looks the best. Although I prefer the dark blue shirt more than the dark grey because it blend more with the armor Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted May 28, 2012 Share Posted May 28, 2012 top left is my fave The design of the gauntlet is a little odd to me though. It doesn't look like she'd be able to move her wrist properly without getting the back of her hand impaled. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted May 28, 2012 Author Share Posted May 28, 2012 top left is my fave The design of the gauntlet is a little odd to me though. It doesn't look like she'd be able to move her wrist properly without getting the back of her hand impaled. Hmm, I might round it, if it doesn't work, i dont think it'll be too terrible if it stays. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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